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ElfMuse — My Eden
Published: 2008-04-16 15:10:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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Description Sitting in my garden,
breathing the fresh air.

Nowhere in my mind,
thoughts of despair.

As the birds and the bee's,
I feel free,

My animal instinct I release

Thwirling and spinning,
singing and shouting.

My body is tired,
I rest my head,
My voice is raw,
Too much was said?

The grass bends as I lay myself down,
never was it mown.

I knitted myself a crown of flowers,
I'm not wearing much,
The sun touches my skin,
like the warmth here within.

The gentle breeze of northern wind
blowing in my garden,supplying the fresh air,
A natural airco,Sunburns everywhere.

A gentle touch,a sting of pain.
Too much sun,red skin i gain.

As the evening falls,the sun goes to sleep,
I'm preparing my bed for my deep mesmerizing sleep.

Lady moon has spread her veil,
my garden looks peacefully and quiet,
Tomorrow I shall start a riot?
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Comments: 10

SamhraVale [2008-06-18 01:54:05 +0000 UTC]

Aww. I like this one. It has an impish sort of feeling to it. Heh. Like the mischievousness of a child. Great job!

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ElfMuse In reply to SamhraVale [2008-06-18 07:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank You,
I must agree
Glad you like it ^^

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ErilisVampyre [2008-06-01 19:56:55 +0000 UTC]

*smile* I like the outcome.

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ElfMuse In reply to ErilisVampyre [2008-06-02 11:29:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-05-31 06:30:25 +0000 UTC]

start a riot!!
i love your writing style!
you are a very natural poet

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ElfMuse In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-05-31 13:44:36 +0000 UTC]

thx

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to ElfMuse [2008-05-31 17:07:56 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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ElfMuse In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2008-06-02 11:30:56 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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ItsxMagik [2008-04-16 20:16:45 +0000 UTC]

This is truly an amazing poem.

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ElfMuse In reply to ItsxMagik [2008-04-17 10:16:45 +0000 UTC]

thx

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