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fauxgravityThe Curvature Of Oh

Published: 2003-09-21 01:17:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 7240; Favourites: 255; Downloads: 237
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Tod’s a mute, it doesn’t matter why. It doesn’t matter why, but Tod’s a mute. He sometimes wants the world to spin so fast that he’s on the other side and he’s singing, he’s singing so loud that the crows in the rooftops stop their noise because there isn’t any point because no-one’s listening, because they’re all listening to Tod. God stops to hear Tod sing. But Tod can’t sing, not at the rate this world spins. He can’t sing.

Tod starts to paint. Starts in his room at the sound of the door, but the sound’s only so loud because it never comes from his mouth the way we sometimes surprise ourselves with words we never planned. Starts to paint with his right hand and learns to spoon chicken noodles into his mouth with his left, and Tod paints around a plate and stares at the daubed red sun that’s hollow and always mouthing Oh.

When the couple across the street walk out of their front door a few mornings later they’re on their way to work and on their car (it is red) is written: Go To Sleep. And they’re so angry, they walk across the street because they’ve seen that little mute boy painting red wherever he can, but never on cars before now. He paints round red ‘Oh’s on sheets of paper torn from one long roll his father gave to him and the sound the paper makes when the brush hits it is Oh, it’s an explosion, it’s a fire starting. They knock on the door, three times, they’re so angry, and Tod answers the door and he shakes his head No when they ask him did he paint the Go To Sleep on their car? And he shakes his head No.

When the girl with white shoes and white teeth crosses the road she sees written next to the white lines in the road in red paint a perfect line of words that read: Go To Sleep Suburbia. And she tells her friend who says Oh.

All night Tod paints, Go To Sleep, Go To Sleep, on fences and roadsigns and sometimes on cars (but only red cars), Go To Sleep Suburbia. On churches and walls, Go To Sleep.

There’s a man at the window tonight, and he sees Tod paint the perfect red line of the words that read so: Go To Sleep. And he mouths and he shouts through the double glazed window but Tod cannot hear and even so, he’s not afraid, so he stays, and he paints the curvature of the O, and begins again. The man comes out and says, “Please, tell me, what does it mean? Are you mocking the listlessness with which we face certain global crises, the issues we spurn in favour of watching our blue-green TVs? Is it a satire on sleepy community? I find it so fascinating!” And Tod turns slowly around, and he smiles, but he cannot tell. He waggles his silent tongue inside his mouth and walks back home.

Go To Sleep Suburbia, sings the boy at the gate, empty of all but desire.

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Oddlyangelic [2010-02-06 23:06:49 +0000 UTC]

This is really stunning. There's such a dreamy feeling to it, and I really agree with whoever it was that said this sounded musical. There's just... a soft little rhythm to it that adds so much.

great job.

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TheDeathofAramis [2008-07-31 01:24:49 +0000 UTC]

This was really beautiful.
I think that in a way people who can't talk know more.

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tolcom6 [2008-05-10 12:17:24 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed the story, looking forward to future work.

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saturnangel [2008-04-23 07:03:16 +0000 UTC]

I think I'm going to go out and paint "Go To Sleep Suburbia" on some things now.

Seriously though, very curious little story. It makes you ask questions, but in a good way.

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lobsterlarry [2008-04-23 05:06:12 +0000 UTC]

wow...amazing!

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NimElf [2008-04-23 04:54:58 +0000 UTC]

this is so well done; really very excellent! How did you put the banner at the top of the page?

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1pen [2008-04-23 04:33:14 +0000 UTC]

I think what I notice first and what I love about this is the rhythm...it is almost...sondheim-ish (as in Stephen Sondheim) whose music/lyrics often convey a frantic touch of dissonance.

Congrats on the DD.

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mind-thief [2008-04-23 04:03:16 +0000 UTC]

*orgasm*

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blueAkemi [2008-04-23 03:49:10 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is so beautiful

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imagine-like-crazy [2008-04-23 03:33:24 +0000 UTC]

i love it.

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arachibutyrophobic [2008-04-23 03:02:40 +0000 UTC]

your writing style reminds me, somehow, fight club and incident of the dog in the night-time. urban, down to the point, lots of action and deep meaning without hitting the reader over the head with it.

a real kudos.

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KaidaHaruko [2008-04-23 02:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I loved the way the words flowed together. Great job.

