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CyberFox [2020-12-11 09:08:10 +0000 UTC]
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DoubleDandE [2019-12-06 16:57:57 +0000 UTC]
Hello, good day, I'm from ProjectComment .
Well now you certainly have picked a rather interesting perspective to go with this pic of two characters sharing a comfy snooze together. I really do like the perspective you’ve chosen here, rather than going with something a bit easier at a different angle. All the angles and directions of the bed seem to follow the same angle and perspective you’ve chose here, and I really do like it. Although the window doesn’t follow the perspective of the bed, it does look a rather well interesting being there in the background. I wonder if you did that on purpose, or rather just wanted the window to be in the picture to help compliment the bed.
The illustration also has a children’s book feel to it. The shading of the markers or inks that you used to color the picture has a nice look and feel to it. The shading is overall doesn’t and is pretty natural despite being rather simple. I really like the shading used on the bed cover, especially the shadow used to outline their bodies underneath the cover. The shading on the pink bunny character is overall nice as well, and everything just has a smooth natural feel to it- especially that dot of highlight on the nose.
The only thing that looks a bit off would be the dark shadow at the foot of the bed, but it’s not too much. It seems to not go with the angle the bed’s perspective is at, or of any of the light sources, especially on the corner that disappears towards us. I feel it would have looked a bit better if it followed the same perspective on that edge, hugging close to the bed sheet. Overall though it’s not a big deal, and you did do an amazing job on this. I rather like the look of it- the shading and texture your tools created while shading as well. The bed and nose and colors are all soft and comforting. Job well done.
Keep up the great work.
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GabriMax [2019-09-25 20:21:34 +0000 UTC]
Loved the colors and the lines, very clean lines. But the perspective of the bed to the window doesn't make sense, I think it's really cool for a cartoon, but was that your goal? Overall, excellent design.
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EshiSnu In reply to GabriMax [2019-10-15 18:53:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I wanted to play with the perspective. I wanted to angle the bed so it was not just a flat view and I also wanted to have the window in view so, I ended up with this angle lol
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hameboy [2019-09-25 12:57:38 +0000 UTC]
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EshiSnu In reply to GozerGozarian [2019-06-13 21:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, thank you very much
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