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eyenoticed — Gooseberries of Green by-nc-nd

Published: 2009-07-23 22:49:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 594; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 32
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Description This is a possibility for an entry for 's first competition. We had to choose a color and make a deviation based on that color. I chose green.

***I need all the critiques and advice I can get before submitting to this competition. Please compare to my other "Gooseberries of Green" photos I previously entered.

Thanks so much and go Jarks!
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Comments: 18

AMROU-A [2010-06-10 09:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Your work is featured here-->> [link]
Best wishes

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Sarah-on-Deviantart [2009-07-24 15:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic shot!!

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eyenoticed In reply to Sarah-on-Deviantart [2009-07-31 17:30:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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TeaFreak [2009-07-24 08:55:47 +0000 UTC]

good choice and nice edditing

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eyenoticed In reply to TeaFreak [2009-07-31 17:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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TeaFreak In reply to eyenoticed [2009-07-31 18:06:01 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome

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pip-doudelle [2009-07-24 01:31:02 +0000 UTC]

This one is definitely the best! Lovely.

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eyenoticed In reply to pip-doudelle [2009-07-24 01:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Yay!! Thank you

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AdamsWife [2009-07-23 23:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes! This is so much better. I like how you have blurred the surroundings, it makes the fruit stand out even more.

By the way, I have never seen a gooseberry in Australia, neither in shops or growing in anyone's garden. My dad grew them when I was a child in England, so your pictures brought back some childhood memories for me.

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eyenoticed In reply to AdamsWife [2009-07-23 23:17:01 +0000 UTC]

oh. That is awesome! Glad to bring back old memories

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Trippy4U [2009-07-23 22:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Seems to fit the bill. Nice focus on the main subject...the grapes

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eyenoticed In reply to Trippy4U [2009-07-24 04:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

but they're gooseberries...

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Trippy4U In reply to eyenoticed [2009-07-24 05:31:12 +0000 UTC]

ooops...botany is not a strong point of mine

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eyenoticed In reply to Trippy4U [2009-07-25 18:39:31 +0000 UTC]

haha, that's ok!

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kiffekiffe [2009-07-23 22:50:44 +0000 UTC]

make the center berries pop by doing something with the colors, like contrast or something, if you really want to emphasize th eblue you placed around it...

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eyenoticed In reply to kiffekiffe [2009-07-23 22:53:02 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean the blue I placed around it??

Thanks for the advice!

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kiffekiffe In reply to eyenoticed [2009-07-23 22:59:01 +0000 UTC]

sorry, typo, Blur

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eyenoticed In reply to kiffekiffe [2009-07-23 23:16:31 +0000 UTC]

ok!

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