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Published: 2007-08-28 02:22:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 48; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Dark Song

: Chorus:

I just want to see a little blood
Is that too much to ask?
Just a little blood
So I can bask in the glory of my vic-tor-y
And so what if it’s a little gory
That makes it all the better

: Verse:

Let’s just start with a little cut
But, where?
Maybe the wrist, the neck, or the gut
Go ahead and jeer
While I cheer
On all your vows
Of revenge
And take a bow
Oh, I love how you cringe
At the very sight
Of this beautiful knife
And I’m sorry for not taking your life
But, that would take all the fun away
And end my day

: Chorus:

: Verse 2:

Tra-lala-lala
A little hum as I cut out your spleen
Mwa-haha-haha
A little laugh as you scream
Completely and totally in vain
I just love your pain
Give me more
Scream some more
I want more
Oh, the beautiful gore

: Chorus:

F.B.W. Aug. -07
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Comments: 11

Metalhead71 [2007-09-18 20:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Im actually going to switch on the distortion for my guitar and play to the beat I hear for this. What key would you like it in?

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FBW In reply to Metalhead71 [2007-09-18 23:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Um...ok...unexpected. Let's see...how about A. But, since you're doing it, have fun with it and choose whatever key you like best.

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Metalhead71 In reply to FBW [2007-09-20 19:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Ill load up A next time I do some practice, and oh believe me, I did.

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FBW In reply to Metalhead71 [2007-09-21 03:41:19 +0000 UTC]

Glad you had fun. I only chose A cause it's one of my favorite keys. C would probably be the other one. Anyway, just keep having fun.

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soccer8812 [2007-09-01 19:46:05 +0000 UTC]

It's only a little sadistic...hehe

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thexsharpestxlife [2007-08-30 21:26:57 +0000 UTC]

"And I'm sorry for not taking your life." Love that part. A little demented, aye? Yeah...just a tad, lol. Just a tad.

But hey, the world could always use some more darkness.

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FBW In reply to thexsharpestxlife [2007-08-31 00:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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omoimasuyo [2007-08-30 04:15:34 +0000 UTC]

Interesting.

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sn1pereye [2007-08-28 18:27:58 +0000 UTC]

The rhymes seem a bit easy (like all of mine when I bother with them). They just aren't overly creative. The idea is funny though, and I like it.

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FBW In reply to sn1pereye [2007-08-28 20:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Wasn't really trying to be complicated or anything. Simple satisfied me.

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sn1pereye In reply to FBW [2007-08-28 22:02:04 +0000 UTC]

That's how I feel about my poems, too lol.

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