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Description Guess who got a redesign. (Dancer is no longer a creepypasta OC. She is now just a plain monster oc for an origional comic I am working on called The Hive)


pasta Name: Blood Moon Dancer

human name: Roxanne Linda Irving

Story link: n/a yet (i am still working on it.)

Species: Serpent Night Walker
Alignment: monster

Real Form: Dancer snake form ref

Diet: Hyper Carnivore. though she still has a omnivores digestive ability, she is primarily carnivorous needing more protein to maintain her real forms bulk. Though she'll eat fruits and veggies in her facade form if needed.

Height: 5'1" (facade) ; 65'7"(Real form)

Weight: 5 tons

Bust size:  B (normally), low c (heat season) ((they only look big in this ref because boobs are so hard to draw sometimes :,D))

Age: 8 (since becoming a monster) ; body and actual age is 32.

eye color: Translucent  grey (the color tints with the base color of her clothing, wearing black/white/grey does not cause the translucence effect.) Red in tReal form

Hair color: Brown

Skin color: light tan. true body: Pastel blue that looks almost white with very pale yellow body and cyan tips.

sexuality: Demi-sexual and Hetero-romantic; Dancer is strait but she will only experience sexual attraction towards someone who she forms a very close bond with before hand, such as a "friend"

Design Misc: Various scars hidden by clothing on her legs 5 in total 3 on right 2 on left, has one over her right eyebrow, and one on her left wrist. Has a snake tattoo in the shape of a 3 on her lower right back, resting on her lower back

Birthday: March 27th (not her actual birthday, mbm underlings mark their convergence day as their birthday)

Weapon: hidden blades (used for gutting/skinning prey), Teeth (used to crush bone), venom, Claws (that she uses to maim/blind her victims)

Attitude level: High (Mouth full of teeth with a bad attitude)

Personality/behavior:
- Good problem solving skills: Dancer is quite clever when getting herself out of trouble. No matter how difficult the problem dancer can find a way to weasel around it.

-Hot headed: Dancer is cursed to express only anger, and suffers from a genetic abnormality causing her hormones to fluctuate. This makes her have moments of uncontrollable rage, which causes her to black out if her anger is pushed to its limits.  She will not remember what she does during said black outs. all she knows is she gets extremely violent and lashes out at the source of the irritation.

-cold: Dancers very cold to people who try and talk to her. She is extremely blunt when telling them off, and often just plain ignores someone when she inst hunting them.

-has a sense of humor, but cant show it: Dancer loved to laugh when she was human, and still does. However because her master locked her in a permanent emotion of anger, dancer cant even laugh or smile, regardless if she wanted to or not.. She especially loves corny puns, and she builds quicker bonds if they can make her laugh, on the inside, since she cant on the outside.

-loner/poor social skills: Dancer doesn't like to be in large groups or around people she doesn't know. And touching her is a huge no no, regardless if your her friend or not. Dancer also does not like to talk and will often stay completely silent in most conversations. because she is so silent you often cannot tell what shes thinking.

-Extremely protective. even though dancer cant show it she is capable of feeling enough love towards someone to want to protect them with her life. Any child she has she is extremely protective over. This is elevated ten fold if its regarding her offspring.

-Forgetful: Dancer often forgets a lot of things even moments after being told. She cant help it because her hormones cause her brain to often go blank about a lot of things that she should be able to remember with no problem, she even sometimes forgets her own name and where she is. the only time this doesn't effect her is if she has a grudge or has a specific target when hunting.

-Over thinks: Dancer constantly second guesses herself even when shes right due to being raised by strict parents who wanted her very best. Dancer doesn't like to let those around her down and she will often overthink herself to the point of stress or a panic attack. This makes her a easily stressed out individual.

-Loyal: Dancer is doggedly loyal. There is no pasta monster species as loyal as night walkers, and to earn her loyalty is considered either dumb luck or a reason for other monsters to fear you.

