Comments: 22
ChiPolVee [2018-04-02 23:27:11 +0000 UTC]
Sorry this is so late!! But I gotta say I love the way you handle fight scenes! Like that panel after Niko (can I call him Niko??) jumps into the air is so cool!! and the one where he lands! He looks like a quilava right there and it's so cool!!
Also..... What is Baxter hiding??? I must know! I hope we get to find out!!
Seriously though, your coloring and posing is so good!! I can't wait to see more! I hope your computer stops being a butt soon!
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EraOfThirteen In reply to ChiPolVee [2018-04-02 23:29:38 +0000 UTC]
sdfghj thank you so much!!!
(you absolutely can call nikolai that)
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jadethestone [2018-03-28 03:06:11 +0000 UTC]
Your fight scenes are always so dynamic! I love Nikolai's flips. And the way you drew "pursuit" works well.
One thing I'd have to say though is that there are some panels where it is kind of unclear what is going on. For instance there are times where someone's body (or wings, etc) are blocking what is going on. I think overall the fight scene is fluid and understandable, but some individual panels could use some work so the reader doesn't have to keep going back and forth to understand what is going on. Does that make sense?
Either way, I really enjoyed the fight. Really good first gym badge. I like the character interactions, and I'm curious to learn more about Baxter's apprehensions to battling despite being rather skilled.
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EraOfThirteen In reply to jadethestone [2018-03-28 03:27:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!
and yeah, I totally get you as far as the wings go.... I did not plan those panels taking into account how much the wings would cover so I just kinda bs'd it. It's mostly the wings I think and this page has definitely got me keeping them in mind, so I think i'll be able to do better in the future! ^^
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jadethestone In reply to EraOfThirteen [2018-04-01 14:28:12 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
Yeah, I figured something like that happened with the wings. I sometimes make the same mistake with my dialogue bubbles covering up things.
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EraOfThirteen In reply to TwistedEerie [2018-03-26 07:05:59 +0000 UTC]
asdfghj I'm glad you like how it all turned out!! I'm rlly proud of the pursuit tbh ^^
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Liauditore [2018-03-26 05:02:16 +0000 UTC]
yES
GYM BATTLE PAGE
SONS ARE UNHURT???
'TIS A GOOD DAY, INDEED.
(I was about to comment on Nik's flippiness but it looks like everyone has beat me to it lol)
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EraOfThirteen In reply to Liauditore [2018-03-26 07:49:17 +0000 UTC]
haha i'm glad you liked it!
(everyone loves the flip boy lol)
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WildfireWhim [2018-03-26 01:26:21 +0000 UTC]
yooooo!!! what a cool page!!! I love whole fight it's so dynamic and the effects are really cool!!! Nikolai has got some serious gymnastic skills there wow!!
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EraOfThirteen In reply to WildfireWhim [2018-03-26 01:32:15 +0000 UTC]
aaaa thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it and my jump boy ^^
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Dingopox [2018-03-25 23:51:12 +0000 UTC]
I will always enjoy your fight scenes, they have so many dimensions and so acrobatic! And digging Niko's outfit!
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SilverNuzlockes [2018-03-25 22:54:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Nikolai is the flip master!! And as usual, your attacks look super cool and dynamic!!
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novamallow [2018-03-25 22:21:27 +0000 UTC]
SICK moves by Nikolai!
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Temorali [2018-03-25 21:43:31 +0000 UTC]
that's why i'm always hesitant to give my characters wings lmao
even though, in the context of how gijinka work in your story, you have no choice-
still, you did great! :0
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EraOfThirteen In reply to Temorali [2018-03-25 21:45:24 +0000 UTC]
that's fair yeah
I dug this hole for myself
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Temorali In reply to Temorali [2018-03-25 21:43:59 +0000 UTC]
ffffff i commented wrong, my apologies-
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Temorali [2018-03-25 21:38:36 +0000 UTC]
nikolai's sick flips were very very cool, i love how acrobatic you made him! It really makes for a dynamic and versatile character on the battlefield, i just wanted you to know that i think the choice to make him so bendy was a great one :D
also, baxter! bby! you're a sweet bean for worrying about falkner but this is his job, he's okay ;v;
even though it was hard, i applaud you for working with the wings, anyway! i think you made it work pretty well, and the gym battle was interesting, even if it's pretty chill in the grand scheme of things c:
great work, as always!!! looking forward to what's to come! >w<
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EraOfThirteen In reply to Temorali [2018-03-25 21:41:27 +0000 UTC]
thank youuuuu
it was mostly like a couple panels where when I was planning them I didn't take into account how much the wings would cover and I had to jump through some hoops to still get the message of the panels across but I'm glad it turned out okay :0
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