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Published: 2010-11-18 23:14:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 40368; Favourites: 319; Downloads: 250
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Some more dialogue in this one. I may say that I'm no English native speaker so, if I'm messing with English grammar, spelling, language in general, please don't hesitate and (politely) tell me, and I'll amend whatever the mistake is.No more rambling. For now.
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I know I'm annoying, but I /have/ to comment on every drawing!
Shepard is gorgeous, I love her look, it reminds me of my first Shepard in ME C:
Kaidan has never been my favourite, I've always loved Garrus (and Tali, but that's another story), especially with Shepard, so I cannot adore this!
They're pure angst and cuteness blended together!
Amazing job! C:
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Don't worry, you're not annoying 
Thanks! I'm glad you like her!
Ii was quiet fond of Kaidan, but after Horizon and Garrus being LI... Too tempting to let the chance slip from my hands...
Thank you again for your kind words!
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This is awesome. Then again, your work is always awesome. Keep it up! I LIVE FOR FANART LIKE THIS!
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And YOU truly know how to make my day with your awesome art!
Turians <3
Garrus <3
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A win win situation
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As my people say, "Victory at any cost!"....
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True renegades you bunch... I like it so much!
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Not going to lie, i may be turian, but i try to save my brothers and sisters when they are in dire need... the mission comes second..
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Then you're the kind of bad turians people like the best
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*blushes and mandibles flicker* I...uh..um...thanks *derpy turian smile*
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... and here ends my attempt of making a turian blush
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LOL, believe it or not some people hate me for "being" turian, Thanks
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Those are just a bunch of racist and ignorants!!
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the sad thing is that some of these people draw turians...it was ironic and hurtful :/
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What? I mean... people who draw turians said what??
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Yes...people thought i was taking the RP'ing too far...i was just being myself...with a turian outlook... : /
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And... what's the problem with RP? I mean, it's funny!
And... some humans lack sense of humor...
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i dont know... lets just say it was a well-known artist and i felt devastated when i heard what i was told...
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Ouch... probably the artist had a bad day... who knows? Better not to give it too much thought...
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yeah your right,she kind of was in a bad mood already. Oh well... i stopped caring tho
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Better focus on positive things
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exactly! I drew a turian instead <3
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Perfec thing to do!
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
-[fan girl squeal!]-
WINNER! Fan girl moment!
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In truth. never liked Alenko, love Ashley though. So Ersbeth that is alittle spoiler for you. If your getting my meaning.
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You mean... ? No, don't tell me! I have to play at see it for myself!
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lol, I meant my fanfiction silly. Was trying not to be obivious lol
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Sorry! I have just looked up the Mass Effect 3 artbook and I've fallen facefirst into two spoilers and I'm feeling really silly right now...
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oh hun your okay. I just should have been more obivious. My bad
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Yeah, I feel a little stupid for not having realized that the book could contain spoilers, but... at least it was something I half expected- Don't worry, I'm a little soft these last days (that wonderful thing of being a woman... you know...)
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Your honiest. that respect even more. Very true, your soft side can balance us males for being rough around edges.
And your not stupid, smarter than me lol.
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How you portrayed this was gorgeous. Unfortunately, my imagination ran off with me onboard the ship.
Shepard: I ran into Kaidan before you showed up.
Garrus: Oh? And which way did Kaidan? *thinking* Garrus is going to choke a bitch!
Bad imagination! bad!!
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I never liked Kaidan. Or Ashely for that matter. They both suck.
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I do like Kaidan. Ashley not that much... But with so many characters and so many players, it's normal that we do not like all of them. For instance, Jacob. I don't like him a lot.
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*dies again like in the previous page and LIVES!!!*
How is that possible? .... I... don't actually know O_O
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Lazarus project... or some kind of spell?
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*shifty eyes* shh!! DO NOT TELL EVERYONE THAT CERBERUS EXISTS!!
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Ups... I'll keep my mouth shut!
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^__^ YAY!! Wanna be a part of Cerberus? It's free! and we give humanist cookies! *with a fast voice* humanpartsnotincludedineverybitebutthepossibilityofoneofouremployeesfallinginthecookiemakerishighlypossibleasoursafetyproceduresareshitashellbutyoustillkeepbuyingfromusandwantingtobeemployedthuscerberusisnotliableforyourhealthandsafety *end of advertisement reminder*
We have about 0.0000000000000000000000000001/2 percent of meeting the real Normandy crew team!
Garrus: your calculations are wrong... and really? 0.00000000000000001/2 percent? That's crazy and sounds stupid.
You missed a few zeroes...
Garrus: --_-- *turian sweatdrop* *takes shotgun and kills himself with it*
NUUUUUUUUU!!!! GARRUUUUUUUSS!!
hey they rhyme!! 
Dead Garrus: *facepalms in Afterlife*
You go to Afterlife when you die? No wonder that guy couldn't get in 
Miranda: what about Shepard?
Well she died... and lived again, gave her a vip pass
Normandy crew: I think we have found Joker's sister O_O
LE GASP!! The joker has a sister?! Does Batman know this?!?!?!
everyone: -__-
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You nearly convinced me... But I don't like Cerberus motto... I'd rather be in the Alliance... Do you think my chances of meeting a real Normandy crew member will increase?
If a missile didn't kill him, a neither can a bullet!!!
it's true, they rhyme!!
You're going to kill me!
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Yes I agree... I don't like Cerberus either, I'd rather join the Alliance or C-SEC if it means meeting Garrus and Shepard
True!! If a missile can't kill him like you said, neither can a bullet! He's a tough SOT!!!
Garrus: what's SOT?
you're alive! yay! It means son of a Turian!
Garrus: You're crazy and you're hyper... I better tell Dr. Chakwas about your "Shrek's Donkey" illness...
You watch Earth movies?
Garrus: yeah, even the one with the Pizza man. (reference to Season 6 of Supernatural where Castiel was "accidentally" watching porn. As I have said before, Garrus is like Castiel
o_O Lemme guess... Kaidan's stash?
Garrus: Nope... Joker's.
Won't Joker's wrist explode or something since they're brittle?
Garrus: what are you implying?
Joker: O_O
Well it's good to be killed with laughter Beth!
Garrus: *facepalms*
yeah like that
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Oh don't worry, your english is fine. I havnt noticed any errors really, well... It's kinda hard to with that smexy Garrus on a page tho.
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XD Well, is doing a great job beta-reading this series.
AH! So to disguse my English mistakes I must draw sexy Garrus?
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Awww. You have an amazing way with bodylanguage, postures and mimicry! This is such a treat to read and not least watch!
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