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ElysianReverie — Surreal Shadows
Published: 2008-04-25 23:27:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description I pound down the steps
Into the depths
That house the eyes in my mind.
I've found a greater truth here
That resides in the moving lips
And voiceless tongues
that reminisce of western days
Drawn in the smoke
They are dreaming
unrecognizable shapes
I have no words for this
and neither do they
And stepping into sleep
I am drawn, too
but not in this chromosphere,
no,
I am too dull for that
I am grey
The only one in a see of impressions
Despairing of colors
I am drowned out
I am breathing teal skies
Revitalizing with a new drug
To prepare me for
A much more permanent predicament.
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Comments: 4

Sandost [2008-05-09 22:38:33 +0000 UTC]

ah, this is a very good poem.

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ElysianReverie In reply to Sandost [2008-05-09 22:42:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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achusky [2008-04-30 12:45:28 +0000 UTC]

I never had the skill to write poetry. I like what you wrote.

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ElysianReverie In reply to achusky [2008-04-30 19:27:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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