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Look, I've already read those comments billion which read:Β
a-aah you are going to die if you do not put this in 20 games or comment this 20 times e-eee gonna die jajajajajajajajajaj and I do not step (if you do not die tomorrow then all that entered is LYING also usteden shit all to that children do not come over to deviantart or games>: () and I always wanted to make that comment that this:
bazzoka shoot with a head so everyone will live happily without those people who put that they are about:Β
(this is going to speak in Spanish, because I'm from Argentina)
H**** de p*** vayansΓ© al c*****, deberian irse al infierno h**** de p*** que ponen eso, ademΓ‘s es imposible que un fantasma mate a una persona solo porque no pusieron eso en 20 comentarios mΓ‘s, vayanse al infierno h**** de p*** > : D
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It is a BEAUTIFUL picture. It's unfortunate the amount of "repost this' comments blemish this otherwise perfect page.
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WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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Why do you write these stupid things on such a lovely drawing?
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This is awesome, so sorry about this, I'm forced to repost this. DON'T READ IF YOU'RE SUPERSTITIOUS
NcE YOU'VE READ THE FIRST WORD OF THIS YOU CANT GET OUT. READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35...... P.M.9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was belived haunted.The... next day his friends waited for him out side the house................... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic.He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went into the attic. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left because they were scared. But that night they all died because of their friend. He killed them all for making him sleep in that house If you don't send this to 11 comments you will die tonight by Jerry. Example 1: A man named Stewart Read this and didn't believe it. He shut off his computer and went through his day. That night while he was in bed he heard something outside of his door. He got up to look. And now he's dead. Example 2: A Girl named Haley Read this in the morning and she got scared but she didn't send it. She wanted to know if it was true. She went to school (She was only 13 years old) and that night she died. If you don't post this on 11 comments tonight Jerry will 'visit' you.
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I love the lighting - i most backgroundless pieces, it's usually just from above... you nailed it
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Wow, it feels like it could leap off the screen. Very radiant. Awesome job.
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One of my favourite animals ;u; It looks really good c:
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It's beautiful, I love the way you do big cats, they're all amazing.
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My first impression was - wow, such a beautiful pose and also a very good job on the colours and lightings. That is really your strong point! Also you seem to have done pretty much of anatomy studies, but I have some crits and tips as well as it comes to the anatomy - to make it maybe even better 
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Okies β k denk dat k t in t engels probeer - met veel typos, das wat meer DA bevolking-vriendelijker XD
I can see you have studied all the muscles in detail β but I see a little problem with the position of the paws compared to the angle of the legs and the body.The legs seem to have another rotation angle than the feet-which is mostly visible in the musclegroups you drew in the legs. So is the right upperarm drawn from sideview, but the foot is in the same line as the body. The muscles at the backside of the upperarm (ulnaris lateralis and extensor digitorum lateralis) should be mainly visible while the ones at the frontside. Also looks the left paw a bit too much turned inwards and should the middle to not be visible. The left hindleg looks good but I have the feeling that the right hindleg is turned a bit too much the side. The ehh kuitspier- should cover the musclegroup at the frontside of the tibia maybe more. I think the muscles in the shoulders look good but I think the shoulderblade is a bit small for a clouded leopard β arboreal cats tend to have large triangular shaped shoulderblades. One last thing is that the lumbar vertebrae β it looks like if the lumbarvertebrae are much too narrow so that it looks like a breakpoint between the pelvis and back. You drew the shape of the pelvis nicely β I think the pelvis and the lumbar vertebral column look more in one eh geheel , in een wat meer geleidelijke overgang. Iig is da twat k typisch vind voor katachtigen tov hondachtigen.
But β besides these mierenneuk details β I have to say that the overall 3D effect and the posture looks good. It looks like the cat is action and looks concentrated. Also a thing I like on your work is how you manage to get the light well focussed β especially with subtle use of highlights and right placed shadows. Just go on and donβt hesitate to look very critical to my work as well β since I work for an research institution I learned to look critical at every detail β but I still tend to forget things ^^
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thanks I had to puzzle your critique a bit but when i looked deeper on the drawing I understood what you mean with the legs and muscles. I think I need to do more studies with poses the next time since I mostly do them sideways in my sketchbook. thank you for the feedback, it was very useful! :3
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Thanks! Ha yeah I think it was slightly a mess to describe 
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haha yeah I kinda have neglected my anatomy studies for a few months now though. The reason is I focus more on landscape painting lately xD So I sometimes forget about anatomy haha. But it was good hearing some feedback so I know what to work on next. 
Im glad to hear you like my comic.but sadly I am at a point thinking about quiting with it.
I love Theory of Mind so much! It's one of the few comics I get excited about when I see a new comic page up! please keep it up
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Thanks!! I'm working on the next two pages now - I draw them usually two by two XD I hope you continue with Sealed Hearts too! I saw you made indeed several starts but that means you were at least motivated.
I see with the anatomy - one can't focus on all things 100% indeed. I'm now tending to sail the same course and work also a bit more on landscapes, but it's a bit of a struggle though...especially mountains and rocks. I love to draw that, but I'm not yet so skilled in that. I have to say that I'm impressed by your way of drawing landscapes and backgrounds - In that aspect I can still learn a lot from you XD
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really beautiful anatomy! I love the details in the forearms and face =]
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I love this panther! It is really so nice! And I love the pose and the shading!
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So amazing!! Love the muscle structure!!
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I think my favorite part of it is how you accomplished to move the marks along with the bodyΒ΄s muscles, fur and itΒ΄s dynamic.
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What kind of big cat is this? I keep thinking snow leopard, but I know that its not that..
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It's a Dinofelis ^^ I just gave him a lot of clouded leopard-like markings ^^
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i think its a clouded leopard
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I already wrote it in the livestream:
I LOVE it ! >w<
Nakia looks so cool, and real. His eyes, the fur... and his spots look so cool.
(And I really have to make his sheet more clear XD With his teeth...)
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Goooosh your kiiiiitties
I wish I could make poses more fluid. ;; I'm trying to get into the habit of gesture drawing, to help get things flowing better, but aaaah still not your level. <333
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yep gesture drawings are a great practice for fluidy movements c: You know this site? [link]
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Yesssss. Tis what I use for practice <333
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That Detail... Must have you do my snow leopard character one day XD
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Ohhh, I like this a lot. It is quite lovely.
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