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ElectriCookie In reply to ??? [2012-02-25 18:08:06 +0000 UTC]
Nah, she's not flirting with anyone XD; and I did try to do the clothes. But I failed so I decided not to give her clothes. It's not mature content also ;3 I don't like drawing those kinds of things, če ti to želiš lhka, js pa nebom ker smo še mal premejhne za take svari risat, really... xD; and I think she's long enough. Making her longer would make her a little too long, I tried that too c;
Hmm, kje si ta peace dubla? It's a piece of cake
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PampasFox In reply to ??? [2012-02-25 18:05:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for submitting dude
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1SH0T [2012-02-24 19:56:29 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Me Lieks' to critique C: And looks like you want one soo;; xD
I liked your idea, and your hard work but when I saw " 60 layers " I was like, wtf? I'm going to tell you some sutff for your improvement, 'cuz that's what critiques are for xD ;; SO First you really should use some references to pratice, and then when you are better at it you can do without them ~ Otherwise you will always draw the same mistakes. ( believe me ... .__.' ) The backgound looks really random and looks like you didn't give damn at it, I don't care too so I won't tell anything... e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/>
THE SHADING, it's a hard thing to control. I don't know where the light is coming from and and the shading is random, you spoted in the places you tought it would look better, for example: I don't know if the right wing is behind her or just extended to the right, for me it looks both, and I think that's a bit impossible xD
Here's a tip, with the colour of the light in the background, foran example, a sunset shade your character with a light orange or red colour ( the colour you want in the sunset ) and then make it darker in the dakr spots, you have to pay attention to the light. Same thing in the light shading, remember: sometimes you don't even to do it! ( rare cases ) ;;
For me the scales look weired... I think they would look better a bit blured or tranparent, remember: never make them black or white, make them with a lighter or darker colour of the skin. Also make it under the shading layer, it will look very nice. ^^
Sooo~ there ya go. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>
Peace e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Peace"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Pringles"/>
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ElectriCookie In reply to 1SH0T [2012-02-24 20:18:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique! It's very appreciated ^^
So about the layers - I know right, I used 60 layers because I like drawing things on different layers. Example, the eye. I color the base, white color on one layer. Then I use the next layer for the iris. Again, I create another layer for the pupil, and again another layer for the shine (and one for shading too xD). It makes the whole thing come out better with different layers, at least that's how I think.
Ah yes, the shading. I'm not too good at it, I have to admit. I try to make it realistic and I draw the lines of the light (where it's coming from). I'm just not good at it, but I practise.
And the scales, the possible hardest thing in the whole picture besides the lineart and BG. I used the darker color than the skin tone, not a black one. I never use black with scales, just a white with the shine. And I also did lower the opacity for the scales, both with shine.
The BG. I actually did put effort into it, I did give a damn. But I'm not good at making them at all. I'm practising tough, thinking of ideas. I'm very bad when it comes to 'what should the BG be'. Or even for the pose! I'm really not good at it. There's so many things I have to improve in Dx
Anyway, thank you very much for the critique! ^^
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1SH0T In reply to ElectriCookie [2012-02-24 20:28:45 +0000 UTC]
Lol understandeble xD
I only use 5 for a picture like this. I hate layers /shot
good luck, and no probz! x3
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ArockDino [2018-09-30 12:55:11 +0000 UTC]
looks like a wooden dragones
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PampasFox [2012-02-23 13:26:50 +0000 UTC]
BTW the title is nice gurl >8U
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ElectriCookie In reply to PampasFox [2012-02-23 13:31:15 +0000 UTC]
NAH it's lame XD
mal sm tecna ves ._.; oprosti mi ;n;
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Lord-DracoDraconis [2012-02-23 03:35:13 +0000 UTC]
Nice! sweet character you have there!
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DracoAndGrace [2012-02-22 21:42:19 +0000 UTC]
Very nice job.
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ElectriCookie In reply to xSpickeyx [2012-02-22 20:27:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot! Meh I suck at anthros actually Dx
It's not small. It's distance c:
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ElectriCookie In reply to xSpickeyx [2012-02-22 20:39:23 +0000 UTC]
Yea but you use lines right? Well I don't. c:
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xSpickeyx In reply to ElectriCookie [2012-02-22 20:43:02 +0000 UTC]
yeah XD but not always for fur I only draw with normal pensil and zoom XD
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Nyphr [2012-02-22 17:05:46 +0000 UTC]
Impressive.
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