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Thanx Darque! Had fun with that challenge!
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that' is really hard to beat! Cause you did an amazing job in showing all charas spezial powers! You as well show perfectly how the black-parts of Rachel protect her!! 
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You know, I should've gotten in touch with you but I totally guessed that that would be the way the costume auto-protected her. The way the costume was designed made it seem so natural. Good job on that! By the way, I apologize for all the teal-ish highlights and tan pin-striping on the basically black and white costume. I was sort of following the lead that the profile was indicating and thought that was part of her color scheme. Beautiful character though!
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thx... no need to excuse yourself...
Everything is fine^^ Well done
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So pleased with such a positive response! Thanks very much!
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Wow! I'm so pleased with your positive response! Thanks again!
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good work. What I would suggest is neutralize the colours more and more as the character decends from the viewer. Keep the people in the front bright. This will create a sense of depth in the comic, and not everything will jump out at the reader all at the same time, creating a mess in the head when trying to put everything together.
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Heh. Basic color theory. Makes sense. Hope to get more time to tweak and de-intensify the color schemes at some point. I'll be lucky to just get that 4th page out in time for the deadline! You can tell I'm a penciller at heart! Appreciate the tip and hope to apply it soon!
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Love the way this is going....great art and colors.
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Wow! Thanks, my friend! I really appreciate the vote of support!
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it's so easy when the work is this good.
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Blue Jaye rocks, man! Figured since he's been flying a long time he may have the best maneuverabilty and instinctual flying skills out of everyone regardless of those big bad wings. The profile said he had enhanced strength so I figured that might mean as much as 5 or 10 times that of a normal guy. Figured if he can bench 300 pounds, then "enhanced" puts 1,500 to 3,000 pounds within reach, certainly enough to jack up the dreaded Domuspheres! Or perhaps his martial arts skills gives him insights as to weakness points! Either way, them wingz is fun ta draw!
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I'm glad you like my Bluejaye brother!! You have the strength right on the money! And yeah...he's been flyin' for awhile! LOL...If he gets knocked unconcious, the angel side can take over if he's in immediate danger and is even stronger, faster, etc...Bluejaye can also create a type of lance/sword at will which can come in handy too!!
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Cool! Hey! Was that in the profile? That's good stuff! Actually I had some interesting thoughts that Blue Jaye, because of his streak of angelic purity, could be one of those impossible few that's able to actually wield the Assegai blade and use the full extent of its power! Now there's a thought, eh?
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I'm not sure if I had it in his profile or not...I'll hafta check...but yeah, that would be cool if he could use the Assegai blade! Perhaps because of the angel merged within him...
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Exactly! Nice angle, eh? Maybe all six characters get put on the ropes and Blue Jaye and that blade are their only hope? That gets the blood flowing, eh?
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HOOO WEEE what a mess they left there! the capture of premiere looks kinda confusing... and the perspective with aurora looks to little... like it shrank him down then with BJ it looks a little too big... but it's still good! loving it so far!
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Thanks, Manga. I think you may be on to something with some of your points and some of what I was attempting probably did need further attention (and still may). So, I paneled off the orange bubble "formally" rather than let the sphere itself try and carry as a separate panel. I threw some shading around the second shot of the bubble to get more of a sense that Premiere is stuck down the wall a ways, a good distance from Aurora who's extending her field to try and crack it's nearly impenetrable energy open. As far as its 3rd appearance, Blue Jaye is busting that bad boy into pieces which are imploding everywhere so its shape is fragmented at best. I switched some dialogue as well to try and better paint and fine-tune the action unfolding. Really appreciate the fine feedback! Glad to hear you're loving it!
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only thing i can suggest is make the BG on Aurora's panel go deeper in perspective... make the panel DEEPER with only one change...
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I'll take a look at it, but prolly tomorrow....I need a nice sauv blanc and my favorite chair! Thanks for your help!
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Man, Premiere looks like a damsel in distress, lol. Awesome work man.
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Nah, I wrote him with a little youthful exuberance which I think would be a unique aspect for a character with so much incredible power! But don't worry I wouldn't let a hero falter without a solid come-uppance! Premiere's about to get mad and - woo - watch out! You're gonna like the next page, bro. 
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Oh I love how your writing him. You really nailing him. Though he has a certain lack of confidence that is hard to relay. Also his powers are limited by he element present in his enviroment. Like he can't just make things into gold unless he has gold in touch. I hope that makes sense. Of course my thing I usually write him with is converting to titanium because of the iron that is in our blood. Tempered iron becomes steel, and tempered steel becomes titanium. So I generally have him working like that. His projectile weapons were done great, because he can convert the bio electric energy in his nervous system to charge the cannons. You've done awesome.
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Thanks so much, man! That's really helpful! Onward!
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Glad I could be of some help. Your doing well though.
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You sure did! Blue Jaye, everyone's favorite wing-man! Dude can fly rings around the best! Forget X-Men's Angel or even Archangel! This guy's the REAL angel! Uncanny!
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thanks man, Birdman who?? he he he
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Birdman! I remember him before the goofy attorney cartoon! Pretty cool! I wish they'd bring the Herculoids back!
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cool! i like how they work as a team and watch each others' backs!
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As fairly experienced crime-fighters on their homeworlds, I had to conclude they're likely to be used to teaming up with an occasionally ally, with perhaps hot-headed moments here and there as with most heroes! Glad you're liking it, bro!
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Of course! 
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Well, being given the first "carry" on the sword would seem to give a character primary accountability for calling some shots....not exclusively, of course, but generally speaking. It may get handed off in some other person's segment maybe? The fun is in waiting to see, eh?
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yeeep! its interesting to see how different people would get the story going!
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True! Can't wait to see how the rest of the folks do...!
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