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Published: 2004-08-01 18:45:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 343; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 28
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this is a photography and poetry combo. I took the picture first, then made up a lil' poem for it later on. I have to say I am more proud of my photo then my poetry for this peice, hence why I put it into the photo section instead. ^^ please give me your comments and critiques.[edit] please note that I do not have a digital camera and I did not develope this film myself. I have a regular camera which I bought grocery store film for and got them developed at wal mart. This may be an explanation why this photo may not be at it best looking quality. I may take more photos of this park once in my photography 11 class and have a better camera and have been taught how to use it and to develope my own film. thanks. ^^
Seeking:
Across the bridge, over the murky water
You may find what you seek.
But others before you, may come to destroy you, for you may be looking for what they seek.
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Comments: 4
You use seek too much in that little bit is all. As for the pic. its pretty^^ Though it does look very murky and slightly blurry near the center. Maybe if that bush on the left side wasn't there, it would look prettier as well..
where the hell did you take that picture ne ways?
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lol. Like I said, it was a crappy lil' poem. I just added it later. ^^ this picture? I took it at a lil' park that's just down my street. Like it? ^^
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its nice...just like i said, kinda blurry and undefined.
U goin to Nikki's bday right? what time is it and stuff, info. She says she'll phone me...but write me a note if you know^^
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Actually it's Nikki and my party. We decided to combine them. ^^ It's next friday. You'll have to come here in the morning though. We're having a girls morning. We're going out and getting massages and stuff. Not to mention swimming in my new pool. ^^ then later at night, we'll go out and hang out with the guys. Then I'll have a few people sleepover. You'll be one of them of course. ^^
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