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DaaBree-Jeff [2009-06-04 00:50:19 +0000 UTC]
I like this one.
I think the brevity adds something to it. Nothing more to say.
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DaaBree-Jeff In reply to emotionaltulip [2009-06-04 01:20:04 +0000 UTC]
Not at all. You have used words in the past that I have had to look up.
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pardonM3 [2009-06-03 23:40:41 +0000 UTC]
in the whisper of indelible bubbles doodled down my back.
Good stuff.
As for your deep-seated insecurity...
I think(?) I might share it.
Except mine irrationally extends to everyone.
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emotionaltulip In reply to pardonM3 [2009-06-04 01:02:22 +0000 UTC]
The world sucks when all you can do is question it.
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Blueskye27 [2009-06-03 21:36:49 +0000 UTC]
A great poem...
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