Comments: 156
Christine992 [2016-12-20 20:43:41 +0000 UTC]
This is incredible! Did you do this yourself?
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utriv [2015-09-29 08:54:59 +0000 UTC]
What a great poem!
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St-Aloysius [2015-08-13 18:25:26 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic! The rhythm is on fire and the creativity is endless.
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VisionCat12345 [2015-02-01 16:01:19 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. I like how you connected them all and made stepmother likeable.
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MerRE-art [2014-01-09 16:57:46 +0000 UTC]
fascinating!!!! i love it!
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ella-vere In reply to wispy-blue [2013-08-17 03:37:30 +0000 UTC]
oh my goodness, i'm so flattered!! thank you so much! <3
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Autumn-Equinox [2012-04-12 22:46:38 +0000 UTC]
So cleverly thought out, and such an enjoyable read! I especially like the singsong feel to this- excellent work!
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JaesunMichele [2012-04-11 13:32:38 +0000 UTC]
i think you would love the tv show 'once upon a time'
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Comorbidity [2012-03-15 16:11:28 +0000 UTC]
I love this--Ive read it so many times!!
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forestdreamz [2012-03-09 04:50:51 +0000 UTC]
You deserve your DD. Good job!
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iamsarahjo [2012-03-08 00:34:43 +0000 UTC]
wow. this is epic.
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aluckystar [2012-03-03 18:14:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I really liked this.
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Lottie-Girl [2012-01-30 22:11:38 +0000 UTC]
I like your point of view, great poem.
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izzylubb [2012-01-25 02:00:05 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed this!
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ryoko-mitsirughi [2012-01-24 06:06:31 +0000 UTC]
This is a piece, that without dispute, is quite deserving of a DD. I have never been so enchanted for the tale of a villain before as I have been now with your literature. I mean I have with visual aides but that doesn't require much cognitive thinking to understand the tale being spun. I am absolutely in love with this literary jewel. Bravo and I cannot wait to see more of this.
I know I am not a professional orator, but I am enthralled by this piece that I would hope you can allow me to give it a spoken voice. I post all my orations on my youtube site: [link] You are more then welcome to check it out if you would like before making a decision. I would be honored if given a chance to orate this but I would hold no grudge if you said no.
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brassteeth [2012-01-24 04:20:48 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant. Congratulations.
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EverlastingCelestial [2012-01-24 03:54:27 +0000 UTC]
This amazing! A beautiful and heartbreaking take on an "evil" woman, notorious throughout all fairy tales.
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hawktakesflight [2012-01-24 03:53:14 +0000 UTC]
Clever, very clever. Love how you snake in and out of different tales, especialyl with Hansel and Gretel - you don't say exactly which tale they're in till a good halfway through the stanza. Very engaging read -
Congratulations on your DD!
hawk
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TheFebruaryHorse [2012-01-24 03:16:12 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing and so wonderful to read! You did very well on this. I selfishly wished it would go on, though! Congrats, and keep writing!
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rosuto-kia [2012-01-24 02:55:11 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE IT! It potrays villians the way I see them, evil with their reasons.
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WorkerBees [2012-01-24 02:41:34 +0000 UTC]
this is way cool. you caputred the villain and all of their aspects pefectly!
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ThatDeadGirl [2012-01-24 02:39:38 +0000 UTC]
This is really amazing and beautiful. I love how the wicked stepmother rides the ribbon of her story through all the familiar tales. Artfully done.
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92DeAdLoCk [2012-01-24 02:19:33 +0000 UTC]
Great use of words and the links between each verse is great
awesome piece loved reading it
No one wants to be a villain but it's the great villain that makes a great story!
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WickedSenses [2012-01-24 02:04:59 +0000 UTC]
This is what true literature is! This work is AMAZING! Congrats on your well deserved Daily Deviation!
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girlnextdoor61 [2012-01-24 02:03:54 +0000 UTC]
I love this, so, so, so very much!
Brilliantly written, and who doesn't love a good fairytale-especially one as this!
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xDeadxNxGonex [2012-01-24 02:01:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow....This is genius! I love reading inventive literature, and this surely is that and so much more! It has rhythm, grace, wonderfully flowing words, and an overall awesome feel after reading it! A toast of congratulations is definitely deserved here!
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spooningthefrog [2012-01-24 01:49:05 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This is amazing~ I love how you brought different fairy tales together to create a story. The twist in how the story is told is truly remarkable. This is one of the most creative writing pieces i have seen here on dA, I'm really glad i came across this.
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kayleero [2012-01-24 01:31:21 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD, this is a great poem and it is well deserved!
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Puppylove20007 [2012-01-24 00:42:07 +0000 UTC]
I love how this shows the stepmother's point of view on what happened. Honestly, all the fairy tales told us was that she was wicked and cruel. This brings a whole new light to the story! Magnificent!
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