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Page 1 of 3I finally decided to draw a scene with Lourde and Balbaris :3 [link]
It's from chapter 9 when Balbaris and Leander captured Lourde. The hostage hasn't any idea where he is, and he had never expected that something like a flying pirate-ship excists. So, big surprise!
Balbaris' arms are bound on his back, that's because he want to make Lourde believe he was captured by the pirates too.
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Okay, I think this little scene will need 3 or maybe 4 pages. There's another little scene of chapter 9 I want to draw after this one but while this one is funny, the next one will be more dramatic, yeah
Hope you like, it's speedy and a bit messy drawn this time, so I am hopefully faster again.
Balbaris is my OC, Lourde belongs to
Both are from our pirate-fantasy-story "Revenge of Rakazel"
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very nice, that little guy seems that don't know nothing
and just a question, why the other is without any shirt? O_o
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Balbaris wants to make Lourde believe he was plundered by the pirates plus he can't wear the stolen king's coat or his captain's uniform in front of him :3
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So Balbaris is tricking that boy?
The worse is that he looks so silly XD
He fall on that trap? :3
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Don't you read the description? I explained it there
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wait I will re-read, I was sleep, sorry ^^
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No prob. 
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:3 thanks to say
normally people say like "oh my god are you stuped or something?"
and that name Lourde make me laugh a little, I mistaked with loundry >.<
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What unfriendly people do you know? O_o
Lourde is a noble young man, very unworldly, so every new experience unsettle him.
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some people that I found here and there, and that sometimes end up watching me 
wow he looks like a pretty flower on a vessel
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Yup, exactly 
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I think he will be happy on some side XD to see world outside the cage
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yes and no. but he like it more and more during the story
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Hahaha he give up and start to enjoy? XD
But if he start to like there is no problem, right?
But why he was caught?
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Oh, that is a long story. It wasn't always easy for Lourde, but at the end he needed to make a decision.
He was caught because he has a special ability. Here's a little overview of the plot of the first season, made by my sister: [link]
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Make a decision is always hard >.<
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1. The clouds are OUTSTANDING and I love how the first panel is "floating" in them.
2. Great detail with the clouds having shadows on the ground from above.
3. Having Lourde strain on tiptoes to look out, also nice.
I don't know, I just have a thing for small clever details
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Thanks! Cool that you notice it :3
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You're welcome! Keep it up!
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I really like the panel of the sky. It looks so beautiful. I apologize that I do not know very much about your story, so I will ask. What is the reason behind why Balbaris wants Lourde to believe he has also been kidnapped? I have the feeling there is quite an elaborate plot here. I will look forward to the rest of the comic.
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Thank you. ^^
This scene is quite from the beginning of the story. Balbaris wants to know a special thing from Lourde (that's also the reason he kidnapped him), so he tried to sneak his trust.
We translated some of the novel chapters into english, when you are interested in the story.
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You are very welcome!
Ah, that makes sense. I had guessed it was something close to that. Very sneaky, indeed.
Yes, I would very much like to read it.
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Balbaris is a sly guy :3
I have the novel chapters in my gallery in the novel folder. Poorly my english isn't perfect, so I hope it's readable
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I can see that!
I will certainly check it out then. I am sure I will be able to read it. From what I have read, your english is pretty clear.
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Yup, smalltalk works fine. But translating a complete text is quite difficult for me. On the other hand it's good to learn.
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I had not thought of that. That would be very difficult. But I can imagine it being a good way to learn as well.
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YEEEY ANOTHER COMIC!!! I love these! And while this one is a bit more sketchy I really think it still works - it still looks pretty professional & comic are allowed to be a bit more messy, so don't worry!
PS: I think these clouds are really beautiful.
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I try to explain the story in the description, this scene is a bit difficult to understand otherwise, I think.
Thank you, drawing sketchy is much more relaxing, and a bit more dynamic I hope.
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I editet the page with a bit more dialogue now.
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That really helps to get into the story.
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Da guckt man mal einmal ganz ahnungslos hier rein und SCHWUPP!!
Neuer Comic o.o
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