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EshiSnu — Nerds Girl vs Twizzler Boy
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Published: 2018-11-03 15:23:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 673; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Day 15 of 31 Days of Candy Challenge.
Candy as a character.
My niece really likes Nerds, my nephew really likes Twizzlers, I thought I would use them as my candy characters. Behold, Nerds Girl vs Twizzler Boy! Nerds Girl possess telekinesis and wield her mind powers to take on her foes. Twizzler Boy's body is made of super strong, stretchy candy that he can use to reach great heights and tie up his foes!
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Haha this is awesome! You did especially well with the Twizzlers and the hair! I love to see creativity like yours.
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Thanks so much. I really appreciate it. I am still trying to improve my inking and line skills.
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Nice piece !
I enjoy the fact that the girl is very consistently purple. I do think she could have used some more shading and highlights though, just to show some more depth. Unless depth isn't what you are going for then it's fine.
I only have a couple things to say about it if you don't mind.
I will first start off with the fact that the girl character looks a little stiff to me. The guy looks fine, because he's got the twizzlers arms movement to show that he isn't standing still.
I also think that the either the guys shirt or skin should be a different color, just to have some contrast. It's kinda like that both his skin and shirt are red. Or his skin is just to saturated or something. But again, if thats what you are going for then its fine haha. I also think the guy could use a little white highlight on his eye, for some shine. Otherwise it looks really flat.
I really how the boy's hair kinda looks like fire, and his body is very proportionate.
the girl's neck is kinda long for her body, and her arms might be a tad big. Thats just my style though. People always tell me that the arms I draw are too small haha.
ANyway good piece! I really enjoyed this concept! Keep it up!
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Thanks so much for your feed back. I had fun coming up with this and some parts I had a little trouble figuring out if I should add more or keep it more simple. I appreciate the tips. I will definitely try to incorporate your advice in the future
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Generally, this is a good cartoon sort of drawing. Linework is very clean, and it's very stylistic. It's something you'd see on TV. The color schemes for the characters are interesting as well. Twizzler boy is really well done, and I only have any sort of criticism for Nerd Girl.
Somethings to note
-Nerds Girl's right arm is either a bit too short or an attempt at a different perspective was skewed.
-Perspective seems to be a general issue, like with the girl's legs, where one leg moves back an awkward distance but sort of appears to be facing forward? I feel like if you moved the right leg a little bit closer it'd be less of an issue. (Also her foot is directly facing the front, which isn't helping).
-Those necks are a bit too long.
-Nerd Girl looks a man's face on a girl's body, I think because of the shape of the chin and nose, which are unusually defined for a little girl; since the eyes are obscured, that's all a viewer would have to go on.
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Thank you for your feed back. Yeah, I am still learning my way with ink. After messing with it for a while, I finally decided to leave it be and I tried to go over some areas with more ink, thinking it would "help" and I feel like I made a little worse. I do agree with your feed back. The face and some of the features didn't turn out has I hoped lol
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I think you hit on something here Eshi, dare I say it?... Epic candy battles of history!
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THAT WOULD BE AWESOME! I can see it now, Willy Wonka vs Milton Hershey!
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