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Ellen-Souler — Grave Roses
Published: 2013-04-24 15:13:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2181; Favourites: 129; Downloads: 1
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Description Don't rest roses on my grave,

trail of bouquet that you pave.

Vibrant death, ignorantly conveyed,

leading too, my buried cave.  

What flowers, my love, have you brought today?

Daises?

Soil in dead eyes, all to grainy.

Tulips?

Memory waning, soon to forget.

Poppies?

A bold quartet, pedals of debt.

Ah, a rose?

Don't mask your woe, we both know,

I am gone, grown so cold.

Fading marrow, in my bones.

Corpse alone, parted soul.

May I love, be so bold?

Do not,

let your heart bleed,

forever sorrow, forever grieve.  

Let me be.

And on my grave, let grow weeds.

Don't rest roses on my grave.
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Comments: 94

Ellen-Souler In reply to ??? [2013-05-26 19:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow thank you that's a comment I didn't expect :3

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KJayJay97 In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-05-27 02:57:23 +0000 UTC]

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RobbersDen [2013-05-15 02:33:16 +0000 UTC]

This is my favorite poem...Would you mind if I announce it at a con? I plan to say "And now a poem, written by Lady Ellen Souler." I'm in a costume contest and I need some inspiration to help me!

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Ellen-Souler In reply to RobbersDen [2013-05-15 02:35:18 +0000 UTC]

I would love that! But what con? And lady ellen souler? Oh Ellen Souler is my OC..he's a fox anthro I prefer him too things and he is my anit-hero for a book i'm writting. But are you serious?

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RobbersDen In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-05-15 02:37:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I'm serious. I can say any sort of name you want. I was assuming you were a girl, but heh. XD

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Ellen-Souler In reply to RobbersDen [2013-05-15 02:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Nope i'm a male. And what con do you speak of? I'm excited

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RobbersDen In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-05-15 02:41:56 +0000 UTC]

I find it simply amazing that a male wrote such a delicate and inspiring poem. And Denver Comic con, I'm going as Ciel Phantomhive who fits the poem perfectly.~

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Ellen-Souler In reply to RobbersDen [2013-05-15 02:45:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm very feminine actually and I pride that, In fact I usually help people all the time, do psychology work..love everyone. But that is some news though I think I know Dever comic con quite well but if you do read it off that is just an honor! And if you do remember just say it was by Ellen, and it seems rude to ask to tell them where the poem came from heh..but thank you

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RobbersDen In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-05-15 02:50:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you're an artist who is proud of themself! That is a trait I rarely see and that makes you even more of an inspiration. I can assure you I will do whatever you say to make you happy and dedicate this to you. If anyone asks, I'll simply say it's a masterpiece written by someone who deserves to be better known

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Ellen-Souler In reply to RobbersDen [2013-05-15 02:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh now your just spoiling me. But thank you this feels great.

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RobbersDen In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-05-15 02:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I try to make my inspirations happy. >w< And no problem, this is one of my favorite poems so I couldn't resist

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Ellen-Souler In reply to RobbersDen [2013-05-15 02:57:16 +0000 UTC]

well once last time thank you and I hope you enjoy reading it off. I always wanted to do open mic poetry

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talkingcamara [2013-04-29 01:08:25 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful... I think weeds on my grave might be okay. 'cause my lawn is just weeds, so it would remind me of home x3 [And since plants come to my house to die.]

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Ellen-Souler In reply to talkingcamara [2013-04-29 01:11:36 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it thank you

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haannaah-the-cupcake [2013-04-26 19:19:35 +0000 UTC]

you're so talented, i adore your poetry!

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Ellen-Souler In reply to haannaah-the-cupcake [2013-04-26 23:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Hey! Thanks for that comment that was kind ^^ thanks

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haannaah-the-cupcake In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-27 16:23:53 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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QuirkyBrainiac [2013-04-25 21:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Another great piece

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Ellen-Souler In reply to QuirkyBrainiac [2013-04-25 21:56:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you this one acutally kinda got out there I noticed :3

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QuirkyBrainiac In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-25 22:37:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but there lies the beauty of it

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Ellen-Souler In reply to QuirkyBrainiac [2013-04-25 23:31:12 +0000 UTC]

You have anything new yet?

