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MinaCarolina [2010-10-10 02:21:53 +0000 UTC]
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WOOOOOOO EXTREMELY LATE CRITIQUE. Okay Muff, first of all, the first thing that caught my attention was the fact that you did an absolutely amazing job with the perspective on his face. You did a great job capturing his overall face features and that intimidating look of his character. Also, the leaf on his head looks great. But I noticed a few things you could improve a little on. (and I know this is an old piece, but it can't hurt to give you some advice you maybe already figured out yourself, right? B'D) First off, the leaf on his head. The perspective is alright, but it's hard to tell whether it's really big or whether it's supposed to be flying behind him like a scarf. The other thing; that leaf that's coming off of his right arm. It would appear that seeing it like that would suggest that his other arm is just stiff against his body, and it looks a tad awkward. The last and most important thing to me; THE LEGS. At first glance, they look fine; but if you take a moment to look at them, you realize it's hard to tell what he's doing. He could be running, and I think that's what you intended to do with them, but it look kind of awkward, you know? Also, his left foot looks like it could be facing frontwards OR backwards. To be fair, I know this type of perspective is quite difficult to draw, but I think you did a great job with it. Just some tips for next time. Yup.
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I'mout~ <3
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MinaCarolina In reply to elizabysmal [2010-10-10 14:53:49 +0000 UTC]
Ah, okay. Forgive me on those parts. X'D
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elizabysmal In reply to MinaCarolina [2010-10-10 17:15:23 +0000 UTC]
Naw, no need to apologize for looking out for me. <3
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elizabysmal In reply to MinaCarolina [2010-10-10 17:20:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, because like, three people told me that it looked like Muff was fapping. XD
That wasn't my intention, but after so many people told me, I couldn't help but think of it as dirty, so I'm gonna make another one after I think of a new idea. XDD
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MinaCarolina In reply to elizabysmal [2010-10-10 17:32:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I saw two of those comments. X'D
I thought it looked fine. D:
WHAT GOES THROUGH CHILDREN'S MINDS THESE DAYS? SRSLY.
MAKE A NEGA-MUFF ICON FOR HALLOWEEN *shot*
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flameowl [2012-03-17 01:47:27 +0000 UTC]
i <3 grovile!!!
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Grovyle-The-Thief [2010-11-03 20:49:03 +0000 UTC]
"Hmph...Very good... Captured my figure quite well...Very good...~" Grovyle nods, grinning just a tiny bit.
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DottyFen [2010-08-03 09:43:26 +0000 UTC]
What's this? POGEYMANZ!? o:
Maybe I should write a critique... But I'd probably botch it somehow. :c
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TaserTricks [2010-07-30 19:13:45 +0000 UTC]
This just enhances your epicness, Muff. How epically epic.
But then, you be Muff. Everything you do is epicness.
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eons4ever44 [2010-07-30 17:00:48 +0000 UTC]
EPIC. That's all that crosses my mind right now.
GROVYLE RULES!! 8D Grovyle is one of my fav characters in PMD, he's so EPIC!! (The word "EPIC" is EPIC!!)
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WOOP-DE-DE-DOO [2010-07-25 04:17:38 +0000 UTC]
You are veryindeed correct,
THIS IS SO BADASS.
That angle really does a well-worth number on this already-awesome piece...I wish I could create bone structure like that. D':
B-but, thiiiiiiiiiiiiis. YES. Nothing you make is disgustingly kawaii, though. No arguments. D|<
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Kestrill [2010-07-21 09:30:53 +0000 UTC]
That's so kawaii desuuu cuteeee *shot*
not really <3 it looks badass indeed X33
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shadenightfox [2010-07-21 00:31:54 +0000 UTC]
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF. I DIED. BECAUSE MY OVARIES EXPLODED WITH THE SEXY. THE. SEXY.
I.
DIED.
i hope you're happy.
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BalumixBiffle [2010-07-20 20:07:25 +0000 UTC]
ASKLJKNFJSBEGT
THIS, IS WHY GROVYLE IS ONE OF MY 46 HUSBANDS. BECAUSE OF YOU, MUFF.
Epic Grovyle is epic, and I will steal him away from you for some RAEEEEEP.
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Ripplespirit [2010-07-20 15:59:26 +0000 UTC]
BADASSSSSSSSSSSSSS~~~~
~Leafy
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Amberheart123 [2010-07-20 15:25:35 +0000 UTC]
I believe you succeded in the badass-ness factor. I especially like the coloring on this one, how it was sort of lighter.
Overall, GOOD JOB.
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burdensdown [2010-07-20 13:59:36 +0000 UTC]
just excellent
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GrovyleFangirl1997 [2010-07-20 12:51:46 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME GROVYLE WHY MUST YOU BE SO AWESOME
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Flame-Shadow [2010-07-20 12:36:29 +0000 UTC]
OMG!! SO KAWAII
Lol, no. Pretty cool.
He's a little awkwardly posed, though, especially in the legs/feet. And the shading of his body indicates that the time gear is the light source, yet most of the leafy appendages are showing another light source to be from something else...almost from a camera flash. XD
I like your determination to draw other styles (as apart from 'cute'). With more practice, you might see yourself as more than an "artist".
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silverhannah42095 [2010-07-20 11:44:13 +0000 UTC]
AHHHH too badass to handle! And the backstory was a nice touch. And I also like the slightly glowy effects around the Time Gear.
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Shadowed-Fang [2010-07-20 11:29:39 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE THIS EVEN THOUGH I WISH TO KILL GROVYLE WITH FIRE >D
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Dragonknight575 [2010-07-20 05:44:26 +0000 UTC]
What an awesome story, and pic. X3
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DeathToSquishies [2010-07-20 05:28:55 +0000 UTC]
How would you feel if I told you this was still cute? :U
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somarrow [2010-07-20 05:19:04 +0000 UTC]
O.M.G. This is amazing. Great job muffy!
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ColorSpectrums [2010-07-20 05:01:08 +0000 UTC]
AHHHHHH G-GROVYLEEEE EEHEHE~ HE IS SO CUTE YET
EPIC AT THE SAME TIMEEEE FKDGFDGFD WHYYYY *STEALS AND TAKES HIM HOME*
>D You can sit next to my GROVYLE PLUSHIE. *yes I have one :'D I'm that much of a fangirl.
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tokyashu [2010-07-20 05:01:01 +0000 UTC]
Grovyle indeed looks badass in this picture, and not disgustingly kawaii. (or so to say in your words)
GROVYLE YOU TRICKSY THIEF YOU
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ManEating-Babies [2010-07-20 04:50:03 +0000 UTC]
fffff how do u make tiny writing?? I LOVE IT. IT'S LIKE OOMPA LOOMPA WRITING D<
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elizabysmal In reply to ManEating-Babies [2010-07-20 04:52:43 +0000 UTC]
I LOL'D
You type < sub > without the spaces. To make the small print go away you type sub > without the spaces.
AND THAT'S IT MAN LOL
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TheShadowsDawn [2010-07-20 04:49:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow. That is the most epic Grovyle ever. Wonderful job, Muff.
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elizabysmal In reply to TheShadowsDawn [2010-07-20 04:50:44 +0000 UTC]
Shucks, man, you're making me all blushy and stuff. :'D
Thank you so much. <3
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jazz4521 [2010-07-20 04:45:03 +0000 UTC]
ITS A GROVYLE!!!
I CHOOSE YOU PIKACHU!!!
IT BE MY ARCH NEMESIS
GO PIKACHU USE VOLT TACKLE NOW!!!
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