GreiaPrince [2012-06-06 02:41:09 +0000 UTC]
I like it so far! There are a few spelling errors - "...stepped fourth a girl..." should be "stepped forth a girl," for example - but other than that, I think it reads fairly well. ♥
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Eonari In reply to GreiaPrince [2012-06-06 12:39:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Huh... I'll fix that right away.
GreiaPrince In reply to Eonari [2012-06-07 00:03:28 +0000 UTC]
No problem!
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