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EtherialVolcano — Eyzzei Talk Sprite

Published: 2012-11-16 22:24:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1144; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 21
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Description My new fantroll OC.
Her name is Eyzzei(have yet to think of a last name)
Her Lusus is a bat-like creature.
Sheeee teeends to talk in a ratheeeer screeeeching manneeeer.
Her blood color is the one to the right of Aradia's. [link]

And that's all I got so far. ;n;

I'm open for any feedback and what not. I'm terrible with fancharacters. ;~;

Talk sprite base(c)
[link]

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EDIT: Okay, I changed the shirt symbol to Orion [link]
And I renamed her Eyzzei(Pronounced Ee-Zi)

What do you guys think?

EDIT 2: Got a better way to spell her name thanks to ~Avristed :3
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Comments: 14

m8tte [2012-11-17 01:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Even better than mine I've been working on for a long time.

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EtherialVolcano In reply to m8tte [2012-11-17 02:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. X3
I'm usually not that good at making fancharacters. XD;;

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Sarochan [2012-11-17 00:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, just some minor feedback.

1. Adelle sounds like an awfully human name. I don't particularly care, but people tend to get down on trolls with humanoid names.

2. Troll symbols seem to be more character-related (character as in alphanumeric, Greek, Roman, zodiac, whatever) than picture related. This looks more like a kid symbol.

But cute!

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EtherialVolcano In reply to Sarochan [2012-11-17 00:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Okay, thanks for the feed back!

Do you have any idea of how I can think of a troll name? Like, I know it has to be 6 letters, but what would really be considered a troll name? Eridan sounds rather like a human name, but that's just me.

Okay! I didn't really know what to put as the symbol so I came up with that. XD;;; I'm glad you mentioned something! I will work on a new symbol ASAP.

Thanks~

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Sarochan In reply to EtherialVolcano [2012-11-17 18:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Well.... A lot of the troll names come from their personality or traits. For example, Nepeta's name comes from the scientific name for catnip, and of course she's associated with cats. Same for the other canon trolls. For my own fantroll, I had the idea that she's interested in chemistry and biology, so I went searching for terms related to those things. So it might help to think about her personality, her likes and interests, and then go from there.

Hope that's helpful.

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EtherialVolcano In reply to Sarochan [2012-11-17 21:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Alright! Well, I changed her name to Eyzzei; I'm hoping that's better.

It is! I'll make sure I'll keep that info in mind. c:

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Avristed In reply to EtherialVolcano [2012-11-17 01:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Eezeey is better, but it seems a little too much like a weird elongation of "easy". How about Eyzzei?

Also, I like how you separated her symbol's meaning from her design. Too many, myself included, have it relate directly to their appearance or personality. Good job!

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EtherialVolcano In reply to Avristed [2012-11-17 01:37:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that'll work! Thanks~

I was actually thinking about changing her horns to look look like the sign, but I decided against it. XD;; I like it better when her horns and wide and long like some bats have.

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GlitchyRaptor [2012-11-17 00:20:38 +0000 UTC]

good job! :3

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EtherialVolcano In reply to GlitchyRaptor [2012-11-17 00:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! X3

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GlitchyRaptor In reply to EtherialVolcano [2012-11-17 00:22:57 +0000 UTC]

you're more than welcome :3

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TheArminArlert [2012-11-16 23:19:59 +0000 UTC]

Not bad! Good job!

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EtherialVolcano In reply to TheArminArlert [2012-11-16 23:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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TheArminArlert In reply to EtherialVolcano [2012-11-16 23:40:00 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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