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akarudsan [2018-02-05 15:52:04 +0000 UTC]
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Here is my input and most likely in some cases other people already covered it some of it.
1) First things first. What makes a good drawing good? Proportions and perspectives. So when you do a first sketch for the lay in make sure to do it very lightly and check for proportions of what you did. This little cute tiger doesn’t have any volume to me for two reason and the first one of them is the distortion that happened because you most likely drew as you went with the drawing. The best way is to make sure that it worked out is start with big shapes first and do it lightly in a sketchy style, just key lines, no details. Then step away and look at the drawing as a whole instead of looking at specific details of it. Correct it from that big perspective and then repeat. Once you’re satisfied only then start committing to shading.
2) Second, another thing that you can definitely improve on quite easily is to do a squint test. Just squint very tight and see what the drawing looks like. Does it look flat? If yes, then you’re not putting right big shapes (shades) in the right spots. Another way of doing it is taking a picture with your phone and then looking at the little screen that way so that all you see is just generic shapes of lights and darks. The drawing should not look flat at that point. In other words, it’s better to work from big shapes to the little details once you establish the base.
3) Third, but not the least point because I can go on forever , is try to establish the surroundings too. It’s always better to sketch in where that little creature lies otherwise it feels like he is floating in the air. You either put a cast shadow, which will also indicate where the light source is coming from, or you put some texture on all that bright surrounding to indicate what that is using the correct prospective. This way you will place into a surrounding and will create even more spotlight on the main subject of your drawing.
Overall, good job! Just experiment and try these little things
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EnigmaticEpidemic In reply to akarudsan [2018-02-07 00:13:14 +0000 UTC]
Ah, the more the merrier!
Thank you very much for the advice on how to improve the overall proportions of the tiger (I did in fact draw as I went and I'll be sure to try drawing by shapes in the future). I understand what you mean about the tiger floating in space. I, myself, realized this, but my teacher specifically told us to not add a cast shadow, (believe me, I would have in any other situation since I know how awkward he looks just floating in the void ) she just wanted the Beanie Baby.
Thank you for all the great advice and taking the time to write this wonderful critique (it really does mean a lot ). I'll definitely keep experimenting (I'm currently trying to find a good style) and try out all the advice I've been given. Thanks again!
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akarudsan In reply to EnigmaticEpidemic [2018-02-07 15:41:30 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Yes, keep experimenting and don't think too much about style. Your style will emerge on its own and it will be a blend of all kinds of styles that you try, so it won't be just one style that you like. BTW, another thing I forgot to mention is try to draw something upside down. The key to it is that you abstract yourself from the object that you're drawing and just look at dark and light shapes and draw that. Anyway, good luck!
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EnigmaticEpidemic In reply to purplepawpads [2018-02-04 16:42:16 +0000 UTC]
Greetings!
I'm glad you think the face and eyes came out alright. I was worried they, the eyes especially, may have been a little creepy looking which was not what I was going for with this piece Ah yes, I see what you mean about the ear and the stripes along the tail and right foot. Should probably spend a little more time with my tortillon, eh? Would definitely smooth those lines out.
Your critique was most helpful and I thank you for taking the time to write it. Many thanks!
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EnigmaticEpidemic In reply to ProtoTEnterprise [2018-01-28 19:42:30 +0000 UTC]
Aw, I'm glad you think he's cute and overall like the piece Thank you for commenting and I'll be sure to keep improving
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DOliphin [2018-01-28 15:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Hey! why have you uploaded this to project comment? Can you give a quick rundown of what you were trying to achieve with this sketch?
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EnigmaticEpidemic In reply to DOliphin [2018-01-28 19:28:21 +0000 UTC]
Hello! For this sketch I was trying to see if I could properly convey the texture of the Beanie Baby and the shading between the various folds and creases since it is a stuffed toy. Basically, I was trying to go for a sense of realism. If you have any advice on how to better achieve this/what overall could be improved you're most welcome to leave it here Constructive crit is always welcome
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DOliphin In reply to EnigmaticEpidemic [2018-01-28 19:32:34 +0000 UTC]
The shading is great. I would say though the the actual shape looks off. Try and make the figure up of 3D shapes thinking of perspective. When doing line work, don't be afraid to erase/edit things until they look spot on.
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EnigmaticEpidemic In reply to DOliphin [2018-01-28 19:56:25 +0000 UTC]
Glad you think the shading is alright (I've always sucked at shading ) and thank you for your advice on how to improve the overall form (it does look a bit off now that you mention it). I'll be sure to remember it in the future. Thank you kindly for commenting and critiquing
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HG-The-Hamster [2018-01-28 14:58:03 +0000 UTC]
Funny enough I had a beanie baby just like that. I carried her everywhere :V
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EnigmaticEpidemic In reply to HG-The-Hamster [2018-01-28 19:33:00 +0000 UTC]
I had lots of Beanie Babies myself when I was little (not this particular one tho), although I gave them all away a while back. Kind of got a sense of nostalgia when my art teacher brought a bunch in for this project
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