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Published: 2013-08-09 00:11:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 430; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 9
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This is a little something i've been working on tonight but i'm not sure if i like it.. i was thinking about drawing a skull in the smoke to give it more of a message, i might still do that.Any opinions?
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Like I said before. I have no doubts in mind that you can draw. I really love this as well. I have no advice to you. You do have the control
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Interesting that you would say that because it reminded me of her too.. maybe because of the lips and the almond shaped eyes? idk
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I like this! I really like the edge and mood of the photo. IΒ think the harsh outlines and rough shadings adds to the overall feel of the photo. The hand isn't perfect. It's close, but quite there. The proportion and direction is off a bit in the fingers and the hand is too big. But great photo none the less!
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Thanx, i have some practicing to do on hands
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This is great 
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Thanks!
Yeah the hand seems big in comparison because i left out the shoulders.. (which i shouldn't have btw)
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No propblem and be fair it still looks awesome either way
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Nice artwork here, though, her hand is too big and her shoulders are not visible. I suggest drawing hands a little smaller and drawing shoulders when not covered by hair. You could also improve the shading by adding more hues and highlights.
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Thanks! I was thinking the same things.. so i know how it would be better but i just don't know how to get there, maybe i'll try to give it a go with the shoulders.
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Hmm,.. opinions. If it were for me I'd draw a poisonous green glowing skull in the smoke. I think that smoking would really be a waste for the beauty of this sweet girl. Another thing that bugs me about this drawing is that her right shoulder seems to be removed, shouldn't it pop up to the left of her hand? Also, please take some time to give the nails a different color. The eyes also look slightly dull, where you aiming for that? Usually eyes still reflect some light and seem very polished. That being said, I like that the whole piece is a bit sketchy, I like the expression on her face, the way you did the hair and that you have nice subtle shadows and highlights on the skin. I also love the lips.
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Wow yeah thanks! I was thinking the same thing with the skull, i just needed some conformation.. i'm surely going to paint a skull.
The eyes were supposed to be that way
Thanks, that's some great feedback!
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