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ExSoldat — Feelings
Published: 2010-09-29 05:55:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 491; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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The morning sun once again rises.
The day brings allot of surprises.
The morning air refreshes the tiered mind,
Reminding me and you of our strong bind.
Thinking about you puts a smile on face,
Then for me you mean allot more than the entire space.
For now we are apart,
Awaiting when things are finally going to really start.
For when we shall meet once again,
Then I can be finally your man.
The time will shortly come,
Deep inside I feel nervous and numb.
But I long for you so much,
Wishing to feel your warm gentle caring touch.
Wanting to taste your sweet lips,
And to slide my fingers down from your shoulder till your hips.
I once felt this way,
But back then it was betray,
Where my heart was once broken,
You have fixed it with your love, and I shall give it to you as my token.
I count the days,
Like at the beach the approaching waves.
For each heart is only a half,
Waiting to find the right peace of the puzzle of another hearts half.
I think its safe to say that I found my other half of heart.
Which is yours my special one.
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It is nice knowing someone cares for my poetry =]
I give my poems allot of personal feelings, for I only write them really when I have strong feeling towards someone I could say I (love) but not long, and she broke up with me, this was about maybe a month ago still fresh but no worries I'm all good again =]
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good to hear your all good now
yeah reading it I could tell that you put alot of feelings in it,
I could never do that 
well done
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Well, try it again soon, you must free yourself from anything that holds you back,
You must let everything go and express your deepest of feelings, it may not be easy to do, because in this world we all keep our guards up due to fear of being hurt by others, so maybe illustrate it in a way that its indirect, that people would be thinking:
Is she writing about herself?
Or is she writing the feelings of a certain character?
So what I mean by this is that if your afraid of really reveling your true feelings to everyone, then hide it behind some character or something like that, that may help you to truly express yourself.
Like maybe mix your feelings with a story of a female elf.
And I shall look for your poem where you wrote about yourself if you have it uploaded here =]
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haha WOW
thats exactly right
as soon as I wrote it I started deleting so many parts of it becuase I was afraid,
I think that would work!!!!
I'll TRY to write more about me
thanx for making it sound alot easier
it's in the album 'creations' and it;s called in this dream
be honest and tell me what you REALLY think of it
female elf sounds awesome haha
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I shall have a sneak peek now so
And I will be strictly honest so
And I'm really glad I was able to help! n.n
Yeah I was kinda playing this game before and there are Elfs in it, so I used it as a reference xD
And use your imagination, just like art and music there is no limits to poetry, pure fantasy if you want it like that =]
So... *Flies of to read your poem =]*
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aa-ooo, nah I love feedback
always helps to improve
thank you so much
haha well Elf it is
what should her name be????
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Hmm a name eh?
Well I'm thinking names like; Crysta, Kristin, or maybe even give her extraordinary names like Xenil Dask, Zynoa Shard or Tothale Uhrd, I googled those, but they could help you to come up with a name, maybe mix like: Kristin Uhrd =]
I don't know but that would be my helping advise
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woww they all sound soo good, I especially like Zynoa and Tothale
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So the choice is all yours n.n
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