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Copypasta from the Word document because lol what is handwriting. Why so tl;dr, self.

Name: Maxwell Allen
Age: 20
Hometown: Celadon City
Region: Kanto
Height: 6’0”
Weight: 192 lbs

Personality:

Maxwell has a mothering streak a mile wide, with an almost compulsive need to do things like clean and organize messes, straighten ties and collars, fetch people breakfast and nag them to eat healthy, et cetera. Likes being helpful and fussing over people. He is not actually OCD (he thinks)--the mothering and fussing is a habit that stems from a childhood spent with just his dad and no lady in the house. His dad is a good man and tries to be a good father, but he also happens to be a busy, absent-minded, and horrifically messy man. To keep their house from being engulfed trash-of-the-titans style, Max took up a good portion of the housework. This gradually extended to other chores. (End result: Max would probably make a good house husband: he cooks and cleans and knows how to mend clothes.)

He is fastidious and meticulous with his own work; tact restrains him from commenting on other people’s work. (Though that doesn’t stop him from agonizing over it quietly. Ever since his sister pointed it out to him, he tries to keep in mind that not everyone likes a fussy busybody up in their business, buuuuut....)

He likes to tease people, but whether he’s good at it or not is up in the air. He also has a tendency to refer to people by nicknames and use affectionate terms, whether he knows them well or not. He is stubbornly cheerful at times, and when not in full-blown mothering mode, can seem relatively quiet and mild-mannered.

He can be a bit of a coward, in a way--he tries to avoid both conflict and having to face his own problems, passive and deferential to other people as long as he thinks it’s about him and no one else. He is also claustrophobic, though hell if he knows why.

History:

He was born to a couple in New Bark Town, though his parents split up while he was too young to clearly remember it. His mom and fraternal twin sister stayed there, while his dad took him and moved to Celadon City. The two halves of the family remained in contact over the years, partly for the kid’s sakes (though, it wasn't like their parents really hated each other, after). Maxwell finally met his sister in person when they turned twelve--by that time, she’d become a Pokemon trainer and had been on the road for about a year. She surprised them with a visit out of the blue, and ended up staying with Max and their dad for a couple weeks. The siblings bonded pretty tightly in this time--they’d gotten along well enough, but were not particularly close before then. She gave him a Growlithe shortly before she left, as a belated birthday present, and though the Growlithe...really didn’t like him, he loved it.

(She is eternally embarrassed by the fact that her first big gift to him ended up trying to set him on fire a few times. He took it in stride after the first time and didn’t blame her, though he teases her about it from time to time.)

She inspired him to become a trainer himself--a combination of that first visit, her well-meaning but troublesome gift, and her happiness at being a trainer. He went on trips to other cities and regions during breaks and such, but didn’t really start traveling full-time until he completed high school, despite his dad’s encouragement. (Sidenote: he still calls his dad every day. Worrywart.) In the two years since then, he’s managed to get the rest of the Kanto badges (he collected some before then out of sheer necessity) and has visited Hoenn and Sinnoh. He’s also run into his sister on the road a handful of times; they tend to rib each other when together.

His interest in Ohana is mostly curiosity--it’s the first big tournament-thing he’s tried out for, and he’s never been to Ohana before. Also, a certain friend of his may or may not have insinuated that he would get his behind kicked six ways to Sunday, which he’s fairly sure is inaccurate, but anyway. Anyway.

Pokemon

Name: Bec
Gender: Male
Level: 85
Species: Growlithe
Ability: Flash Fire

Attacks
-Crunch
-Flare Blitz
-Flamethrower
-Flame Wheel

Item: Expert Belt

Max’s first pokemon, a birthday gift from his sister from the first time they met. Though it took a good while (and various shenanigans) for the Pokemon to warm up to him (because herpderp, he didn’t have any badges or anything at the time and neither of them realized that there might be a problem), Bec’s now pretty much one of his best friends. Bec is prickly and proud, staunchly loyal, and can be something of a jerkass with a heart of gold. Disdained his trainer at first, but--okay, he still kinda thinks he’s an idiot, but Max is Bec’s idiot, you know? Has a possessive streak and is easily jealous. Has all the delicacy and subtlety of a boot to the head.

