Comments: 73
ZCEC In reply to Eeba-ism [2012-07-25 22:25:17 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!! Also, I was happy to see new chapters~! (I actually freaked out and mom was like "What is your problem?!" and I just pointed excitedly at the screen and giggled)
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anissadeanna [2010-05-31 19:47:26 +0000 UTC]
wow, my friend sent me a link to your page to read your stuff. She was write. you are good.
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Pardoxismminant [2010-01-17 18:21:03 +0000 UTC]
I liked^^! The part with Harry reminds me of my friend. I used to live in a place where the library had some clubs and stuff. I went there once, saw my friend, so I went to say hi. This other girl named Katie was there.
Me: Sup, Cully. Hey, Katie.
Cullom: I have something to tell you.
Me/Katie: What?
Cullom: I'm gay.
Me: Okay.
Katie: Nice one, Cullom. But for real, what?
Cullom: I'm serious, I'm gay.
Katie: 324u9q8hrosfhse8rhqewofhsdfn!!!??!
It tells you a lot about some people's personalities.. But anyways, first part reminded me of that.
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Meowis [2009-12-22 04:20:46 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I know your characters now O: Surprisingly, I like Xeeva o.o And I didn't thik I would. I guess things will change through the story xP
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Meowis [2009-12-22 03:07:41 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I'm finally (after who knows how many time of watching) giving myself time to read this = ) I hope you fear my opinion *puts glasses on and sits properly*.
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Meowis In reply to Eeba-ism [2009-12-22 03:37:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I know, I know, I'll try to be gentle *huge somehow disturbing grin*
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LovelyVendetta [2009-11-23 17:47:07 +0000 UTC]
Is there a reference-like sort of reason that this world is no. 42?
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Eeba-ism In reply to LovelyVendetta [2009-11-23 23:40:09 +0000 UTC]
... You've read/seen Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, haven't you? xD
That's why I picked the number 42.. but that's not going to have any significance in the story, it's just a number :3
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LovelyVendetta In reply to Eeba-ism [2009-11-24 01:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Ahaha, yes, I'm quite the fan of the books. They just make me so happy (I mean, really, "the ships hung in the sky much in the same way that bricks don't." It's just so beautiful). And I figured it was no more than a reference; I just found it funny, always being on my forty-two watch.
On an alternate note, I've spent the last few hours of my life reading the remainder of this story-- WORDS CANNOT SUFFICE my deep, DEEP insane love for it. Ferrere is just so adorable, and Cam's wit is so lovely to read. Also I have to admit I've laughed unnecessarily hard at most of the one-liners. xD
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otter-party [2009-10-15 23:37:35 +0000 UTC]
SDKJFHSDKJFH i can't believe i hadn't read this yet. i've just been whoring all of your MC drawings because i love them so much, and now i finally have the STORY behind them. <3333
it's so lovable.
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mathgeek5 [2009-10-09 22:08:27 +0000 UTC]
ok, so I have even finished the chapter yet, but I just have to say right now that my name is Sylvie, and I have never met another Sylvie or read about a character named Sylvie or even met some one who could pronounce my name on their own without prompting, so officially love you for using the name Sylvie. im going to go finish reading now.
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mathgeek5 In reply to Eeba-ism [2010-06-29 01:16:08 +0000 UTC]
Of course!
And maybe that's a record .... don't know how you'd find out though ....
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haius [2009-08-06 05:36:42 +0000 UTC]
DONE! but you are not online... and I do not know your email... and my comments are in red so I can't upload it here... or, for that matter, anywhere I can think of, and have you see.
anyhow. it wasn't hard to get through quickly. you have sucked me into your horrible web of suction and I will never escape ever. also the pressure was sort of on after you finished my sketch so fast.
HOO-RAH. I wish you were online.
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Eeba-ism In reply to haius [2009-08-06 07:56:57 +0000 UTC]
lol I said I'd note you my email and I didn't. I fail. I'll do that now shall I?
I WONDER IF YOU'RE STILL HERE.
It's pretty amazing that I finished that sketch so fast. Please don't hate me if I'm never, ever that quick again.
Yay! Web of suction!
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haius In reply to Eeba-ism [2009-08-06 16:17:53 +0000 UTC]
no, I did in fact manage to pull myself away. IT WAS DIFFICULT. But I did it. Because now, eight hours later, I am at work. Not doing my work. Because MY PRIORITIES ARE IN THE RIGHT PLACES YO.
maybe if I only give you sexytime stuff to draw you'll be the faster artist you've evar been. but that would also be a leeetle bit awkward. but I guess I could post more if that's what you want...
