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Midnights0 [2022-05-15 13:51:29 +0000 UTC]
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Coolposh [2020-08-03 20:56:53 +0000 UTC]
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Evil-DeC0Y In reply to Coolposh [2020-08-04 11:57:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I get it! πππ
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Nightmare-Serenade33 In reply to ZChuck [2014-09-26 14:42:34 +0000 UTC]
Wait, no! I didn't mean to mark your critique as unfair! Oh darn! Please forgive me!
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phyrexianrevoker [2012-08-27 11:53:39 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Since I already gave my personal opinion in the comments I will just talk about the art.
(Sorry for eventual grammar problems. English is not my main language and I try my best)
Technique: I gave a 5.0 for techique because your drawing looks like the one of the show. Since it is a comic based on FIM it means that the show's art is the top, anthing above that is unecessary awesomeness.
Obviously, if I simply ignore the rule above, you would not receive a 5.0, which is not fair since you are required to use this kind of art to represent a comic of the show.
Impact: The comic was very funny and I really liked how you showed that equestria's economy is heavily based on sugar. Seeing discord in trixie vs. X comic was a nice surprise, but I guess people were already expecting that, thats why I gave a -1.0 point.
Originality: The concept of the Trixie Vs. X is pretty original in my opinion (I would give a 5.0 to your first one), but since you are doing a lot of it, the comic is not that original anymore.
Vision: I am not sure if I understood what Vision is supposed to mean, so I will write about what I think it is.
Discord breaking the 4th wall is awesome, and your simple explanation of how he managed to escape what very funny. Ponies shouldn't expect logical answers from the element of chaos!
The concept of equestria's sugar based economy should also be included here, that is a fun and interesting view I haven't thought before.
Final note: I have no idea if I gave a low rate or a high rate (Based on the standards used here), this is the first critique I write in Dev.
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firekitu [2019-12-29 22:47:46 +0000 UTC]
whats m.m.m.m again? i always forget...
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Evil-DeC0Y In reply to firekitu [2019-12-30 01:19:49 +0000 UTC]
Marzipan Mascarpone Meringue Madness (the cake from the train mystery episode in season 2).
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firekitu In reply to Evil-DeC0Y [2019-12-30 01:22:39 +0000 UTC]
oh yeah ive forgot about that episode... i should rewacht mlp...
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DustyDuchess [2019-06-15 17:39:04 +0000 UTC]
Lol
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Fleetwing13 [2019-06-05 22:29:08 +0000 UTC]
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fanfics4ever [2018-11-20 17:26:06 +0000 UTC]
never saw Sugar being used in zap apple jam.
Honey, yes.
Sugar, no.
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battlecruiser006 [2018-11-17 22:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Radar has picked up a helicopter going soi soi soi.
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PurpleWonderPower [2018-05-29 05:27:35 +0000 UTC]
That's just hilarious!
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papillonsisi2012 [2018-01-19 23:47:44 +0000 UTC]
Me: I SHIP THEM.Β Β
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CardmasterWild In reply to papillonsisi2012 [2018-08-07 06:56:28 +0000 UTC]
"I like your plot". The damage is done. Trixie might now think that Discord has the hots for her.
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MysticalFirestar [2018-01-10 15:18:45 +0000 UTC]
trixie is good now tho
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McOuchies [2018-01-08 23:07:34 +0000 UTC]
That was pretty good!Β XD
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ShaneLovesBambi42 [2017-12-22 01:56:33 +0000 UTC]
I will KILL YOU, DISCORD!
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Diana173076 [2017-12-13 04:44:43 +0000 UTC]
Um...what does M.M.M.M stand for?
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Evil-DeC0Y In reply to Diana173076 [2017-12-13 05:40:03 +0000 UTC]
M.M.M.M. is the cake from the episode 'Mmmmystery on the friendship express'. The one where Pinkie and Twilight try to solve the mystery of who took a bite out of the cake.
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Mike-Rosoft In reply to Diana173076 [2018-07-26 20:30:41 +0000 UTC]
"Marzipan Mascarpone Meringue Madness".
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CardmasterWild In reply to Mike-Rosoft [2018-08-07 06:58:28 +0000 UTC]
I knew it had something to do with that episode. Only thing was that I couldn't remember what kind of dessert pinkie baked.
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MattX125 [2017-10-15 00:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Well they're shipped.
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BREAKOUTLIZARD [2017-10-14 14:01:11 +0000 UTC]
Discord:hey Trixie,wanna join my DISCORD server?,eh? Get it? DISCORD? cause discord is a chat app and my name is discord.
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KawaiiUnicornUwU In reply to Player309 [2017-11-03 09:34:00 +0000 UTC]
That explains fluttershy, rarity, and rainbow dash.
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miagamer23 [2017-10-07 03:44:58 +0000 UTC]
kcool
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World-end-king [2017-08-07 17:46:37 +0000 UTC]
How about Trixie vs. Dan.
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HyrulianTwilight [2017-07-30 04:59:14 +0000 UTC]
Should be "colt"gate approved, lol
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TyrakatheDragonFan [2017-05-09 20:23:25 +0000 UTC]
I have an even better one: make Celestia disappear for about a week.
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Brolyie12 [2016-12-31 14:36:38 +0000 UTC]
Me:I challenge you out Trixie in an incantation battle
ME:Summoning Β
ME:Your turn Trixi
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AChipperSoul [2016-10-09 04:55:42 +0000 UTC]
It finally has come to pass!
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