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Entar0178 — Mice Tale 4

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Published: 2015-03-05 12:29:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1318; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Description Work for the puzzle game about mice
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Comments: 7

yeetmaster72 [2023-06-18 02:53:54 +0000 UTC]

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eirikr121 [2015-03-05 12:41:50 +0000 UTC]

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Great picture! I like the composition. To be even better i think you should sharpen a bit the edges of the central character (the one on the table) and increase the contrast. For the moment the image is a bit too "flat" because the values are the same all over the picture.
Try to put more contrast and more saturated colors on the focal point of your picture. Then decrease these settings till the background.
you should also lighten more the main character and put the 1st floor and the ceiling more in the dark.
All these changes have to be very subtle. You start well and i have no doubt you could draw a great illustration with this composition.
Keep up the good work!

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wayleri [2015-06-26 04:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Смотрю на их щёчки - они такие мягкие, такие плюшевые... А в руке меч или пиво. Сразу видно - серьёзные и взрослые мыши, которым отнюдь не хочется, чтобы их трепали за щёчки  
Замечательная работа! 

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Entar0178 In reply to wayleri [2015-06-26 09:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Спасибо! Самый брутальный из них валит врагов булавой из чупа-чупса

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Hot-Gothics [2015-03-05 15:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Are... are those antlers tied to that badger's head on the wall? lol

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Entar0178 In reply to Hot-Gothics [2015-03-05 22:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Well it's not actually badger, it's the deer bug head 

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Hot-Gothics In reply to Entar0178 [2015-03-06 01:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay. I'm guessing that's part of the story of the game then.

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