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Evalnia β€” Less than nothing
Published: 2013-07-14 19:55:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description To be light as a ballerina
With bones made of angel feathers
And skin made of broken glass
Fragments of porcelain and paper tissue
To be more than light
To be weightless
To d i s a p p e a r
Piece by piece
Lifted like a balloon up into the air
To be a whisper in the wind
To walk in the snow without leaving footprints
To be no one and nothing
Less than nothing
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Comments: 11

Evenio [2013-07-18 19:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Veery well done my friend, this truly has a great message to show off by an incredible well-considered use of wordsΒ 

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Evalnia In reply to Evenio [2013-07-18 19:42:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And thank you for taking time to read, fave and comment my friend, it means so much

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Evenio In reply to Evalnia [2013-07-18 20:21:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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chromeantennae [2013-07-15 04:28:25 +0000 UTC]

This gives off such an incredible ethereal feel to it. Amazing.

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Evalnia In reply to chromeantennae [2013-07-15 11:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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chromeantennae In reply to Evalnia [2013-07-15 15:50:03 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

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SebastianGrimm [2013-07-14 20:58:09 +0000 UTC]

I've been away lately but as I see your style keeps improving! The visuals here are pretty catchy especially the italic and bold give the visuals a very particular touch!

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Evalnia In reply to SebastianGrimm [2013-07-14 21:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you so much, I've been away for a few weeks in Spain myself ^^'
I'm not sure I understand, would you mind eleborating that?

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SebastianGrimm In reply to Evalnia [2013-07-14 21:10:22 +0000 UTC]

Definitely The words that you wrote in italic, bold and separated letters give the visuals a more uniform touch and also change the rhythm which here is very suiting

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Evalnia In reply to SebastianGrimm [2013-07-14 21:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see.. I thought you meant the language Italian and I didn't understand ^^' Thank you!

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SebastianGrimm In reply to Evalnia [2013-07-14 21:25:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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