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ExSoldat — If I could tell you...
Published: 2010-08-20 20:22:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 174; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description There are days,
When your just in that phase...

When your feeling down,
Feeling the burden of your very own crown...

You are searching for a reason for your living,
But everything just seems like unforgiving...

Being lost and alone,
Feeling much like a heavy stone,
You begin to question and give into heavy thought,
Ending up trapped and caugh...

Then you find a source of light,
Shining so beautiful and bright...

I have found you...
The one that brings me joy,
The one that fills my heart.

Every day now is a gift,
You wake up with a smile,
Hoping this luck will never end.

Finding finally the reason to life,
You can now go to sleep in utmost peace.
With thoughts that allow you to sleep without worry about the next morning.

If I could tell you my feeling,
It would be only healing.

Yet there is a distance that holds me back,
Deep hollow and black.

Feeling like I'm losing you,
That I cannot tell you what I'm feeling for you.
Yet feel a pressure forcing me to wanting to tell you,
But scared of telling since it might distant you more.

If I just could tell you...

That you are the one...
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Comments: 5

Soopa-Doopa-Cutie [2010-10-31 15:54:04 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful !!
we have more incommon than I thought haha
I love the rhymes and the meanings behind the words,

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ExSoldat In reply to Soopa-Doopa-Cutie [2010-10-31 16:07:24 +0000 UTC]

We do?
Its nice knowing that someone thinks or feels alike like I do.. =]
I kinda have the belief that a poem must rhyme xD (I know it does not have to but still)
I don't really like the poems that do not rhyme so I made this to a habit, and thank you from my heart, that this is to your liking, thank you for your time to read this =]

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XxEmoVeggiexX [2010-08-20 22:50:38 +0000 UTC]

very enjoyable to read

those are wise words you put in this poem to. this poem is wonderful

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ExSoldat In reply to XxEmoVeggiexX [2010-08-21 18:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it =]
Hope ever one finds the person they are searching for.

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XxEmoVeggiexX In reply to ExSoldat [2010-08-21 23:42:31 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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