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Published: 2006-05-12 20:32:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description Stumbled out
Worn-out
outsider
Drunk driver
Unchained
Not blamed
Liberal
Finished objectives
Did it all
Blood stains
Truth reigns
injustice maintains
pushed it under the blanket
a feel of smoothness
like velvet
Pain
making me insane
Many scars
Burned away with alcohol and cigars
Cheers to you and your fake postcards
And most of all for your ignorance and disregards
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Comments: 6

Detangler [2006-05-14 17:07:55 +0000 UTC]

I think it's "worn-out" uhm.. but I'm not sure. besides that it's pretty good. I like the rhymes keep it up

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Esp1 In reply to Detangler [2006-05-14 21:16:15 +0000 UTC]

thankx , and yea,you're right about that little error .

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Etsugua [2006-05-12 20:44:13 +0000 UTC]

It's cigars, and not "sigars"

Other than that, love it really Really well writen

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Esp1 In reply to Etsugua [2006-05-12 20:52:43 +0000 UTC]

Thankx a bunch, and I'm glad you found my little error. It really pleases me to see that someone likes what I write. . And the favourite is muchly appreciated.

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Etsugua In reply to Esp1 [2006-05-12 21:06:30 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome Even though I don't like reading that much, this is really good to read So thank you

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Esp1 In reply to Etsugua [2006-05-12 21:09:37 +0000 UTC]

hehe,ok .

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