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fantafestis — good night. fade out.
Published: 2011-01-27 14:39:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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i want you to fuck mei want it to hurt
i want you to take me out of this world
i want you to love me
i want it to burn
i want you to make me irrevocably yearn
i want you to see me
i want it to scar
i want you to throw me right out of this car
i want you to kill me
i want it to last
i don't want a future, a now or a past.
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You're seriously master at rhyming and a poetic genius. I really love the last verse, especially the very last line.
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Hearing that from you really means more than you know. 
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My very first poem, Shayna. :3 It halfway sucksm but oh well. Makes me giddy that you liked it. <3
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It does not suck AT ALL! <3 You are an incredible writer! What you think sucks, trust me, does not!
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I just speak the truth, dear! ^_^
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A-aw, thank you. n.n <3 It makes me gooey inside when you like what I write. :33
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It does not suck AT ALL! <3 You are an incredible writer! What you think sucks, trust me, does not!
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You'll get it, trust me on that.
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How would you feel if I submitted this to more groups? To make it more popular?
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I'd say go right ahead, dear. It can't hurt to get more attention, could it? <3
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A very different poem, looking in a way that most of do not. I love the idea, and the utter beauty of the poem. It really is something unique.
What were you thinking when you wrote "i want you to throw me right out of this car." Is that a metaphor over the fact that you want to leave?
Again, very beautiful.
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W-wow, thank you. I definitely never thought anybody would bother with commenting, much less adding it to their favorites, but I'm grateful.
I was in the kind of mindset one gets when they realize they hurt so much from being ignored that they'd prefer any sort of emotional response over indifference; so yes, it was a wayi of saying that I wanted to leave as much as I wanted some sort of a reaction.
But this poem is very bad compared to how (hopefully) much I've grown as a writer lately, and I'm grateful you took the time to read, comment and fave. It really does mean a ton to me.
<3
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Well be grateful my friend! Take every signal favorite, and comment to heart. (Unless they are mean! 
Very beautifully spoken, and thought out. You have an art for explaining these things!!!
Bad? Well then I really am looking forward to seeing more!!! You have been here a year ( I think) Yet only one poem?
I really wish for you to post more!!! You utterly astound me.
So you are very welcome, and I am looking forward to seeing more!
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T-thank you, really.
Well, I have over thirty poems on my computer, but some of them need special things (italics, a certain amount of space between letters/words) and I haven't yet figured out how to make that happen here. :/ So that's very restricting and limiting, to say the least.
And I was pretty sure I had deleted that poem, so imagine my surprise when you came along, loving it! <3
I'll probably post a few more in the near future. <3
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YAY! MORE!!!
Well there are many information things if you look through the site.
So you could learn more things from that..
I am very happy you didn't delete it! I will, be sending this too all my friends!
Looking forward to it!!!!
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Aw, it makes me happy that you hold it in such high regard.
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