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My first real attempt at a comic commission... hope you like/

"I'll break down what I'd like panel by panel. ^_^ You can use this to get a rough idea of what I mean by things like 'close up shot', 'full body shot' ect. :3

Panel 1: A close up of the character's foot and the plant; basically this panel is establishing she's about to step into the plant's 'mouth' without realizing it.

Panel 2: A full body shot of her, with her foot already in the plant (outside view). The plant's 'mouth' has already tightened around her ankle with a *glomf* sound effect; she's looking down in confusion at what just grabbed her. Very much a smilies/icon_sweatdrop.gif expression.

Panel 3: A full body shot of her simply tugging upwards with her leg, she only gets her knee about halfway bent though; as the plant is stretching a bit but otherwise has her foot in a vice-grip.

Panel 4: A close up of the character's foot, from an inside view of the plant. Here we see her foot lifted completely off the plant's base (as this is taking place during her tug in panel 3); but still held firmly in place by the grip the mouth has on her ankle. Inside the plant are three, thin roots that are slightly lifting up towards her foot.

Panel 5: Another close up from the same perspective/angle. This time the character's foot is arched (basically a tip-toe stance) because the roots have wrapped tightly around her shoe and ankle; now engaged in a tug-of-war to yank her foot flat against the plant without her being able to pull free at all.

Panel 6: A final full body shot. I'll give you two options here-

1. Either the character can simply be tugging as hard as she can on her leg (with the plant not stretching as her foot is completely anchored now).

2. Or if you decided to let her keep her gun; have her be a mixture of angry and blushy, pointing the gun at her foot as though she's threatening for the plant to let her go or she'll shoot her own foot off. smilies/icon_rofl.gif (She wouldn't.) "

Description
My first real attempt at a comic commission... hope you like/

"I'll break down what I'd like panel by panel. ^_^ You can use this to get a rough idea of what I mean by things like 'close up shot', 'full body shot' ect. :3

Panel 1: A close up of the character's foot and the plant; basically this panel is establishing she's about to step into the plant's 'mouth' without realizing it.

Panel 2: A full body shot of her, with her foot already in the plant (outside view). The plant's 'mouth' has already tightened around her ankle with a *glomf* sound effect; she's looking down in confusion at what just grabbed her. Very much a smilies/icon_sweatdrop.gif expression.

Panel 3: A full body shot of her simply tugging upwards with her leg, she only gets her knee about halfway bent though; as the plant is stretching a bit but otherwise has her foot in a vice-grip.

Panel 4: A close up of the character's foot, from an inside view of the plant. Here we see her foot lifted completely off the plant's base (as this is taking place during her tug in panel 3); but still held firmly in place by the grip the mouth has on her ankle. Inside the plant are three, thin roots that are slightly lifting up towards her foot.

Panel 5: Another close up from the same perspective/angle. This time the character's foot is arched (basically a tip-toe stance) because the roots have wrapped tightly around her shoe and ankle; now engaged in a tug-of-war to yank her foot flat against the plant without her being able to pull free at all.

Panel 6: A final full body shot. I'll give you two options here-

1. Either the character can simply be tugging as hard as she can on her leg (with the plant not stretching as her foot is completely anchored now).

2. Or if you decided to let her keep her gun; have her be a mixture of angry and blushy, pointing the gun at her foot as though she's threatening for the plant to let her go or she'll shoot her own foot off. smilies/icon_rofl.gif (She wouldn't.) "