-Loving..in a way: Dancer though she is stuck showing only anger can be extreamly loving to those she's close to. Though dancer doesn't like being touched, she doesn't mind it if its on her terms. If one has a bond close enough with dancer they will most likely find themselves a snakes pillow, because dancer is a sleep cuddler, though she denies it. Another way dancer shows affection is nipping and grooming, usually by playfully biting clothing or playing with someones hair.

-Gets jealous easily: Dancer always been the jealous type, even when she was human. However since the death of her lover, dancer envies those who have lover, or children who have both parents in their lives. Because of how unfair she finds the world for taking away the father of her child, she tends to kill and devour the boyfriends, fiances, and husbands of other females, human or monster.

-Family oriented: Dancer is very protective of her family and loves them despite what happened to her. She often writes to her parents to let them know shes alright and remind them not to worry about her. However, she wont tell them what shes become. She occasionally sends them pictures of her daughter Gypsy so they can watch their granddaughter grow up since dancer wont risk letting Gypsy near humans. Though dancer hasn't talked to her younger brother since she became a beast, she misses him terribly and wonders how hes doing.

-Caring/gentle: Despite her massive bulk and mean demeanor dancer can be incredibly soft-hearten towards children and knows how to be gentle with them, no matter their species and size. Dancer cannot bring herself to harm a child under the age of 13, even if shes starving. Dancer will often look after orphaned monsters, protecting them from predators until they can survive on their own. However if she re-encounters them after they've reached the age of adulthood she will kill and eat them if she is hungry, the only exception is her biological offspring or offspring of her pack mates.

-lazy/ fatigued easily: If dancer is not hungry and is not hunting she will often spend her time asleep. She is known to sleep 13+ hours. Her fatigue is linked to her depression leaving her drained of energy and motivation, despite the amount of sleep she gets

Abilities:  Is able to communicate with snakes/serpents with telepathic powers, Can swap between her human body and her real body (uses real as last resort), Has 2 types of poison, one that kills which is in her snake body and one that works as a sedative in her human body. her snake body can crush a car if she coils around it due to its massive size and weight.

Disorders:
-suffers from depression: Because of the emotion lock placed on her by her master dancer cannot show anything but rage if she feels extreme emotions, though she can feel other emotions, they will never show. this has caused her to be depressed and she finds her existence meaningless. this is also why she rarely talks to people. there is no point of trying to if she can only show anger, and being so angry makes her feel miserable to the point she sometimes tries to make others feel just as bad.

 Dancers depression often leads her to periods of fatigue where she doesn't even have the energy or motivation to move or feed herself, due to not being able to medicate herself early on in her depression it has worsened over the years, if her depression dives too rapidly during a flare up, dancer will find herself so exhausted she will collapse and enter a comatose state for a week to three weeks. once she wakes up her hunger will be so great she will even turn on anyone be it friend or foe and consume any meat she can get her claws on to try and sate her voracious appetite.

Rival(s): Whispering Death, Laz.

Children:  Official; Gypsy: fathered by blue moon siren- female, 60 ft long serpent who acts like a 4-year-old human, and is age locked at four, as her mother is age locked in her late 20's. No children conceived yet with Leviathan.


Deeper Explanation of BMD and her behavioral patterns:
Rivalries:

Has a rivalry with her "big brother" Whispering Death because they both fight over whos their leaders favorite, Both constantly seek her praise and try and out hunt one another. Dancer also has aggression towards him for being bigger than her, and using it to his advantage. she constantly gets on his nerves purposely because she knows damaging his pride will get a visceral reaction out of him, and she relishes in the reaction because he knows if he reacts to her, she wins.

Dancer doesn't like Laz because she is romantically involved with Big's (Chaotic sam) Dancer also constantly seeks praise from bigs because he is the alpha of the group, besides their master. She doesn't like his positive attention going to someone outside the group, especially someone who is from a rival family. Dancer also holds a lot of respect for sam because he is the one who feeds her as well as punishes her. And because Laz is tampering with her alpha (a.k.a messing with the hand that feeds dancer) dancer tries her best to scare her away, even though laz isn't a threat, Dancer has no problem getting aggressive or trying to bite. Dancer takes stealing food from her extremely personally.

