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Description I have bad news guys, this is no Arrival DLC... but Alchera But don't dispair, Arrival will play a part in this story, but not now.
I'm not sure what Garrus and Tali ate in the Normandy, but I guess that some kind of goo easy to prepare for a human cooker.

Thanks to for his beta-read.

Chapter 8 - Alchera
Page 63: [link]
Page 64: Viewing
Page 65: [link]


Previous chapters:
Chapter 1 - Trapped
Page 1: [link]
Chapter 2 - Just Like Old Times
Page 12: [link]
Chapter 3 - Take Care of Him
Page 22: [link]
Chapter 4 – Dreams
Page 30: [link]
Chapter 5 – Blowing off Steam
Page 40: [link]
Chapter 6 – The Calm Before the Storm
Page 49: [link]
Chapter 7 – Horizon
Page 53: [link]


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Comments: 123

Forgetti [2015-03-04 09:48:01 +0000 UTC]

I've noticed that Garrus never swears beyond "crap" in all three games. 

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Forgetti [2015-03-13 14:36:58 +0000 UTC]

For a soldier, "crap" is not quite rude... isn't it?

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Korin-fox [2012-06-03 21:21:38 +0000 UTC]

YES
FANTASTIC IDEA

I was so sad I couldn't bring down Tali and Garrus during that. I wish there were a lot more flashbacks and dialogue. They could have done so much with the crash site!

Well at least it looks like you are going to do something more with it!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Korin-fox [2012-06-12 05:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

I was a little annoyed that Shepard had to go all alone there. It was her grave! How comes you are not allowed to bring friends or squaddies to help you cope with this??

Nothing to big, but yes, something different.

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EzkilChill [2012-05-04 16:14:22 +0000 UTC]

I see she has made quite a tall wall of frost...don't make it too thick Shepard, this is a fight you
can't win on your own may it be physical or mental.

What really brought me a tear during that mission was when I read Pressly's datapad
about how he finally got to understand that they couldn't have defeated Saren without
allies from the other races.
In the end, he gained my respect.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to EzkilChill [2012-06-12 05:45:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes, she has. It's a defensive mechanism: when she's hurt emotionally, she erases a wall to avoid further pain. But you're right: she can win this alone! Don't worry, she'll see that soon.
Likewise. I'm a strong defender of Unity against the common enemy: only if all the races work together, they would be able to stop the Reapers. Or they should have (stupid, stupid endings!)

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Andauril [2012-04-06 18:33:43 +0000 UTC]

She is a bit... cold... It is hard beeing rejected, is it? Poor Shepard.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Andauril [2012-04-06 20:25:55 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately, yes, it is!

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Fuzzyelf [2012-02-25 20:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Heh... goo that's easy to prepare.... I wonder more how Tali eats anything...
I'm sorry I've been silent for so long with the comments and the faves. All with a reason, I can assure you.

And I see ya went with the idea of having Garrus go down there with her to the crash site. I'm sure he too has memories from that place that kind of haunts him and aside from Tali (who hasn't been added yet) Garrus is the only one who can remotely understand what she's about to go through.

I can't say I approve that she's still acting a little cold towards him, but I guess it is all part of your cunning plan

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Fuzzyelf [2012-04-06 18:34:38 +0000 UTC]

(catching up)
I think she uses a straw...
Don't worry at all! I've also been a little disconnected from this site... RL has some nasty ways sometimes...

Yes, I though that bringing (or letting) Garrus in the mission would give an extra emotional dimension to the mission. It's not that the mission needs more emotion, but... you know... artistic freedom . And you're right, he's the one who can understand what Shepard must be thinking on Alchera. Probably Joker and Chakwas would also, along with Tali.

Yep, it's part of my maquiavelic plan... bear with me, I'll promise it will be worth it... or that's what I hope!

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BLACKapostate [2012-02-21 19:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Ow....emotions are gonna go down Yeah those alines eat some funky food Looks like fish paste they feed our astronauts or sometin' XD So Garrus is comin along to keep an eye on Shepard? I always thought having you LI (or in this case a close friend) would make the scene and mission all more emotional for Shepard. It ain't easy searching the crash site...like walking through a cemetery and finding a tombstone where you were supposed to lie.....*shivers* No it ain't easy or pretty.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to BLACKapostate [2012-04-06 18:25:09 +0000 UTC]

The day I draw this page, a friend came to visit and he stared at the first panel a long time and asked what it was. I told him and he said "It's seemed another thing". He has a dirty mind
I thought the same! Bringing someone along on that mission would have been a good idea on BW side. Not that I'm complaining, but it would have been nice to have extra dialogue depending on who you brough there. Specially if it's your LI or an old friend who served in the first Normandy.
That's exactly what I felt while I was there... it was an ice tomb. And finding your helmet there... uf...

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Sruka [2012-01-26 00:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for finally talking about this mission! I always felt the game didn't do this part justice. No one even said anything when you got back. I'd assume that would be hardest on Shepard especially since she died and found her helmet there.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Sruka [2012-02-01 13:39:01 +0000 UTC]

It's me who should thank you for reading it! I also felt that way. Many times I felt the game just didn't link missions with comments, they were like little duties unrelated to the game's plot.
I can't imagine how you must feel after visiting your own tomb, realizing that you were truly dead and you have been brought back by the Bad Guys of the Galaxy. This is the recipy to loose your head!

