Comments: 89
Phlark [2013-07-10 07:24:24 +0000 UTC]
I had reached the end of the line this would really interest you im headed straight to the top dont hesitate trying this out
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seyyah61 [2013-07-10 06:42:00 +0000 UTC]
I kept telling myself things would get better my expectations were more than exceeded this is proof that miracles do exist seriously consider this
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theinvisiblegurl [2013-07-10 05:15:44 +0000 UTC]
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skankdeea [2013-07-10 01:41:51 +0000 UTC]
I had tried everything this came at perfect timing for me this filled a void in my life you would excell at this
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ikarishinji80 [2013-07-09 20:15:51 +0000 UTC]
I had reached the end of the line now I can splurge whenever I want these days people come to me for money you are definitely cut out for this
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yooyooster [2013-07-09 08:31:41 +0000 UTC]
Easy Money At Home - Try It Now!
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lassegorm [2013-07-09 05:32:47 +0000 UTC]
Look what i found
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TheDeathofAramis [2008-07-31 01:24:49 +0000 UTC]
This was really beautiful.
I think that in a way people who can't talk know more.
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tolcom6 [2008-05-10 12:17:24 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoyed the story, looking forward to future work.
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lobsterlarry [2008-04-23 05:06:12 +0000 UTC]
wow...amazing!
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NimElf [2008-04-23 04:54:58 +0000 UTC]
this is so well done; really very excellent! How did you put the banner at the top of the page?
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1pen [2008-04-23 04:33:14 +0000 UTC]
I think what I notice first and what I love about this is the rhythm...it is almost...sondheim-ish (as in Stephen Sondheim) whose music/lyrics often convey a frantic touch of dissonance.
Congrats on the DD.
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blueAkemi [2008-04-23 03:49:10 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is so beautiful
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arachibutyrophobic [2008-04-23 03:02:40 +0000 UTC]
your writing style reminds me, somehow, fight club and incident of the dog in the night-time. urban, down to the point, lots of action and deep meaning without hitting the reader over the head with it.
a real kudos.
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KaidaHaruko [2008-04-23 02:40:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I loved the way the words flowed together. Great job.
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black-cat-obsession [2008-04-23 02:20:18 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. Very original. I love it.
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Infinite-Characters [2008-04-23 01:21:02 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful. I always appreciate beautiful writing as I am a writer myself. Congratulations!
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halogenimageX-2 [2008-04-23 00:56:47 +0000 UTC]
this is most likely the best thing i have read here on DA. it is so beautiful, and it makes so much sense at the end. the boys character is so adorable and unassuming... your repetition of the use of tod/God and O's really helps tie it together. and i like that it is relatively short and grabs your attention without asking too much from you.
super job.
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pincusion [2008-04-23 00:14:16 +0000 UTC]
Stunning. Simply stunning. Well done.
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MrPe-aCe [2008-04-22 23:27:50 +0000 UTC]
Wish I couldd add deviations.
Yours is pretty good fiction.
Keep up the good
Oh
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queenserena12345 [2008-04-22 22:29:28 +0000 UTC]
.O. I am very surprised that no one has really commented on this in the long time that this work has been up. This piece really speaks to me. When I was a freshman in high school, there was a deaf boy in my math class. He was the smartest, nicest kid that I had ever met. But, I could not fully talk to him, and for me to stop and write him something would take time.
I wish I had read this all those years ago, that everyone has a voice inside of them, and that you can't always say it yourself. It does speak true for everyone in the world, that there is something that we want to say, but we just can't.
Thank you so much. :3 It is a beautiful piece that took my breath away.
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dork9368 [2008-04-22 22:29:26 +0000 UTC]
this made my jaw drop.
you're prose curls like tendrils of poetry.
ahh, it makes me inspired.
*sigh*
i can't even critique this, it's soooo good..
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demonika [2008-04-22 22:04:14 +0000 UTC]
This is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.
Thank you for sharing it.
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HardcoreFroth [2008-04-22 21:28:54 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely amazing.
I love it.
+fav!
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reiinbow [2008-04-22 21:26:24 +0000 UTC]
I asked this like...a bajillion times but: How do you put pictures on the side of literature?
The yellow and black lines?
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NeverForget2394 [2008-04-22 21:23:35 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting... This is the first piece of prose that I have read in a long while that has actually made me think as to its basic core meaning... And as everyone else has said, I love the lyrical properties of it as well.
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LesCheveux [2008-04-22 20:54:50 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting lyrical quality for speakng about one who is mute. I like this.
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DBI-ZnT [2008-04-22 20:49:02 +0000 UTC]
I has the 'Do not get'.
Explain please.
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ravenclawxwhitewolf [2008-04-22 20:46:34 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. It kept my attention, and made me wonder about it long after I was done. Congrats on the DD, by the way. This definitely deserves it.
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stillherelove [2008-04-22 20:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic. Your writing is quirky and imaginative. I love this.
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yamacheero [2008-04-22 19:52:56 +0000 UTC]
This makes me feel something... I'm not quite sure what it is, it's a good thing... but I don't know what it is
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gr8lilchic [2008-04-22 19:42:42 +0000 UTC]
I agree with ~freakXbodysoul , I thought of 'The Curious Incident..' too!
I really like this. I can't explain why. It's just so...intriguing.
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freakXbodysoul [2008-04-22 18:37:17 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time". It's a very good piece. I want you to write book so I can buy it and make me happy and you rich.
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Juny [2008-04-22 18:06:32 +0000 UTC]
You have a beautiful way with words.
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HugQueen [2008-04-22 17:12:45 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is so intense; every line is crafted beautifuly! I love it.
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hanmilo [2008-04-22 16:32:50 +0000 UTC]
A perfect portrait of the denied thought in the minds of the overworked. Thank you for your work.
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LadyTara [2008-04-22 15:35:35 +0000 UTC]
Instant fave, this is incredible writing
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rynhaj [2008-04-22 15:25:36 +0000 UTC]
i like this a lot!
one question: how do you get the picture at the top??
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