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Published: 2007-03-10 13:58:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 4192; Favourites: 95; Downloads: 58
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*cringes*edit Mar 11th: whoa... I never expected such positive response to this. I've never thought very highly of my poetry, and this is the first I've written for nearly two years. I'm glad there are people who like it
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My kind of poetry. What interesting imagery! I never knew you could do so much with a visual art... I just copy paste text
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Thank you, sweetie. And hey - nothing wrong with pasting text such as you do. There are many forms of visual poetry. I took a look at your gallery and I think the images adds to the mood of the piece, such as an illustration in a book - if you get my meaning?
Then there are visual poetry where text and image is part of the whole concept and wouldn't work as well without eachother. I think that's what I attempted here.... I'm glad you like it
One of my absolute favorite pieces of visual poetry on dA is very simple - you can take a look at it here: [link]
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wow! that is truly amazing. i love the concept behind it. and i love how you have done the visual poetry with dove written on a dove, and made fall actually look as if it were falling.
this is definetly inspiring, and i sally have to check out your gallery now.
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really great one,
the idea is fantastic ,
& words are amazing
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Hi 
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It's beautiful! And I love the way you've presented it, too!
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you should definitely think more positively of your poetry - it's lovely.
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Thank you - both for the comment and the fav
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The line:
"and that they do not tell of what there she did see"
Seems really awkward but otherwise the poem flows really nicely and I like the way to stucture makes it all disjointed, it reads really nicely
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Thank you
Thank you for the CC, glad you like
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Lovely. 
I generally get bored with poety, but I like the visualization you've provided.
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Yeah - my view on poetry just a few years back wasn't too good either 
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Wow, I'm not entirely sure why but your poetry really moved me - there's just something about it that I can really empathize with. I also absolutely adore the conceptual layout of it.
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Thank you 
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The poetry is a bit wobbly in the middle but the layout and the ending are so strong it more than makes up for it. Truly lovely.
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Yes, the middle part was the one I had the most problems with. I pretty much had the ending and the start and how it should look when I started.
Thank you for the pointer and the fav - I appreciate both very much
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You always manage to hit a nerve.. =\
Glad I am immune
.. almost
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This is stunningly beautiful. I love it very very much it is excellent great job.
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Thank you so much 
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Nice style of poetry and graphic design, your really good.
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I love the composition! And colors! And the subject! And...
... and I'll shut up now. >.>
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Sure thing! I love your artwork! >.<
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By all means, do go on
Thank you
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