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QuirkyBrainiac In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-26 00:56:22 +0000 UTC]

Inspiration hasn't struck yet.

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Ellen-Souler In reply to QuirkyBrainiac [2013-04-26 00:59:49 +0000 UTC]

I think you should just go for it...you don't need inspiration you just need to flow out any word you can...your thoughts land words lead to inspriation you know

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QuirkyBrainiac In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-26 01:41:56 +0000 UTC]

True... but life has been stressful enough and my mind has been blank and numb. When something comes, I will write.

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Ellen-Souler In reply to QuirkyBrainiac [2013-04-26 01:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Stress? I'm a social worker you know, been doing it for 5 years or so you can always note me i'm a friend with ears you know. Big floopy kudu ears

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QuirkyBrainiac In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-26 02:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :') Truly, thank you. I really appreciate it, and will always keep that in mind And you have adorable floppy kudu ears hehe

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Ellen-Souler In reply to QuirkyBrainiac [2013-04-26 02:32:50 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks and really, anytime if you need to note me do so. And i'd really like to see new work

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QuirkyBrainiac In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-26 04:50:27 +0000 UTC]

Always! Again, thank you, I'll definitely keep that, and you, in mind ^_^ I know I know I knowwwww haha. I'm not the speediest at uploading; sue me I don't really have any poems to upload at the moment. The only things are some pictures and past school essays XD

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QuirkyBrainiac In reply to QuirkyBrainiac [2013-04-26 04:52:27 +0000 UTC]

I also like to keep pieces up for a while, and when I know they're not getting any new views, favs, or comments for a long time, then I add something new. I like to give each piece a fair shelf life

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starnoyume [2013-04-25 12:18:31 +0000 UTC]

(FLOWERS are) really beautiful!

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Ellen-Souler In reply to starnoyume [2013-04-25 19:08:16 +0000 UTC]

that they can be :3

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xxT0MM3Yxx [2013-04-25 10:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Good work

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Ellen-Souler In reply to xxT0MM3Yxx [2013-04-25 19:07:57 +0000 UTC]

thank ya

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YourNinthLife [2013-04-25 03:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, this is absolutely goregous! ;u; The rhymes, the rythm, the words used, the concept- everything! You are so brilliant!

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Ellen-Souler In reply to YourNinthLife [2013-04-25 03:32:21 +0000 UTC]

oh wow! Haha thanks, I don't think so but at least others do! I'm glad you liked it

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YourNinthLife In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-25 03:53:20 +0000 UTC]

Nope, it's amazing.
Keep up your writing, you're very talented!~

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Ellen-Souler In reply to YourNinthLife [2013-04-25 04:03:34 +0000 UTC]

That's too kind thank you.

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YourNinthLife In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-27 02:37:13 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.~ ^^

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Crystal4006 [2013-04-25 02:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant! I love it!

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Ellen-Souler In reply to Crystal4006 [2013-04-25 02:39:28 +0000 UTC]

^^ thx

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Crystal4006 In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-25 02:50:05 +0000 UTC]

No problem and also, your icon is adorable!!!!! I love it too!

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Ellen-Souler In reply to Crystal4006 [2013-04-25 03:00:36 +0000 UTC]

That's my fursona it's a Kudu, kinda rare big horned creature, had my author tag try to look like it but thank you!!

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Crystal4006 In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-25 03:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! I've seen Kudu at the zoo! They're amazing creatures

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Ellen-Souler In reply to Crystal4006 [2013-04-25 03:08:35 +0000 UTC]

UGH our zoo has none :c

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Crystal4006 In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-25 03:28:08 +0000 UTC]

That sucks! I'm glad mine does, what state are u if u don't me asking?

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Ellen-Souler In reply to Crystal4006 [2013-04-25 03:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I wouldn't tell in open messages of course but in notes

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Crystal4006 In reply to Ellen-Souler [2013-04-25 04:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Okay than, would u mind sending me a note? I'm just curious

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Pickled-Herring [2013-04-25 01:58:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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Ellen-Souler In reply to Pickled-Herring [2013-04-25 02:03:12 +0000 UTC]

:3

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dmxn8a [2013-04-25 01:27:17 +0000 UTC]

One of the only poems worth reading on here

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