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Published: 2005-07-12 21:05:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 632; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 31
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This is a picture of ~sppanda 's character, Mochi. He drew it and I attempted to cg it. I think this is my second attempt with cging. I am proud of this cg, but I know I still need to learn a lot more about Adobe in order to make it better. I will be fideling with the program and hoping to complete a better version on this later. Thank you sppanda for letting my practice cging with your drawing!
Program: Adobe Photoshop CS
*Advanced critique would be greatly appreciated, but regular critique and comments are appreciated as well. thank you!
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This is an excellent CG, on an equally great drawing. Both you and Sppanda have talent; I look forward to seeing more works and collaborations in the future.
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Yes I would like that too. I have asked his permission to cg another one of his pictures that I really like, but I haven't heard from him. I guess he didn't like how I did this one. haha! >.<
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She looks so cute
Love the colors
I suck at CG
Nice one
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The drawing is really cute, and nicely colored ^^
The backround is a bit messy, but it's still great. The Panda is adorable.
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OMG!!! those boots are awesome!!!! And the whole drawing... the way her legs are put and the panda.. so cute! ^^
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thanks...but i only colored it. 
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great for a first try!!
here's my crit for you:
the whole thing is nicely shaded, the boots, the hat, the shirt sleeves... all well done.
but if you start with cel shading, do the whole thing cel shaded! i know hair is hard to do, but you can do it! 
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Thanks for the critique. It was really appreciated. I never used the magic wand tool, I only used pencil. Except for the dodge tool which I used on the hair. As for the layering, I didn't do it. heh heh. Ya, my friend did it for me. I know how to make a new layer but that's about it.
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i sure am!! i 
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Know it's something you're working on, but the color could use a bit more. First try making your lights, mids, and darks stand out a bit more. Right now it just looks like you're using two tones per color and both are about the same. It takes some time and practice, but the more you work with it the better you'll become.
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thanks for the critique. I will try working on that! ^^
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If you're new to CG I think this is fairly well. You're coloring inside the outlines at least. It'd probably be a good idea to learn how to clean up lineart so it isn't so sketchy, no? (Or just redraw the lines on a new layer). And once you learn that, start shading some more! (And highlights.) Once you get that down, then you can focus on details and ect. Oh, and you might want to start pondering about what to do with background...just to make the image more interesting. Sorry that I'm not familar with the program you're using.
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Wow! Thanks for the critique! You are right I need to work on cleaning up the drawing, shading, and backgrounds. Thanks for the c&c! ^^
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Very cute, I especially like the shoes and the panda although her right leg seems a bit too twisted..
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thank you! ^^ Love your siggy btw. It's awesome! ^^
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Thanks...lots of people seem to like it...
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I did't pose it, i just coloured it. The artist that posed it, drew it, and created the character is sppanda, please view his page here: [link]
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Aw she's so cute! I love her hair too. Great work
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Thank you very much!
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this looks cute.. I think you should try cleaning it up a bit before CGing it... it looks a little dirty...
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Yes, I know. My bad for the messiness of the picture. I have the same picture only cged in PhotoStudio 5, and it looks cleaner. Maybe I'll post it later.
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It's only messy because of the pencil lines, not your cging nessa-chan... but you can't really change that because it's sppanda's original. I think it makes it look even cuter^^
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really? thanks kristin-chan. ^^
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Aaawe! This is sooo cute! I luff the panda theme! Great coloring!
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lol. Well the panda theme does suit sppanda, who is the artist who drew it, so it makes sense. ^^ Thanks for the comment!
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Mmmm!! Definately! ^-^ Nu problem!
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I really love this look. A painted picture with the sketch lines
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Wow. really!? Thank you so much!! 
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Hey, this is cute.
But actually, I'm really impressed with your coloring job. I don't see too many pics where the pencil shading looks good with the CG-ing. Very nice ^_^
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Thank you so much!!! I actually want to delete the pencil markings though...but it's to late for that. I'll have to start from the beggining if I wish to have no pencil lines. Thanks so much for the comment!!
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