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Car-54 [2016-04-03 20:10:13 +0000 UTC]
I agree with bestmeds comments abut the threat. This could have a lot of story potential.
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Eeemia12 In reply to Car-54 [2016-04-03 22:14:41 +0000 UTC]
Well to be honest this was a time passer for me. Occasionally I do update this particular story line but I'm bogged down with college at the moment. However your comment has boosted my confidence and I will give think into the plot more.
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Car-54 In reply to Eeemia12 [2016-04-03 22:50:28 +0000 UTC]
Great to hear it. I'm working on my own Frozen AU story. It's also an attempt to work with an OC, and yes, he will be a romantic interest for Elsa. After all every Frozen writer has to do at least one such story.
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Eeemia12 In reply to Car-54 [2016-04-04 16:58:19 +0000 UTC]
Personally I think it depends on the writer. I'm not one for romance. Sorry
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Car-54 In reply to Eeemia12 [2016-04-04 19:27:44 +0000 UTC]
I seam to have done fairly well with such stories. I need to work on other kinds, action, mystery, drama, etc.
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Eeemia12 In reply to Car-54 [2016-04-04 22:11:03 +0000 UTC]
some people have an ability when it comes to romance. clearly your one of them. sadly I don't believe so much in happy endings or perfect lives. tome life is a continual storm. you have times of great peace and then out of no where the wind hits you and your left to struggle on through no matter how many people you have helping you. if I were to try and write romance it would be the tragic kind with no happy ending.
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Car-54 In reply to Eeemia12 [2016-04-05 00:10:45 +0000 UTC]
I see too much darkness in my work, so in my fiction I want a happy ending. Even if it's not very believable.
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Eeemia12 In reply to Car-54 [2016-04-05 17:18:12 +0000 UTC]
fair enough. I hope your work goes well for you
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bestmed [2016-04-03 03:56:36 +0000 UTC]
I think this was his original plan, romance the queen then, sometime after his coronation, arrange a tragic accident for his "beloved wife"
The other sister fell for him and he adjusted his plan.
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Eeemia12 In reply to bestmed [2016-04-03 08:23:54 +0000 UTC]
I know. I picked up on it during the if only someone loved you scene. Hans said something about Elsa being preferable but no one was getting any where with her.oh and in my plot Hans is merely lording it over her because he's now in charge. Its nothing do with seduction. At least not yet.
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bestmed In reply to Eeemia12 [2016-04-03 16:45:28 +0000 UTC]
I missed that line but it makes sense.
I don't think seduction would work with her. You'd have to have a relationship with her for years before that would work: but a threat might..."You wouldn't' want anything to happen to Anna, would you."
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Eeemia12 [2015-03-15 23:12:45 +0000 UTC]
Well the whole idea behind this was that Hans returns to Arrendale about a year after Elsa was crowned and starts a war. Of course the only reason the army of the Southern Isle wins is because he was fortunate to have captured Anna and Kristoff in a remote village near the beginning of the war. Queen Elsa had directed Kristoff to take Anna into the mountains thinking that she would be safe but unfortunately that was not so.
As you can imagine Prince Hans won by blackmailing Queen Elsa. If she surrendered and handed over Arrendale and the crown Hans would let her and Anna live
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Kamrin19 In reply to Eeemia12 [2015-03-19 02:33:03 +0000 UTC]
I like the idea it actually be cleave I would want to see more of this.
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Eeemia12 In reply to Kamrin19 [2015-03-19 07:51:10 +0000 UTC]
Well when I find time I do more for this story. I just cant promise when the next update will be. 😊
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Kamrin19 In reply to Eeemia12 [2015-03-19 07:53:58 +0000 UTC]
Its cool do you take suggestions?
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Kamrin19 In reply to Eeemia12 [2015-03-19 19:07:05 +0000 UTC]
OK so what if Jack and His little sister lived in Arondell before Jack drowned and time stayed the same in Arondell where Jack was dead three months,but for Jack he's been fine for three thousand years. His sister who loves winther cause she found out Jack makes it headed the Elsa made winter iliggal (by Hans forces)When the moon makes Jack scene he is alowd to show Hans Elsa isn't the only one who can do magic. We can make a final part where Hans bring Elsa up to the mountains to watch hand Kill Anna and Kristoff but Jack entire fears and beats Hans to a pulp. But you might want to make it separate parts. Also don't let Elsa find Jack frost is the same Jack who she knows till he leaves and a finally scene where Jack and Elsa are alone and they talk
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Eeemia12 In reply to Kamrin19 [2015-03-19 22:50:28 +0000 UTC]
ok. you want to use jack, elsa, hans, kristoff and anna in one crossover. r you also saying jacks little sister goes to find elsa.
hans made winter illegal(elsas powers)
not sure about the whole moon makes jack bit but i get that you want jack to show his powers to hans.
also hans wants elsa to watch him kill anna and kristoff but jack shows up and beats hans to a pulp.
elsa's not allowed to know that jack frost is the jack that she knows until the end where there alone and they talk.
if any of this is wrong let me know.
Also never watched rise of the guardians so not so knowing bout jack and his story
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Eeemia12 In reply to Kamrin19 [2015-03-19 22:59:08 +0000 UTC]
Ok. I got this sussed. might take some time as I'm juggling college and work but my evenings are free and at weekends nights too so I'l find time. I send a note when i have uploaded the work
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Kamrin19 [2015-03-15 22:42:05 +0000 UTC]
I have an idea how about Hans force Elsa to band winter. And that what happens until Jack shows up. He resists the law, free's Anna, fight Hans, and save Elsa
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Kamrin19 [2015-03-15 22:40:32 +0000 UTC]
Send Jack Frost in to rescue her.
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