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esotericsean — white tile room
Published: 2004-10-18 04:41:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1364; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 304
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very simple piece, been focusing on indoor rooms lately, this came out of one of them. render took a while on this one.made in: 3ds max 6, 1 skylight, 1 omni
modelling time: less than 1 hour
rendering time: 12 minutes
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Comments: 46
Hehe, wonderful, i like it alot, the minimalism is simply wonderful.
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This is awesome, could you plz make me a wallpaper! I love it.
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looks good, nice concept. however a few suggestions. first, I think the sphere could do with a more interesting texture. a color could be nice or maybe you could work in surface detail, like very fine lines like in the floor. also i'm not too sure about the lighting, if it is indoors it too closely resembles outdoors with the skylight+omin/spot. if it is outdoors it should have some color and a sharper shadow. it looks more like outdoors to me, in which case the skylight should be a bit bluer, the spot light should be a bit yellower, and the shadow should be darker and crisper. just some ideas that i had seeing you;d asked for advanced crits.
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thanks a lot for the critique 
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nice! it's so... clean. this one gets a fave. possibly a wishlist.
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hey i calls em hows i sees ems.
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heh, ball from the what?
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Good rendering... maybe the light it's a bit hard for the scene overall...
Try to render the image only with radiosity and one "weak" lamp (for speculars etc.)
and try to use HDR's on your reflections it helps the objects to look even more realistic...
Nice work keep going!
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actually i should probably change the advanced critique encouraged thing, but anyway.. thanks for commenting! i'm really happy with it the way it is already but thanks for the info
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Ok i understand! You're image it's really good no doubts there, the comment of the HDR's where just a tip like, personal opinion, i see it wasn't
quite helpful....
By the way come and see my work i would like to have a comment of yours on my renders...
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You know, maybe it's the repetitiveness, but it doesn't strictly look flat... y'know?
It looks great if you like repetitiveness with that one break in the monotone there. It's the sort of image that would make an excellent background. Personally, I'd love to see more happening, but I guess I can't complain too much, since I still can't do that sort of thing myself. >_>;;
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heh, well i didn't expect this to get as much attention as it did, i knew it was pretty simple. might do more similar things later
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i love the basic broken floor idea!
think.. perhaps a crack on one of the inside ones ... and mm.. maybe a wall in the background.. something about the perspective feels a little fisheye ..
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Dude, I missed you in chat. How sad I was absorbed somewhere else.
This is a neat deviation, by the way. I like the ball and the reflection and stuff. It looks all heavy 'cuz it's dented the tile. Hee.
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aww, yea! next time.. *sigh*
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Nice work, this is a great minimal piece. Simple idea but looks amazing. The displaced tiles are a great addition. Nice work buddy.
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hey man! awsome render! i love that style you made this image in, I myself use max. but i have 5.1
very simple clean and the contrast is perfect. nice job!
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heh, thanks. and there's not too much difference between 5.1 and 6 (i had 5.1 for a looong time). glad you liked this, anyway,
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man that is really great, keep the white. 
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Looks really nice
Sometimes simplicity is the best way
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simply love this idea. its like a ball dropped from high up and cracked the tile floor. great work buddy!
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hehe, yea, thanks for the comment
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yep yep, thanks for the comment!
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I like it a lot ^_^
The lighting feels a little harsh considering that everything is white... It seems to destroy some of the detail.
Have you messed around with any of the adv. lighting/radiosity jazz in Max?
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hehe, thank you
and yea, i pretty much know what i'm doing now with advanced lighting and that type of stuff in max, you think the lighting's too much? i dunno, i kinda like it this way, with the soft blue coming from the bg and the bright white from the front. i think i could say a lot this way.
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I understand. It compliments the simplicity. Just trying to offer /some/ sort of help besides "looks cool" 
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yea, thanks! i really should put a little more effort into the symbolism/meaning of my art rather than put so much emphasis on the "looks cool"
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