Comments: 13
Idiosyzygic [2018-11-05 18:56:50 +0000 UTC]
Overall, it's a lovely drawing.
Style-wise, it works. I can definitely see the influence from Adventure Time on the character and the background.
You definitely made the right choice to color this pic. It really gives life to the character and the scenery behind her. Color scheme works very nicely. I like how the colors are used in a way to make almost every part of the picture stand out. Personally speaking, I would like to see the sky colored as well. It will make the pic look more finished. A light baby blue should do the job, but feel free to use another color that can work.
The perspective, however, is all over the place. I can see the pathway and the white flowers following some sort of perspective, but other parts of the pic such as the tree and the castle don't. I would expect the trees that are closet to her appear bigger than the ones further away. I would not expect to see the top flat surfaces of the castle from this vantage point. Next time you draw a pic similar to this, I would use a reference and be more careful to make sure everything follows perspective.
I noticed there is variations in line width, which is good. However, I would use it in a more consistent and logical manner. Personally speaking, the lineart for the mountains and the edges of the pathway are a bit too thick for my tastes. Same thing can be said for the detailing of the middle portion of the castle.
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candyslapper27 [2018-11-05 15:09:47 +0000 UTC]
Although i enjoy the simplistic art style here perhaps you could add a nose or more oval shaped eyes with whites and pupils. The colors work very very well together and looks very professional. I think instead of placing a big watermark over the middle you should lace the art with tiny watermarks to seem more natural but hard to steal.
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EshiSnu In reply to candyslapper27 [2018-11-09 05:21:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your feed back. I also appreciate the advice about the water mark. I have been trying to figure out the water mark thing and in the end I just end up using this one.
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OhFraise [2018-11-04 23:08:43 +0000 UTC]
Great, now I'm hungry xD
This looks really close to the show, btw! It feels like this could be a special episode or something lolol
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EshiSnu In reply to OhFraise [2018-11-09 05:18:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
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GozerGozarian [2018-10-23 16:41:19 +0000 UTC]
Every hero needs a sidekick, perhaps you could use a Zuul dog named 'Chunky', lol!
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EshiSnu In reply to GozerGozarian [2018-11-02 01:30:55 +0000 UTC]
Hahahahaha I can imagine this monster demon dog running through this light hearted candy land
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kerobyx [2018-10-23 16:16:03 +0000 UTC]
awesome! looks just like adventure time!
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kerobyx In reply to EshiSnu [2018-11-02 02:28:38 +0000 UTC]
You did a great job!
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