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Fairloke — Did you need my help...?
Published: 2017-01-07 06:02:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 4486; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 0
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My very first picture of 2017!!!! 
effort. 
This picture was inspired by 's new designs in comics.
I hope you like it!
Venetia © Fairloke
Art © Fairloke
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This is a great piece. Everything from the lighting and shading to the peaceful and soft color pallet are on-point. The style, though true to the show's appearance also has a breath of your own style, your own soul in it.
Alright now that we are done with the things you got right, let's start the nit picking and constructive critisism, shall we?
The clothes although they look fine on their own, should have a little more depth to match with the rest of the character. The neck looks a little bit off, I would suggest you looked up a reference. I don't know, it just feels that the choker should continue on to the right because her neck looks kind of surreal
But overall it's a great artwork and I look forward to see more of your art.
That's all I had to say.
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Thank you very much, sis! That's a perfect and honest critique!!!
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Thank you, sis! 
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Do you like it, Jay Jay????
Tell me, sweetheart!
Does it match your style???
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She is a Nymph. That's why she is dressed like this. And the person she is talking to needs her to help him with something. It's gonna be explained later on with the progress of the story.
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I know. XD
I just pointed it out, because some people replied as if the question was to them.
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"Yes, actually...and the dress you happen to be wearing? Perfect for the occasion. We're heading to a ball."
I had to look at the name again to see that it was you and not Jason. Very well done!
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Hehehe!
This means that I did it right! XD
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"NOW HELP ME WITH THIS CORSET."
That you did
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Why does she look like she just accidentally walked in on someone jacking off and she's trying to pretend she didn't notice it? XD
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Sorry, I don't like this type of comments....
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Sorry. I just said what was on my mind at the time. It won't happen again.
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Hehehe!
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*hanging upside down* no, i just need you to stand there and watch. WHAT DO YOU THINK!?
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This reminded me of a scene in The Legend of Korra. XD
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