Senses and movements:
Dancer has poor eyesight, though its not bad enough that she'd need glasses it does ruin her depth perception. Dancer also has slightly poorer hearing as well. In order to make up for the poor eyesight and hearing her sense of smell is almost unrivaled among the fossil record, being able to smell up to 50 miles, because of this her territory is a circle with a diameter of 50 miles. Dancer is also able to pick up on thermal energy aka body heat, which helps her hunt in colder weather if she has to hunt animals (this is how snakes see). To help her hunt dancer tracks in a zig-zag motion, so she will find a desirable angle to the scent of her prey on the wind, this also helps her triangulate on the exact location of a creature or carcass.

Dancers small facade size allows her to be more agile and despite the size she moves fairly quickly, This allows her to run down prey that flees. She also has the highest speed and endurance abilities in her group, Allowing her to track prey for longer and farther. She is usually half starved by her team, so that her senses and speed are heightened. which is perfect for having to use her for tracking a specific prey item, however this also makes her more unpredictable. If starved to long she will become uncontrollable and will kill mass amounts of prey in a single area to try and sate herself. this because a red flag for her group because if too many humans wind up missing or if a lot of big animals are killed in mass numbers that could get authorities more involved, and the last thing they want is to draw too much attention.
 

Intimidation/killing methods
When hunting dancer will frequent dance clubs/bars and uses her looks and body through dancing to lure men/women into taking her home with them. by using seduction techniques she puts her prey into a false sense of security. After all how can a woman who was just dancing at a night club be bad? However they don't get the chance to take advantage of her willingness to go home with them.

Upon entering the home she bites them, which causes the victim to collapse because her facade venom causes parallelization in terms that the prey can't move, yet the subject is able to feel everything that happens to them. when the victim wakes, the brunet woman is replaced by her true body, in which she slowly skins the prey using her massive claws and feasts on it, like a cat toying with a mouse, she takes her time with her prey as long as she's not starving. Dancer normally eats the skin first because its soft, then after that eats the liver because its the most nutritious part of the body (hypercarnivores are known to go for the liver first). If the victim survives the skinning and harvest of their liver, she reverts to her facade and uses her hunting knife to gut out their intestine and Hangs them by the long organ until they die of blood loss or strangulation, she only uses the blades because it makes a cleaner cut then her claws do, and she is a stickler for clean lines and cuts. She also uses the blades to cut up prey/rivals as she dances, which is how she earned her name. Her dancing is sporadic and unpredictable when shes using it to fight. This makes it difficult to find an opening to strike at her. Though she is small and honestly doesn't hit very hard she is very fast and the blades are extremely sharp in order to provide deeper wounds despite dancers weaker physical attack. If she doesn't kill them right away she will gladly let them bleed out.

however, when it comes to dancers snake body, she has a timer for how long she can be in said body. With the body's massive size she must consume enough meat to support its bulk, hunting one human a night means she can only be a snake for 15 minutes tops, if she's hungry she can only hold it for 5.

To intimidate other creatures she often displays violent lash outs or gets big by releasing her facade hoping size will drive off any other creature. If that fails she will start biting, if bitten when she is in her true body the poison will kill the victim in a matter of days, melting their insides slowly. the major downside is she heals much slower in her true body and it burns way more energy then she can recharge if a fight were to break out. because of this her getting big is seen as a last resort as she doesn't want to burn herself out.

Motives for killing:
1) Dancer is primarily a carnivorous creature, but she is still considered an omnivore. because of her size she has to take in massive amounts of food a day and meat is her main source of proteins which her real body needs heaps of in order to maintain its muscle mass. Dancer hunts all types of large game, but humans are the easiest for her to get a hold of. they are very easily manipulated.

