nightchildmoonchild [2018-12-19 01:24:03 +0000 UTC]
What a lovely follow up! I can tell you put effort not just into the song, but into the story, itself.
The restaurant scene was well-done. I like the touch of humor about PDA.
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ecwecwecw1 In reply to nightchildmoonchild [2018-12-19 02:38:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm really glad you like it.
I'm really glad you liked the restaurant scene. That took the longest to write.
I did get a laugh out of that.
What did you think of the siblings taking photos of Lincoln and Tabby at the end? Does it make you glad you're an only child like the first chapter?
Thank you for the fav.
If you'd like, could you review and fav it on fanfiction.net as well? www.fanfiction.net/s/13051818/…
I am planning on writing one more part where Lincoln, Tabby, Luna and Sam go on a double date. I haven't started it yet but it should be out next year.
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