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Published: 2011-10-13 19:38:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description The memories,
All those memories
Remain in my sight,
As clear as water or light.

That stick
You used to poke me,
Was that a sign of affection?
Or just a silly way to release tension?

The kisses,
The taste of your soft lips.
You bit me, a pain that showed
How much you loved me, even when it bled.

My heart
Felt warmth.
Never had such comforting feelings.
But now, it's alone, cold and bleeding.

Our future
Seemed so great.

Our lives
Aimed towards perfection.

But it all had to end.
It all had to disappear.

And I have to die,
Or leave my soul drown in tears.
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Comments: 11

bebeclucin [2011-10-22 03:55:52 +0000 UTC]

wow

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EndlessDoubt In reply to bebeclucin [2011-10-22 14:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment and favouring!

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bebeclucin In reply to EndlessDoubt [2011-10-23 15:02:58 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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MoonlitDreamz [2011-10-13 19:43:42 +0000 UTC]

I feel a connection to this. You've written the contrasts perfectly.

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EndlessDoubt In reply to MoonlitDreamz [2011-10-13 19:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Your comment is appreciated!

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Stuffed-Friia [2011-10-13 19:41:45 +0000 UTC]

I feel the pain in my chest now. So sad...

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EndlessDoubt In reply to Stuffed-Friia [2011-10-13 19:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment! It's very much appreciated.

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Stuffed-Friia In reply to EndlessDoubt [2011-10-14 20:09:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~ You're one of my favourites!

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EndlessDoubt In reply to Stuffed-Friia [2011-10-15 02:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you! I don't get that often! (And by that I mean that I've never been anyone's favourites ever)

Also, sorry for not writing often, I need a rare specimen known as inspiration, and it isn't found often

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Stuffed-Friia In reply to EndlessDoubt [2011-10-17 16:25:12 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling. I haven't written anything new in months...bleh.

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EndlessDoubt In reply to Stuffed-Friia [2011-10-18 20:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Lol.

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