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Eonari — A Tale of Old - Preview III

Published: 2012-03-27 11:40:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 442; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description Hmm, what are her intentions I wonder.

As for the progress on this story, after reading some old Irish tales, some older fairytales, and some really, really old saga's about Odin and the Viking kings of old in addition to reading the Final Fantasy XII script again and again and again... and more or less replay any related Ivalice Alliance game with that kind of language... I think I'm finally getting some progress on getting a grip on this language.

Well, in any case I hope to have this "Tale of Old" done sometime within the year, hopefully around summer, but in the meantime, enjoy this 3rd preview.

And if you don't mind, do leave feedback on the language. (Because I most definitely won't call upon ancient curses and summon Banshees and other dark creatures and small folk to haunt you if you don't.)
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Comments: 3

GreiaPrince [2012-06-06 02:41:09 +0000 UTC]

I like it so far! There are a few spelling errors - "...stepped fourth a girl..." should be "stepped forth a girl," for example - but other than that, I think it reads fairly well. ♥

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Eonari In reply to GreiaPrince [2012-06-06 12:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
Huh... I'll fix that right away.

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GreiaPrince In reply to Eonari [2012-06-07 00:03:28 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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