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Published: 2007-01-07 05:48:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Destructive Behaviour

a smear of blue obscures my vision.
                 I hear
                             sepia rainbows,
greasy-cold on my skin.
                 the white spray of the television screen:
anesthetized.
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Comments: 5

DaaBree-Jeff [2007-01-07 21:27:37 +0000 UTC]

You are not a n00b. I am proud of you.

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soulpaste [2007-01-07 13:14:53 +0000 UTC]

i find all the colour and sensations crowd the whole poem, for it's length there seems to be too much in it. perhaps something to think about when you get writing properly again?

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emotionaltulip In reply to soulpaste [2007-01-10 03:52:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, getting violently drunk can do that to you. XD

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soulpaste In reply to emotionaltulip [2007-01-10 16:19:05 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Spankreas [2007-01-07 06:00:00 +0000 UTC]

nice poem. seems very focused on light and colour, and i like how you apply the colours to other senses. yuppers... that's about it

lawl! you're not just my camera whore, Emily. You're my loving girlfriend as well XD. i agree. bad experiences are the best to write about, or at least the easiest. who wants to write about happy shit anyways?

the new submission process owns in my opinion because it's so much faster and you don't have to go through 28 screens of options.

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