DID YOU LIKE IT? WAS IT GOOD? DID YOU HAVE A GENUINE EMOTIONAL RESPONSE?!!?!?!! BLARGHLBLAGRBALBALRLLRASGABLawkfbqwuiefb
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Eeba-ism In reply to haius [2009-08-07 10:35:01 +0000 UTC]
I did like it! I think I would have liked it a lot more if I knew the characters better and if I'd been RESPONSIBLE and actually read more than the first chapter before I dived right into the sexual angst. Maybe in hindsight you shouldn't point me towards to the sexy-shtuff 8D
That is unless.. like you say.. you think it might drive me to churn out pictures faster. So yeah, I go for sex, but I also go for angst and fluff and I love majorly character-defining moments. I should probably get to know ur peeps better first :3
I also wanted to say.. seeing as this will be the only reply I can make to you tonight as I have to go to bed early and get up at the crack of dawn tomoz.. that I ADORE your beta-reading. You know how I was all honest and told you I was scare-ed? Well. Your editing is amazing, especially the grammatical stuff, because you seem to be post-modern enough to let me have my little "i'm being artsy with the grammar-ness" here and there without CORRECTING everything.. because quite often I intentionally screw with grammar.
WHICH ISN'T TO SAY I'M ACTUALLY ANY GOOD AT GRAMMAR, CUZ I AIN'T.. like.. when you saaaaid....
‘I’ll do that.’ ((COMMA!!!! also, the "he" should not be capitalized. it's part of the same sentence and not a proper noun.)) He said stubbornly as we returned.
I have ALWAYS wondered about that!! Y'see, we just didn't get taught that in school. I think I've done it differently like every single time so I'm sorry for that. Also, I always write "thankyou" as one word. Some people do that, believe it or not.. and I've stuck with it owing to a darling little argument I had with my English teacher about it one time. If I was actually going to try and give this story to a publisher, I might considering going through and changing it.. but in my mind, "thankyou" is one word. Let's not have that fight *smiles pleasantly knowing we'll have it anyway*
Besides, I agree with everything else you've said. No joke, everything. Even those bits where you're like "i know you said you picked this word, but..." because you're RIGHT. *huggles you*
lol just in general I maintain my warning that the starting of MC is dodgy. There are SOOO many plot-holes, try not to trip xD I'm quite confident you'll pick up on them, though, and be like "FIX THIS" and I shall cower and obey.
Any requests for your next sketchlez?
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haius In reply to Eeba-ism [2009-08-09 06:49:01 +0000 UTC]
I don't care enough about thankyou/thank you to argue it. For the first 18 years of my life I spelled awkward with a U - "aukward" - and even after I found out I was wrong, I stubbornly insisted... even still insist occasionally... on spelling it MY way because MY way is the RIGHT way. So, yeah. i might point it out if I forget. or maybe just to be obnoxious. I do that sometimes.
I'm glad you're happy. I've showed your picture off to the few people that I actually can, considering the subject matter, and they were all duly impressed. You can post it if you wish. Or not, if you don't. I was a bit worried you'd be like, "NO! NO! You are WRONG and I refuse to take ANY of your advice as valid so THERE," so I'm glad you're not. I... I try to beta as I would like to be beta'ed, so... yeah. I try not to be too harsh while still being honest? I was sort of hoping you'd be a worse writer, frankly.
In fact, and this brings us to your parting question, I had a bit of a crisis on Friday because i was trying to decide, and then I was thinking about what you mentioned about getting to know the characters.... and I was thinking how your people seem fairly genuine right off the bat, and then I got all angsty because I seem incapable of writing happy people and not having it seem cardboard, and... yeah. But by the end of the day I had remembered how much I love my poor angsty hero, and then forgot my crisis, so it's all good now. Lordy I'm such a GIRL.
The moral of this story is twofold. Firstly, your characterization is spot on. (Did I say that already? Well, it is.) Secondly, I could not decide what part I wanted you to draw next. Thusly, I arrived at a conclusion which may be more than you bargained for, but, whatever. I think I'm just going to send you the whole story and you can skim through and draw whatever strikes your fancy. The danger to this is that you'll be scrolling through and see a phrase like "bare muscles" or "sexual encounters" and be drawn automatically to it, like a moth to a little electric moth-zapper thingy. And also that you'll be like, "Seriously? This girl is nuts! Does she think I'm MADE of time?" but.... yeah. so. I have yet to cut out all of the unfinished/stupid parts, so if you really don't like this idea, you'll have an hour or two to stop me. assuming you're online on a sunday evening... afternoon... whatever it is....
otherwise... FUN FUN FUN!
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haius [2009-08-05 05:11:48 +0000 UTC]
I HAZ START REEDIN TIHS
For some reason i was surprised by 1) it's in first person and 2) the narrator is Camille. I guess maybe since all you draw is the boys I sorta expected, until the "camille's crew" bit, that it would be Iggy, Harry, or... well, actually, no, I didn't expect Farrere to narrate. It's also in a much lighter tone than I expected. Yep. I'm not very far. I'm gonna hafta email it to you when I'm done, I think, because... I was sort of dumb about how I started writing comments... and, yeah, devArt wouldn't like it. So.