2) Dancers prime targets are Healthy adult males. The reason being is because her human lover was perfectly healthy when he died and she has huge jealousy toward women whose husbands/boyfriends are healthy and alive. She doesn't find it fair that the father of her child died and she was forced to go through pregnancy alone but these humans can have their mates support them in everything.

3) Her master requires human blood in order to free her from a seal that prevents her from freely roaming the world. Taking advantage of Roxanne's weakened mental state due to losing her lover and being pregnant. Preying on the woman and robbing her of her humanity was an easy task. Now that dancer isn't human she does as her master says. if she doesn't her child will suffer. what kind of mother would she be if she let her child suffer for a species she isn't apart of anymore.

Weaknesses/Downsides:

- Poor body temperature control: Despite being a snake, dancer's species is still considered a warm-blooded creature. However, if the temperature drops below 75 degrees Fahrenheit her body will slowly shut down as it cannot maintain a consistent temperature in cold climates without her metabolism starving her. This means Dancer cannot hunt during cold seasons or in cold climates.

- Dancer cannot traverse unstable terrain/frail terrain. She weighs too much and if the ground cannot support her weight it can become a hazard for herself or her hive.

- Has a large blind spot when in her real form due to the cobra hood she has, she cannot see creatures coming from behind her and it limits how far she can turn her neck without moving her upper body along with it. This makes her easy to sneak up on.

- If shedding dancer cannot hunt or defend herself properly because the shedding flesh and scales restricts her movements. Once its shed, her new skin and scales are very soft and easily damaged for roughly 3 hours after she sheds, after those 3 hours the air and sunlight would have hardened her new skin enough to defend herself again.

breeding and rearing habits:
Dancer comes into heat once a year, however, this only happens if she doesn't have a 'mate'. her breeding season normally occurs in the winter. When in heat she becomes more violent and she becomes super flirty and gets physical in a platonic/romantic way(a complete 180 of her normal disposition.) Due to the extra hormones, her facade bust size slightly increases from a large b cup to a small c cup, and her appetite goes through the roof causing her to hunt excessively, almost to the point of waste.

If she breeds and has offspring she becomes extremely protective of said child. even the wrong look at her young can cause her to snap and lash out. Dancer also tends to hide her young away and tends to bury them in a heap of blankets to make sure they are warm. Her maternal instinct also causes her to become sympathetic towards children, so when hunting she will often not hunt children, or families with very small children, younger than 13. However, once her children are old enough she stops being extremely protective of them, this usually occurs when the child reaches puberty. Though she will still protect them if they call for her aid.

About her clothing/accessories:
When Dancers master MBM converted her to a nightwalker, she had to choose something she owned as a human to take with her. This was to remind her of her past humanity and keep her in line. Without a reminder she would lose what's left of herself in the primal behavior of her new body, this will make her uncontrollable and basically turn her into a feral animal, thus her master would have her executed, for she would be useless that way. She decided to use her blood gem earings as said item. These earings hold the blood of gypsy's father.Bback when he died his family had his blood entombed into jewels to keep in remembrance of him. Dancer received 2 pairs, one for her and one for her unborn baby at the time. As for dancers dress, It was designed for her as part of the uniform of the Hive. Its primarily red to show that she represents their masters wrath.

Family:
-Mate: Leviathan
- Children:
     -Current:Gypsy - 6yrs old (Sired by Siren when Dancer was human Born after she was transformed).
     -Future children: Bermuda, JAX, Maddy (Sired by Leviathan)
-Mother: Susan Ann Irving
-Father: Gerard Irving
-Brother: Micah Edward Irving
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Comments: 31

Metylover2143 [2019-01-01 04:19:13 +0000 UTC]

I love the dress

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rileyticcixxx [2018-07-16 17:56:10 +0000 UTC]

She is so awsome!!

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to rileyticcixxx [2018-07-16 22:49:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you! ^^


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rileyticcixxx In reply to Eve-Of-Halloween [2018-07-16 23:18:29 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome!!!

