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Epom — Poison Ivy by Oceangranny03

Published: 2009-09-04 19:51:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 849; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 22
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Kaiser-chan [2009-09-07 22:25:09 +0000 UTC]

That turned out nice. I like the reflection from the water on her skin.

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bredenius [2009-09-06 07:38:50 +0000 UTC]

cool! its always nice to see color on my work that isnt my own! i especially dig her hair and skin, and glad you picked up on what i was doing with the vines/boots/gloves thing!!

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Epom In reply to bredenius [2009-09-06 23:29:39 +0000 UTC]

It's always nice to see lines that people allow me to use. I envy your talent and generosity. Thank you so much for the fave.

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bunnystar [2009-09-05 11:30:20 +0000 UTC]

i really like the clouds, they look really good o3o also the reflection in the water looks good. i REALLY like the shine from the water on the log, rock and her legs :3 that looks really freakin' awesome!!! i wouldn't have even thought to do that.

the water itself could use more work. the ripples are good, but could be better. cuz its kind of obvious its just a trick of the light with the colouring, so it doesn't really look like movement in the water. and the rest of the water is kinda plain and boring- maybe try to do reflections of the clouds as well? also, you could have made the horizon better, right now its really wavy and there's a little space at one point that's completely empty. since the edge of the water is at the horizon, it should be straight and smooth so it looks far away. and it kinda looks like the sky is in front of the water... so have the bottom of the sky lower than the top of the water, so you don't see empty space and it looks like the water is in front of the sky XD

but the colouring of poison ivy is absolutely gorgeous (but you should know that by now :3 your really good at colouring) i especially love her hair o3o

now i'm not a very good artist with backgrounds and i'm not much of a critiquer, but i hope i helped joshie-dear :3

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Epom In reply to bunnystar [2009-09-05 21:13:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like the clouds; I was kinda fiddling around and hoping for the best.I only did the shine because of a tutorial, but it was REALLY easy to do.

Yeah, the water was more of a last minute add on. I'm pretty sure it was meant to be earth anyway, so I really changed it up. I don't know how the horizon works, so I'll study that for a while.

She's the focus, so I'm glad she turned out all right. The hair was FUN!

I appreciate you taking the time. And thanks for the fave!

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Zoingishly In reply to Epom [2009-09-06 21:58:13 +0000 UTC]

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Study these a bit for that Horizon. O3O Different scenes and their different colors should help. X3

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bunnystar In reply to Epom [2009-09-05 23:37:26 +0000 UTC]

hey, i know how you like a thoughtful comment with some critiques so i made sure to say more than, its pretty i like it 8D lawlawlalwalskdjalke -shot-

yeah she looks gorgeous o3o and i'm sure next time you do water its gonna be awesome X3

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