Comments: 15
LeviathanDemon [2009-11-28 03:58:54 +0000 UTC]
....it's the expression that makes it....I'm not gonna be able to sleep now D8
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SetsunaNoroi [2009-11-09 08:24:54 +0000 UTC]
SHIV FROM ABOVE!
lol Cute.
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InsomniacDreema [2007-06-22 00:55:14 +0000 UTC]
i used to love this show i havent seen it in so long i forgot most of the villains but seeing this picture reminded me a bit i like the expression probly would scare the crap outta any young hero to look up and see that pouncin on you
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MsManga [2005-08-01 04:30:01 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Shiv's awesome. Such a funny little guy...I like what you did with him, here. Love the pretty colors and the composition...nice job!
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ClearTranquil [2005-06-27 00:43:20 +0000 UTC]
You said critique welcome, so I'm going to have a go at it.
Do you use guidelines, vanishing points, etc for your perspective? I know it might seem kind of amateurish, but it'd help a lot. You might want to try foreshortening a little more, too. I'm assuming that you wanted to try making it seem as though Shiv is jumping down and towards the viewer, but you'll need a bit more distortion for the illusion to work. It's just not doing it for me.
His head seems to be viewed straight-on. Normally, at a dynamic angle, you'd get a sort of up-the-nose shot, probably with him looking down. Assuming, of course, that his neck is not bent downwards, and I don't see why such an experienced jumper would do that, really. It's an awkward position. This might be part of the reason why I can't get into the angle.
Where is your light source? I can't really pick one out for the shading on the figure, and his arms emit a glow, too, don't they? You might want to account for that.
Also, I invoke Ebert's Law. I could not do half as good as this, I swear.
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skibalovesya [2005-05-17 01:26:11 +0000 UTC]
SQUEE!!! *gives you a bag of cheese doodles* Shiv = less than three. :-P
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emif In reply to skibalovesya [2005-05-17 12:42:10 +0000 UTC]
:eats as many cheese doodlers as she pleases:
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zahra [2005-05-15 01:29:41 +0000 UTC]
I think you did an awesome job :3 His face is so maniac and in character, and the pose is very dynamic.
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flynfreako [2005-05-14 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]
lmao! awesome expression XDD
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