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sunart123 [2017-05-15 02:11:21 +0000 UTC]

i do like is oc

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BDD-CriticalBlue In reply to sunart123 [2017-07-05 21:53:05 +0000 UTC]

Definetly not dancing tango with this one 😑

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to sunart123 [2017-05-15 06:06:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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sunart123 In reply to Eve-Of-Halloween [2017-05-15 14:36:30 +0000 UTC]

^^

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LunarSpawnSerenata [2016-08-29 19:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Her entire design reminds me of Anna Williams! That is so cool!  

(nooffense)

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MekakushiSekai [2016-03-19 16:01:21 +0000 UTC]

GOOOOOOOODDD!
I love Dancer!
...
Idk if this is an accident
but
My oc have name Roxanne too xD
And I too xDDDDDD
Oh god xd

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to MekakushiSekai [2016-03-30 05:35:12 +0000 UTC]

I gave her that name cause it's my middle name and my grandmother's name.

And I'm glad you like Dancer UwU

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MekakushiSekai In reply to Eve-Of-Halloween [2016-03-30 15:20:58 +0000 UTC]

And this my name xD

Dancer is very amazing <3

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YunaiNinjaMistress15 [2016-03-11 04:35:41 +0000 UTC]

x3 i never thought she looks good in a Chinese style themed dress them i think it looks good and kool style clothing for her

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NaluCreatures943 [2016-03-10 06:53:08 +0000 UTC]

So cool!!

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NightmareQueenKasei [2016-03-07 15:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god see looks soooo awesome!!

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MiloMcFly [2016-03-06 03:31:43 +0000 UTC]

oh my gOD THIS LOOKS SO GOOD YAS SENPAI

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to MiloMcFly [2016-03-06 08:58:15 +0000 UTC]

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hintaboco [2016-03-06 03:23:24 +0000 UTC]

wow she looks beautiful~

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to hintaboco [2016-03-06 08:59:10 +0000 UTC]

^^ Im glade you think so. even though in retrospect dancer average :,D

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hintaboco In reply to Eve-Of-Halloween [2016-03-06 14:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Dancer is my favorite out of your characters and this new look makes me like her even more~
Plus that dress you made for her really fits her well~

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to hintaboco [2016-03-06 23:00:13 +0000 UTC]

ty ^^

im glad to see people are reacting well to the new look

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AthenatheWitch [2016-03-05 13:28:47 +0000 UTC]

That is one awesome redesign

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to AthenatheWitch [2016-03-06 08:58:41 +0000 UTC]

ty UwU

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AthenatheWitch In reply to Eve-Of-Halloween [2016-03-06 13:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Welcome :3 it's got so many neat aspects to it

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StickStickly1559 [2016-03-05 11:40:09 +0000 UTC]

Hm well done 

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LilWeaklin [2016-03-05 09:29:23 +0000 UTC]

I love how ye incorporated the traditional Chinese look in her outfit and the blades //le faints
*great Dancer evolution*xD

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to LilWeaklin [2016-03-05 09:38:03 +0000 UTC]

Well it's not fully traditional as she has a mesh laced ovals on the back and belly, to kinda reflect on her old dress. But other then that the basic dress shape and cut is fairly traditional just a bit longer in the slits on the sides. So she can move better

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LilWeaklin In reply to Eve-Of-Halloween [2016-03-05 09:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Ah~ I didn't mean fully of course ^^
but seriously, yer thought on the redesign is real awesome >w<

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Eve-Of-Halloween In reply to LilWeaklin [2016-03-05 09:44:37 +0000 UTC]

T was about time Dancer has some love put into her. Her old dress wasn't really working to make seem like a respectable or intimidating character. I feel this dresses colors help bring out dancers inner don't fuck with her attitude

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LilWeaklin In reply to Eve-Of-Halloween [2016-03-05 10:36:32 +0000 UTC]

It sure does
//double thumbs up

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ImmediateLight [2016-03-05 08:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Goooorrrggeeeeoouuuusssss!!! X////3

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