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devilsadvocate222289 [2012-01-18 05:44:02 +0000 UTC]

woah....haha, I was surprised there for a sec....but I'm excited to read the next one!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to devilsadvocate222289 [2012-01-21 09:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Surprised? Why? (I'm a curious cat) You're luky then you have more pages to read

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jancz89 [2012-01-15 15:11:57 +0000 UTC]

ahh I'd love to see a team dinner, that would be cool, but that's not the most important thing in this comic, it's nice that Shep and Garrus went there together

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to jancz89 [2012-01-21 09:00:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm planning on a little party for the team... Not a dinner but...
I though it was fitting that someone from the original Normandy went down with her. I'm not sure Joker would like to go, or Chakwas so...

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jancz89 In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2012-01-22 17:59:43 +0000 UTC]

well I am definitely interested in the party

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to jancz89 [2012-01-23 06:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Bring in the buzz!

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jancz89 In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2012-01-23 09:19:17 +0000 UTC]

oooouuuuu yeeeeeaaaaaah !!!!! [link]

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to jancz89 [2012-01-23 13:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha... Hillarious!!

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Topkicker26 [2012-01-14 01:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Wish this was in the game

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Topkicker26 [2012-01-21 08:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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sassamifrass In reply to Topkicker26 [2012-01-18 13:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Agreed!

That said, it was an amazing experience being down there on your own... but bringing Garrus along would have been amazing too.

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Topkicker26 In reply to sassamifrass [2012-01-18 15:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Sorta that nostalgic feeling you get, right?

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Topkicker26 [2012-01-14 01:36:02 +0000 UTC]

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Topkicker26 [2012-01-21 08:58:52 +0000 UTC]

*hands a tissue*

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RogueofAsgard [2012-01-13 03:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Alchera makes me cry every time i go there....

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to RogueofAsgard [2012-01-21 08:58:45 +0000 UTC]

It's a sad sad place.

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GLAD0Sisaspy [2012-01-13 00:14:34 +0000 UTC]

oooo Like this page! But due to the infrequency I check my mssgs I got 3 to read

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to GLAD0Sisaspy [2012-01-21 08:58:26 +0000 UTC]

I made a triple post that week

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ningnomaningnong [2012-01-11 08:49:54 +0000 UTC]

lol...garrus said f**k

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ningnomaningnong In reply to ningnomaningnong [2012-01-22 06:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Wash tongue with soap. Wash body with tongue.

We so naughty~~~

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to ningnomaningnong [2012-01-21 08:58:04 +0000 UTC]

We should wash his tongue with soap... and then continue with the rest of his body

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orbeershe [2012-01-11 04:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Looks like Shepard isn't the only one hanging by a thread right now;]

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to orbeershe [2012-01-21 08:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Not at all.

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contemnosfortuna [2012-01-11 04:15:29 +0000 UTC]

This part of the game....

It was both sobering and therapeutic for me. Good to face it head on, but still so very hard.

I know I've said it before, but damn, I love how Garrus is always there for Shep.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to contemnosfortuna [2012-01-21 08:56:19 +0000 UTC]

I think it's meant to be like that: a way to confront your own death (well, Shepard's death... you get my point) and finally move on. Or you can consider it another mission. I everyone add his/her point of view

You can say that again.

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AlaskanHighlander [2012-01-10 22:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Alchera....

I only set foot on that planet once. To get the tags and place the memorial on the crash site.

I never returned to that fucking place.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to AlaskanHighlander [2012-01-21 08:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Likewise.

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AlaskanHighlander In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2012-01-21 18:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Collector shits.

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Spawnisher [2012-01-10 19:01:42 +0000 UTC]

jajajajaja apuesto que el 99% de la gente pensó que el mensaje de Hackett era Arrival.
Ya decía yo que el nombre de Alchera me era familiar pero no lo note hasta esa pagina

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Spawnisher [2012-01-21 08:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Bueno, no se si el 99%, pero bastante gente, sí. Es normal, es el último DLC y es el que tenemos más fresco en la mente. Pero mira, me fue bien para sorprender ^^
Tranquilo, tuve que recurrir a la masseffectwiki para refrescarme los nombres... Así descubrí que hay dos personajes que se llaman Devon en los dos juegos

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iralovesart [2012-01-09 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]

ooooooooooooooooh, Alchera, totally forgot about that one

yeah it was pretty effed up they'd make poor Shep do this... then again it's pretty effed up she keeps that battered helmet (even though it' the only reason her brain was still intact)

awww, Garr, keep trying.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to iralovesart [2012-01-21 08:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Ta-da! Suprise!

I liked the DLC per se, but in the story, I felt it was like a bad joke on Shepard. Like bringing flowers to your own grave. And the fact you keep your helmet is odd, weird and insane. I'll have to think on something for her to keep it

Don't worry, he'll succeed!

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iralovesart In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2012-01-21 11:04:22 +0000 UTC]

well, Shep kinda has to be a little crazy to do what he/she does. It's a little disturbing they make Shep keep the thing, but considering it's the only reason his/her brains are still intact... I dunno, It's probably something like a reminder, however surreal it sounds: "You died, now you're back."

awww, go Garrus!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to iralovesart [2012-01-23 13:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Excellent point! Shepard's not the sanest person in the Galaxy... It could be very well that or a way of remembering the Commander is not as invencible as s/he thinks.

Anyway, go Garrus!

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Berserker79 [2012-01-09 18:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Think I remember quarians and turians need to eat food containing D-amino acids rather than "human-style" L-amino acid containing foods... Hope that Garder remembers that when preparing that gooey thing!

Going to check pages 65-66 now!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Berserker79 [2012-01-20 06:50:31 +0000 UTC]

You're right and Gardner remembers it

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