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enolianslave — Mufindi's tale pg 14
Published: 2009-06-28 12:25:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 8142; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 84
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next page [link]yep, Mufindi really screwed up this time. there just isn't room in Ngwazi's heart for any kind of conspiracy, he just isn't that kind of guy. he just wanted to do something nice for her.
this will probably be the first and last time he's ever been that far outside of his home as a possum, without Mufindi; it's a mistake that cost him dearly.
what? I wrote it, whattaya want, smiles and sunshine? no can do.
next page: Mr E is BACK!!!
forgotten muse characters and story are copyright to Tanya Roberts
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I'm not gonna break the streak...
Poor lil' Ngwazi.
XD Ummm... My favorites always tend to die I realize... XD
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im gonna give poor little Ngwazi a big hug!*hugs Ngwazi*
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ah! just got into this (i'm a bit late starting, no?)
and, well...WONDERFUL!!!
i love your art style- there's just so much movement and liveliness in it! absolutely brilliant. keep up the awesomeness (which you will, of course!) i'll be waiting for the next update!
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Aw, poor guy! This story has got me hooked, I can't wait for the next page (and the return of Mr. E!)
I absolutely love the colouring, especially the purple outdoor scenes!
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NOOOOOOO D: egads...I wasn't expecting these things @.@
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I would very much like smiles and sunshine if it means Ngwazi DOESN'T die. 8C
Lovely angle. I love the worm's eye view from Ngwazi's vantage. Very dynamic and brings you a lot closer to his level of helpless-ness, in a way.
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This scene kinda reminds me of Beauty and the Beast. Except, I don't think Mufindi is gonna rescue him.
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it does? thanks for the compliment hun.
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Ohhhh, poor little Ngwazi. He only wanted to make Mufindi happy. Probably an impossible task. Hopefully he'll make it out of his predicament at least alive.
I'm in love with your perspective shifts on this page; it really emphasizes Ngwazi's small stature and helplessness. The third to the last panel just tugs at my heart strings. It makes me wanna scoop him up and give him a hug.
Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see Mr. E in the next page.
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if I've got a small character I LOVE to use the perspective tool, especially in scenes when the character is supposed to look insignificant or dismissive.
thanks hun!
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MAKE FUN OF MY RAGS WILL YOU
...Mufundi seems to have bad luck with familiars. O: Surely the reprecussions of that can't be good.
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well, she had the first one for a very long time and the way they parted wasn't her fault. but this one will be ENTIRELY her fault.
thanks hun!
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Oh no Ngwazi! I don't usually get emotional for manga characetrs but you've got me scared for him =o
Really cool perspective hre, you make him even more small and vulnerable, ah little character ^_^
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'manga', this is pure western comic hun. thanks for the compliment about the perspective though.
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Sorry I automatically use the term(they mean the same thing to mean just the way you read them)I have been reading it left to right though. That's embarrassing.
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well, I ain't Japanese, and I assume you aren't either so read it the proper Western way for it to make any sense.
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I do read it the right way -I'd have been very confused by now if I hadn't- and your right its just I'm so use to saying the word now. Sorry if I offended you I didn't mean to.
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that's no prob hun. glad you're enjoying it now it's the right way round for you. hehe.
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NEXT PAGE HAS MR. E YAAAAAAAY.
I kinda had to refrain from squealing with fangirlish joy...my parents r grumpy at 12:13am
But I can do the happy dance silently. 
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Aww, poor little guy! I hope nothing too bad happens to him!
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The poor guy... I mean, possum.
He's one of my favorite characters in this comic so far, besides Mufindi herself.
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Oh I see you are adding our black panthers to the mix! How awesome! Yea I'm in the south and we have those things here... Very scary, don't go playing the woods at night.
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really? you do? I was going to come up with a huge explanation as to why it was there. thanks!
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Yea we really do, most people think it's like a myth but many people I know, my family and myself have seen and heard them. They're pretty bad the closer you get to the woods they take dogs and and kill chickens and livestock, I've never heard of them killing any people though.
Well anyway you're very welcome glad I could be of service. 
Keep up with the awesomeness!
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only if you keep yours up! hehe
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Smiles and sunshine? Stories aren't interesting unless you torture the characters at least a little bit!
Yet another fantastic page~!
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oh yes, well, that's my theory anyway.
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I love Ngwazi. Mufindi should learn to trust at least HIM, christ.
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I KNOW right! thanks hun.
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Poor Ngwazi 
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I love Ngwazi and his incredible self defense skills. Oh, wait...
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His only crime: Being an animal that some people consider food.
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Poor Ngwazi. Poor, poor, Ngwa-E comes back next page?! Awesome!
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OH NOO!!! Poor little guy TT_TT... but still very original ^^*
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Poor Mufundi. He meant well, but I can kinda gleam from Ngwazi's comment how she saw it differently, and went to wards conspiracy. I hope Mufundi isn't hurt too bad (I know he's going to get hurt to some degree), and things work out between the two.
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