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The first part of another crazy but wonderful comic idea presented by Miss Nightingale!. However, this is no usual paneling of comics but one that is both intriguing and original! Do let us know what you think!

She had given thought to inspiring to become a manga artist, so all criticism is appreciated! No deterioration(s) of soul, if you please!

(18-23,Part 2)
Part 1: emmanightingale.deviantart.com…

Aioshi:"Setting/Plot: The character here is a bell-using mage visiting a bell factory to see how a custom order is going. She starts off on a high up catwalk over seeing the various conveyor belts making different sized bells like her own. (Doesn't really need this level of super detail; just helping you visualize.)

Panels:

1- Character on the catwalk, playfully ringing her hand bells to match the sounds of the factory and generally being in a good mood.

2- A zoom panel showing her stepping on a bit of broken metal a causing a loud *snap*.

3- The character falling straight down; the panel having broken and fallen out underneath her. Dropping her hand bells in the process.

4- The character just about to fall onto one of the conveyor belts. She's just above a giant version (in total the bell's slightly under knee height for her) of her hand bell; only it has no central shaft. Instead a hole in the middle is open and it's obvious that's where one of her legs is going to land.

5- A successful landing much to the relief of the character. XD However one of her legs fell through the hole; which is super tightly gripped around the top of her calf, just below the knee. A *shoop* type sound effect coming from near the hole to indicate an air-tight seal being made.

6- Character spotting her hand bells nearby and trying to pull her leg out to reach them; only to find out in surprise that it won't budge.

7- Zoom in of her knee, showing it wriggling around and not coming out despite her efforts.

8- Character yanking hard on her leg, a split panel zoom-in showing the seal breaking a bit with a *pop* and her leg being raised just a bit.

9- Another split panel of her leg being yanked right back into the bell with the split being her shocked face.

10- An internal view of the bell showing a large sphere of blue gel in the center of the bell. Her foot is caught ankle deep in this gel.

11- Another internal view of another pull attempt, we see the foot slightly rise and the gel stretch a little bit; basically implying that on top of the air-seal her foot's glued to the conveyer belt. Explaining why this trap is so hard to deal with.

12- Character looking down the belt in a scared panel; she can see the other bells just ahead are getting their shafts inserted by a mechanical arm; meaning she'll be in real trouble if she can't get out soon.

13- A very strong pull attempt on her part; motion indicating she's trying to pull multiple times with her leg getting tugged back each time.

14- Character glaring at the bell and preparing for one last solid yank, a split panel showing her pulling on her leg as hard as possible.

15- An inside view of the bell during this tug; the sphere doesn't stretch but is still attached to her foot. It has come off the belt and is rising with her foot; a loud *rip* making us think she's managed to pull it free of the belt (which she has; but it has a twist).

16- A loud *DONG!* happens as her foot is stopped just short of being pulled out. The character is obvious very O.O faced thinking pretty much "The hell just happened?"

17- An inside view of the bell again, with motion implying the character is trying multiple times to pull her foot out. The blue sphere is now completely solid and every time it hits the bell top (it's slightly too big to pull through) a softer *Dong* Dong* *Dong* happens since she's banging it into the bell.

However you can sell tiny pieces of the sphere breaking off with each pull.

18- Still tugging, from a side view you can see the bell just behind her being staked. She knows it's her turn next so panic is at an all time high.

19- With one final tug she gets her foot out (a much smaller but still there blue sphere still around her foot).

20- The character grabs her bells and leaps off the belt. Simply wanting to be out of harms way.

21- Again the character lands safely and breaths a sigh of relief. A split panel turning this soon into a smilies/icon_eek.gif reaction with a *tug* *tug* coming from below.

22- The character is on another conveyor belt; both feet caught in this kind of trap. Basically it's a mold for smaller bells. XD

23- The final panel is of her basically trying to yank her legs around and get free of the molds."

Description
The first part of another crazy but wonderful comic idea presented by Miss Nightingale!. However, this is no usual paneling of comics but one that is both intriguing and original! Do let us know what you think!

She had given thought to inspiring to become a manga artist, so all criticism is appreciated! No deterioration(s) of soul, if you please!

(18-23,Part 2)
Part 1: emmanightingale.deviantart.com…

Aioshi:"Setting/Plot: The character here is a bell-using mage visiting a bell factory to see how a custom order is going. She starts off on a high up catwalk over seeing the various conveyor belts making different sized bells like her own. (Doesn't really need this level of super detail; just helping you visualize.)

Panels:

1- Character on the catwalk, playfully ringing her hand bells to match the sounds of the factory and generally being in a good mood.

2- A zoom panel showing her stepping on a bit of broken metal a causing a loud *snap*.

3- The character falling straight down; the panel having broken and fallen out underneath her. Dropping her hand bells in the process.

4- The character just about to fall onto one of the conveyor belts. She's just above a giant version (in total the bell's slightly under knee height for her) of her hand bell; only it has no central shaft. Instead a hole in the middle is open and it's obvious that's where one of her legs is going to land.

5- A successful landing much to the relief of the character. XD However one of her legs fell through the hole; which is super tightly gripped around the top of her calf, just below the knee. A *shoop* type sound effect coming from near the hole to indicate an air-tight seal being made.

6- Character spotting her hand bells nearby and trying to pull her leg out to reach them; only to find out in surprise that it won't budge.

7- Zoom in of her knee, showing it wriggling around and not coming out despite her efforts.

8- Character yanking hard on her leg, a split panel zoom-in showing the seal breaking a bit with a *pop* and her leg being raised just a bit.

9- Another split panel of her leg being yanked right back into the bell with the split being her shocked face.

10- An internal view of the bell showing a large sphere of blue gel in the center of the bell. Her foot is caught ankle deep in this gel.

11- Another internal view of another pull attempt, we see the foot slightly rise and the gel stretch a little bit; basically implying that on top of the air-seal her foot's glued to the conveyer belt. Explaining why this trap is so hard to deal with.

12- Character looking down the belt in a scared panel; she can see the other bells just ahead are getting their shafts inserted by a mechanical arm; meaning she'll be in real trouble if she can't get out soon.

13- A very strong pull attempt on her part; motion indicating she's trying to pull multiple times with her leg getting tugged back each time.

14- Character glaring at the bell and preparing for one last solid yank, a split panel showing her pulling on her leg as hard as possible.

15- An inside view of the bell during this tug; the sphere doesn't stretch but is still attached to her foot. It has come off the belt and is rising with her foot; a loud *rip* making us think she's managed to pull it free of the belt (which she has; but it has a twist).

16- A loud *DONG!* happens as her foot is stopped just short of being pulled out. The character is obvious very O.O faced thinking pretty much "The hell just happened?"

17- An inside view of the bell again, with motion implying the character is trying multiple times to pull her foot out. The blue sphere is now completely solid and every time it hits the bell top (it's slightly too big to pull through) a softer *Dong* Dong* *Dong* happens since she's banging it into the bell.

However you can sell tiny pieces of the sphere breaking off with each pull.

18- Still tugging, from a side view you can see the bell just behind her being staked. She knows it's her turn next so panic is at an all time high.

19- With one final tug she gets her foot out (a much smaller but still there blue sphere still around her foot).

20- The character grabs her bells and leaps off the belt. Simply wanting to be out of harms way.

21- Again the character lands safely and breaths a sigh of relief. A split panel turning this soon into a smilies/icon_eek.gif reaction with a *tug* *tug* coming from below.

22- The character is on another conveyor belt; both feet caught in this kind of trap. Basically it's a mold for smaller bells. XD

23- The final panel is of her basically trying to yank her legs around and get free of the molds."