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Published: 2013-12-03 23:46:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 502; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 1
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OKKOKOKOKKKKK. i'm soooooooooooooo sorry if i am dumb and got it all wrong! but i just mixed some of the different character attributes you had of Pudding and tried to mosh them together, ie: the wings, ears, tail, outfit, etcccc...Early in the making of this piece i originally had her with no clothes at all and purple hair cause i didn't put two and two together and didn't look in youur gallery!! but i think it's all set now, (: let me know if anything looks off or doesn't fit what you had hoped for, i'll go in and edit as much as i can!
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This one is stunning, i love the color scheme, the shading, the highlights, and oh mai gawd the faces are just soooo cute. The hair and what accessories and such perfectly
dictate there personalities. The Boobs have pretty big impact too (On their bras).
Nor for the negatories,
That side ward facing breast, I think you can already see the problem, but lemmie explain how to fix it, try imagining females to the side or find a image on google images and try to draw it not so "rock" looking i guess.
Also on the right side of the head of the girl with the brown on, there is a noodle strand remmber to watch out for that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
One more thing, one of the wings feathers are growing outward instead of being proportional with the other wing ( Not saying it has to be exactly proportional just make it look like it grew the same way as the other) (Unless this was done purposely)
Besides that this image is very neat and deserves recognition, Good Job.
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I think the shading is really nice and all at the right parts. It makes the characters look more realistic. The details of each character stands out too, which is a good thing. Especially the clothes and hair and skin. The eyes are perfect :> In my opinion, maybe you can add a bit more shading on the wings, so it would not look too transparent. And if you want to make the hair better, you can add more shading too, like extending the lines using a slightly light color. But still, the hair is really nice. The background is good too, it makes the characters stand out. The originality is there too. Good job >< I really love it. I'm sorry if I'm bad at giving critiques.
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it does look really good actually. Its hard to put to characters in the same shot and make it work, so I can commend you on that effort. I love the expressions and the clothes, they're very colorful and bright which just adds to the beauty of the whole peace.
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Hope you don't mind if i study the eyes and facial features of your drawing , i really love how it looks and it could improve my technique 
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i dont mind at all! i can whip you up a sheet of reference eyes if you'd like and if it would at all help you!
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I would love that, Thanks a lot
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