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ArtofJefferyHebert [2014-03-25 18:44:55 +0000 UTC]
This movie was awesome! And this does it justice!
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Roinuj92 [2014-01-23 00:44:29 +0000 UTC]
This looks very nice!
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Terrortheslayer [2014-01-14 21:45:40 +0000 UTC]
What were the crab things called or did they not get a name?
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Terrortheslayer In reply to EzJedi [2014-01-14 22:16:36 +0000 UTC]
I am ^^ Can you link me to some?
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KidiMaster [2013-12-18 00:14:57 +0000 UTC]
great job man!Β
I can see you really put a lot of work in this piece! well done
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EckwOOd [2013-12-16 22:43:38 +0000 UTC]
Nice work, I think you could've risked goin darker in some places
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EzJedi In reply to EckwOOd [2013-12-16 23:01:42 +0000 UTC]
Interesting, my overall feeling was that the piece as a whole was too dark, but your comment makes me realise that it's perhaps that a wider range of values-dark and light-that are needed. I've toyed with more solid blacks at the inking stage, but it's quite unnatural for me. As has been mentioned elsewhere, a trip back to the basics of value and colour will hopefully remedy some of these flaws.Β
Thanks for your comment, it's great to get some meaningful exchanges going over this piece. It really helps me understand what I need to work on to improve, so I'm very grateful Β
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cloudlakes [2013-12-16 21:55:47 +0000 UTC]
If you look at each character they seem to have a different style of their own - and are good in their own right. Β But I think you picked a really hard lighting angle - from the center and many characters - also tough! Β My fave of the characters colored is the mystic. Β He's a great balance between the light and dark. Β (I'm starting to read up on coloring and starting to make my way through Drawn to Life (<-thanks much for the recommendation on it!!!). Β As you know, I still have a noob's perspective on it all - so take my opinion with a grain of salt.)
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EzJedi In reply to cloudlakes [2013-12-16 22:23:53 +0000 UTC]
I think it's safe to say that I'm firmly in the noob camp with you when it comes to colouring my stuff. Yeah maybe I over reached myself on this one with so much to think about, but I've always tried to push myself harder than most. I'm a firm believer in setting high goals, you just have to have thick skin to deal with the inevitable failures to begin with, but once it clicks, it clicks on a higher level. This has worked for me so far in life, but I'm drawing blanks with these damn colours. Maybe time to lick my artistic wounds and mentally regroup and start from the basics again!
Glad you're enjoying Drawn to Life, I think I'll be revisiting it myself as some of my characters have become quite rigid lately (see front center and right!). It's full of great advice, not just about art but life in general too
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cloudlakes In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-17 13:02:02 +0000 UTC]
I think I have to revise my statement about different styles for each character. Β It's the lighting that makes them look different - and that's ok. Β (I'm still learning to "see", so I hope I'm not being confusing!) Β But I woke up thinking about this image. Β It was the Skeksis that has the least contrast - he affects the piece over all. Β He's the one that's different. Β Jen also has less contrast - but not quite to the same extent as the skeksis. Β If you keep working on this piece, and I hope you do - start with the Skeksis. Β
I hope I'm not out of line for contradicting you here. Β But I don't think you over reached yourself - you just haven't perfected the piece yet. Β When I was pushing myself with photography - there were always harder shots than others. Β But when I'd get it (and there was one smoke shot that took several hundreds of photos to get) - it's worth it!
High goals are good. Β And I admire you for it. Β Keep pushing yourself!Β
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EzJedi In reply to cloudlakes [2013-12-17 13:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your thoughts, it seems this piece has stirred a lot of conflicting opinions on what works and what doesn't. Honestly I'm probably not going to go back to it, but it's definitely left me feeling like I need to go back and revisit the basics a bit to iron out some of the flaws in my work.
Cheers for your further thoughts, I'm not sure if the fact you woke up thinking about it is a good or bad thing!
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cloudlakes In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-17 14:16:39 +0000 UTC]
well, know that I love your art and look up to you.
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reneedicherri [2013-12-16 19:40:47 +0000 UTC]
Really great composition! If you want some critique, I might turn the image black and white and look at where you values & shading choices are doing you favors (or disservice!)
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reneedicherri In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-16 21:50:24 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes you just gotta move on - it's ok for every piece not to be a knockout. Even though I try to do the same x[
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reneedicherri In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-16 22:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry about it!!
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Artemiche [2013-12-16 15:28:14 +0000 UTC]
I really love that movie! It was awesome...
The characters are perfect. The composition of going from one front face character in the foreground, and building towards more profil characters in the back is very pleasing to the eye.
I think you got the essence of it. It is really a light against dark movie.
Maybe to much dark overall, not enough light.
Maybe split the canvas, one side light, the other dark?
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Artemiche In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-16 16:16:15 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure!
Thought so. The composition had the feel of going that way... The balance between evil and good.
But you came out on top, with a different twist, and that is always good!
Maybe a background done it shade going from a point of light in the middle background, behind the characters, to darkest in the foreground... That would explain the line of light around the composition. A backlighting...
Just babbling, here!
He, he, it's always easier to comment than to actually do the work.
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EzJedi In reply to Artemiche [2013-12-16 16:27:21 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, no problem, it's always good to get thoughts and feedback. I think in general a bit more time spent detailing the background would've been beneficial. Still, you live and learn right?
Thanks so much for the feedback
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Artemiche In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-16 17:04:26 +0000 UTC]
My great pleasure!
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Yakuza55 [2013-12-16 15:23:18 +0000 UTC]
I've heard about this movie and how, umm derpy it isΒ
and this shows me just how derpy it is
nice work though
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Yakuza55 In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-16 15:29:40 +0000 UTC]
I have one last thing to say.
this looks a bit like The Never Ending Story is there some kind of connection.Β
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Yakuza55 In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-16 20:43:49 +0000 UTC]
cool i'm a 90s-ishkid
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Yakuza55 In reply to EzJedi [2013-12-17 02:33:34 +0000 UTC]
funny
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