BUT this will not be for some time yet. But I AM reading. ...and commenting XP
kidding! kidding. ...sort of.
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Eeba-ism In reply to haius [2009-08-05 06:46:30 +0000 UTC]
UH-OH. We're off to a shaky start xD Cam doesn't get drawn much because I don't really indulge in drawing myself. Farrere would a dreadful narrator, I'm glad we agree. I shall note you mah email :3
I reads ur stuff, too. Read that first chapter-ee bit.. aaand then may have possibly read that "hero looses his innocence" bit because of what you said about it..
But, like, I suck at commenting, so I r drawing u a pichure :3 Will be finished soon. You may not like it xD
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haius In reply to Eeba-ism [2009-08-05 06:53:27 +0000 UTC]
crap, I am a little scared.
I happened to already have figured out which you looked at, because they were the only three with any views marked for today - one view each, and that was you. tis one of the luxuries of being unpopular.
but look here, you. i'll have you know these people always wear clothes. always always always. what's the word? "nevernude". I even tried to draw a nudie pic once and just... couldn't. I almost succeeded, but the cleverly-hiding-the-naughty-bits pose I was aiming for didn't work out and sort of turned into an EVERYTHING view, and... and there's a big blank space. and I honestly can't even imagine anything there. I'm horrible. I should never have tried.
...do you, like, need references or anything? did you find them OK? you have me really worried now.............
Cam == Eeba? srsly? tsk, tsk, marysueage.
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Eeba-ism In reply to haius [2009-08-05 07:10:48 +0000 UTC]
I used to be like that. Then I realised Farrere is, like, the horniest thing since.. um.. something really horny. A rabbit? It's really funny how that honestly does work with his character. I'll stop spoiling things, shall I?
You keep readin' thur and I'll draw mah pichure. Be not afraid, there is no nudity.
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haius In reply to Eeba-ism [2009-08-05 07:23:30 +0000 UTC]
I only thought so, since some months ago you practically begged me to tell you someone naked to draw. but I was already offline so I didn't.
Rabbits are horny, yes. very much so. as are un-neutered male dogs. and bonobos.
I'm not going too read any more today (yesterday?) since I have to go to bed. and also since I'm on the wrong computer. I'll get back on it while I'm taking a break from my #@%#$^^^$#$%#$ data manipulation. FFFFFFFFFFF. My job is SO DAMN INTERESTIN' YEE HAW.
well, good. ...now I'm trying desperately to figure out what I should be wary of............
pfff. look here, I need to take a shower and go to bed... I hafta drive tomorrow, y'know...
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jemmi8Q [2009-06-19 06:45:28 +0000 UTC]
AUGH i finally get around to reading this and i have nothing more interesting and generic to say than its awesome asldkfjlaskdfjlk
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Penutbutterjellymw [2009-02-09 00:42:12 +0000 UTC]
Well, I was supposed to be sleeping, but this just put an end to those plans...*waddles off to read next chapter*
Aw man, I'm already hooked. I love your work...XD
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deadGarland [2008-12-11 03:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Rachel loaned me her account so I could read some Kingdom Hearts comics that she fav'edand this. First off i'd like to apologize to Canada and Australia for whatever she has done to offend you guys. By now she is probably banished from already.Second your story from what i've seen is vey well put together. Your characters are very in depth for a first chapter, and hope you got into further depth. It was slow like all first chapters should be and yet it wasn't just one huge explaination or several complex flashbacks. You are on your way to becoming a wonderful writer. Third, i' going to beat the HELL OUTTA Rachel! Fourth I now cannot, willnot, and neverwill love Harry, Fifth gay people rule!
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deadGarland In reply to Eeba-ism [2008-12-11 04:13:18 +0000 UTC]
Rachel found i was gay b4 any of my other friends did, she never went into a shock or said she did/didn't approve or give me the "i don't care" speech she sent me gay porn as a joke, instead. and she hasn't stopped. She's already emailed a picture that drew of two dudes snogging. And she's already asked if i've gone and looked at you profile (its been 2 days) And the moment i say yes she'll speak about harry i just know it!
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deadGarland In reply to Eeba-ism [2008-12-11 21:34:08 +0000 UTC]
It gets annoying after awhile.
Don't send gays porn! Or anyone else for that matter.
No! Actually i'm fond of Xeeva and her brother.
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Eeba-ism In reply to deadGarland [2008-12-13 00:26:42 +0000 UTC]
Ah, of course you like Xeeva.... xD
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deadGarland [2008-11-08 00:58:52 +0000 UTC]
Wow, great story I agree about the name MC.
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Eeba-ism In reply to deadGarland [2008-11-11 05:00:06 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou for reading!! And yeah, about the name lol... xDD But I think I'm finally getting used to calling it Mottley's Crew.. only took me a whole year >_>
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