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black-cat-obsession [2008-04-23 02:20:18 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. Very original. I love it.

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Voodoo2U [2008-04-23 01:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow

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Infinite-Characters [2008-04-23 01:21:02 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful. I always appreciate beautiful writing as I am a writer myself. Congratulations!

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halogenimageX-2 [2008-04-23 00:56:47 +0000 UTC]

this is most likely the best thing i have read here on DA. it is so beautiful, and it makes so much sense at the end. the boys character is so adorable and unassuming... your repetition of the use of tod/God and O's really helps tie it together. and i like that it is relatively short and grabs your attention without asking too much from you.

super job.

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pincusion [2008-04-23 00:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Stunning. Simply stunning. Well done.

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MrPe-aCe [2008-04-22 23:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Wish I couldd add deviations.

Yours is pretty good fiction.

Keep up the good

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queenserena12345 [2008-04-22 22:29:28 +0000 UTC]

.O. I am very surprised that no one has really commented on this in the long time that this work has been up. This piece really speaks to me. When I was a freshman in high school, there was a deaf boy in my math class. He was the smartest, nicest kid that I had ever met. But, I could not fully talk to him, and for me to stop and write him something would take time.

I wish I had read this all those years ago, that everyone has a voice inside of them, and that you can't always say it yourself. It does speak true for everyone in the world, that there is something that we want to say, but we just can't.
Thank you so much. :3 It is a beautiful piece that took my breath away.

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dork9368 [2008-04-22 22:29:26 +0000 UTC]

this made my jaw drop.
you're prose curls like tendrils of poetry.
ahh, it makes me inspired.
*sigh*
i can't even critique this, it's soooo good..

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demonika [2008-04-22 22:04:14 +0000 UTC]

This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.

Thank you for sharing it.

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HardcoreFroth [2008-04-22 21:28:54 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely amazing.
I love it.
+fav!

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reiinbow [2008-04-22 21:26:24 +0000 UTC]

I asked this like...a bajillion times but: How do you put pictures on the side of literature?
The yellow and black lines?

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[link] I hope this is what you're asking for...

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reiinbow In reply to nykwholet [2008-04-24 21:35:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah thanks!
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You saved me from pestering innocent people. :3

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nykwholet In reply to reiinbow [2008-04-26 02:22:21 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

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NeverForget2394 [2008-04-22 21:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting... This is the first piece of prose that I have read in a long while that has actually made me think as to its basic core meaning... And as everyone else has said, I love the lyrical properties of it as well.

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EternallyDejected [2008-04-22 20:56:40 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome. I love it

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LesCheveux [2008-04-22 20:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting lyrical quality for speakng about one who is mute. I like this.

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DBI-ZnT [2008-04-22 20:49:02 +0000 UTC]

I has the 'Do not get'.

Explain please.

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ravenclawxwhitewolf [2008-04-22 20:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. It kept my attention, and made me wonder about it long after I was done. Congrats on the DD, by the way. This definitely deserves it.

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stillherelove [2008-04-22 20:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic. Your writing is quirky and imaginative. I love this.

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captainAurelie [2008-04-22 20:14:47 +0000 UTC]

excellent. : )

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yamacheero [2008-04-22 19:52:56 +0000 UTC]

This makes me feel something... I'm not quite sure what it is, it's a good thing... but I don't know what it is

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gr8lilchic [2008-04-22 19:42:42 +0000 UTC]

I agree with ~freakXbodysoul , I thought of 'The Curious Incident..' too!
I really like this. I can't explain why. It's just so...intriguing.

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freakXbodysoul [2008-04-22 18:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time". It's a very good piece. I want you to write book so I can buy it and make me happy and you rich.

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Juny [2008-04-22 18:06:32 +0000 UTC]

You have a beautiful way with words.

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HugQueen [2008-04-22 17:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is so intense; every line is crafted beautifuly! I love it.

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colliderscape [2008-04-22 16:41:46 +0000 UTC]

fantastic work..

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hanmilo [2008-04-22 16:32:50 +0000 UTC]

A perfect portrait of the denied thought in the minds of the overworked. Thank you for your work.

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LadyTara [2008-04-22 15:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Instant fave, this is incredible writing

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rynhaj [2008-04-22 15:25:36 +0000 UTC]

i like this a lot!
one question: how do you get the picture at the top??

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