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Published: 2009-06-03 21:30:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description You love me more when you are drunk.
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           in the whisper of indelible bubbles doodled down my back.
I would love to see your words on an
     anguished scrap of paper
than hear the heat and ardour of beer in my ear.
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Comments: 8

Spankreas [2009-06-24 00:49:15 +0000 UTC]

well writtem, but sadly misrespresentative.
i feel so special.

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DaaBree-Jeff [2009-06-04 00:50:19 +0000 UTC]

I like this one.

I think the brevity adds something to it. Nothing more to say.

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emotionaltulip In reply to DaaBree-Jeff [2009-06-04 01:01:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
(I confess, I had to look up the word brevity. I thought it might have some connection to bravado. Don't judge.)

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DaaBree-Jeff In reply to emotionaltulip [2009-06-04 01:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Not at all. You have used words in the past that I have had to look up.

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pardonM3 [2009-06-03 23:40:41 +0000 UTC]

in the whisper of indelible bubbles doodled down my back.

Good stuff.

As for your deep-seated insecurity...
I think(?) I might share it.
Except mine irrationally extends to everyone.

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emotionaltulip In reply to pardonM3 [2009-06-04 01:02:22 +0000 UTC]

The world sucks when all you can do is question it.

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Blueskye27 [2009-06-03 21:36:49 +0000 UTC]

A great poem...

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emotionaltulip In reply to Blueskye27 [2009-06-03 21:47:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
And for the favourite.

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