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fahrenheit19-7 — :Angel remake: again
Published: 2006-11-19 10:27:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 498; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 29
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I remade it all happy as estunt suggested it to be.Well this is my new shading style. Hope you like it ^^
Any suggestions or critique given will be noted.
Ciaoness,
=fahrenheit19-7
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If you could just work on the face now. There's not enough contrast. It doesnt look too sharp in my opinion.
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Yeah i messed up the expression on this will update soon.
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great work, i agree with =BoffinbraiN tho, and i also think that the wing flap looks more like that of a butterfly than that of an angel, maybe a more bird-like flapping action would work better, altho this looks really nice too
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Those wings are awesome, fluffy but not indistinct.
Good job.
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Nice job!
I have two bits of advice for this piece. Firstly, I think the face should be a little lighter so the features are easier to see.
Secondly, at the moment, the wings flap at the exact same time as the body rising. If you want to add some physics realism to it, have the wings start to flap one or two frames before the body rises, giving it time for lift. Do you get what I mean?
Hope that inspires you.
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I totally agree on the realism factor, though this emote is already in the air and is keeping itself up now. If you get what i mean...
And yes ill try to work on some more highlights, kinda trying to find my place for the shading.
Thanks for the critique mate.
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You can always trust me to be the one to dish out the critique...
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very nice!
but I think it's face is a tad fuzzy...
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Thanks mate, yeah its just a bit fuzzy as my new shading style makes the emote just that bit rounder XD
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Thanks! Means a lot coming from you ^^
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