Name: Ollie
Gender: Female
Level: 80
Species: Aipom
Ability: Run Away

Attacks
-Swift
-Scratch
-Double Hit
-Strength

Item: Lax Incense

Prankster. Something of a klepto, to Max’s eternal consternation. She quite literally fell into his lap in middle school, ganked his glasses, and lead him on a wild goose chase. After that, she followed him around and continually invited herself into his home, climbing into his windows and ambushing him outside the door. (During his middle school years, as various classmates will note, he developed something of a twitch and was jumpy for months). Though she did her best to bug him and push all his buttons, they ended up growing on each other like an itchy fungus. Max still isn’t quite sure what her problem was. (In truth, she just found his reactions hilarious.)

Name: Simon
Gender: Male
Level: 75
Species: Swellow
Ability: Guts

Attacks
-Fly
-Air Slash
-Aerial Ace
-Wing Attack

Item: Red Scarf

It’s Spock as a bird. Cool, logical, controlled. Max found him as a Tailow, injured, and took him in. He doesn’t know the full story, but assumes that Simon belonged to somebody, as a pet if not a trainer’s Pokemon because Tailow aren’t native to Kanto. However, the trainer never turned up, and Simon ended up quietly adopted into the family. A bastion of calm and sanity for which Max is eternally grateful.

Name: Trip
Gender: Male
Level: 72
Species: Furret
Ability: Keen Eye

Attacks
-Hyper Voice
-Slam
-Quick Attack
-Cut

Item: Shell Bell

Named for his tendency to trip as a wee Sentret, Trip is not the sharpest tack in the box, but he always means well. Dense when it comes to matters of the heart, and ungodly stubborn when it comes down to it. Trip is a clingy and affectionate invader of personal space. Always manages to be underfoot, somehow--Max has lost count of the times he has tripped or almost stepped on him. On the up-side, Trip doesn’t seem to hold it against him. On the down side, Max will always be a little paranoid when carrying Trip in his party, checking and double checking that the furret isn’t out of his Pokeball when he goes anywhere.

Name: June
Gender: Female
Level: 63
Species: Delcatty
Ability: Cute Charm

Attacks
-Dig
-Faint Attack
-DoubleSlap
-Wake-Up Slap

Item: Silk Scarf

A bit of a diva, with a fondness for the dramatic and flamboyant. Months and months of antics have made it hard for the others to take her seriously, and they tend to humor her and tease her by turns--at the very least, they tolerate her. Unfortunately for her, they also don’t usually trust her word, seeing her in a way similar to the boy who cried wolf. Max isn’t quite sure how the shy, sweet little Skitty he caught turned out like this, but he dotes on her just as he does his other Pokemon. (Sidenote: she makes him feel old, sometimes. Is this what having daughters is like.) Tsundere for Bec, but god help you if you tease her about that. Girl slaps pretty hard.

Name: Sammy
Gender: Female
Level: 52
Species: Pachirisu
Ability: Pickup

Attacks
-Hyper Fang
-Discharge
-Spark
-Swift

Item: Focus Band

Real gullible; the Mulder to Simon’s Scully. Excitable, childish, and active; she’s easy to startle and never sits still for more than ten minutes at a time. Has a tendency to overreact, with explosive results. Also has an inexplicable fascination with things other people would find dark and creepy. Shows the occasional flash of yangire ax-crazy, though she is genuinely very nice, otherwise.

For your Tv-troping pleasure:
Trash of the Titans - [link]
The Spock - [link]
Tsundere - [link]
Agent Scully - [link]
Agent Mulder - [link]
Yangire - [link]
Ax-Crazy - [link]

The sister: [link]

Slightly less squished version of his clothes: [link]

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Comments: 61

feelingwhimsy In reply to ??? [2011-02-10 18:08:28 +0000 UTC]

L-lol, I see! xD

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AngelicDragonPuppy In reply to feelingwhimsy [2011-02-11 23:43:10 +0000 UTC]

I guess we both failed hard at trying to comment/look at each other's pokemon stuff right off, ahahaha XD

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feelingwhimsy In reply to AngelicDragonPuppy [2011-02-11 23:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Always with the shenanigans. xD

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AngelicDragonPuppy In reply to feelingwhimsy [2011-02-12 03:16:24 +0000 UTC]

Yup yup! XD

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Droemar [2011-01-16 17:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Hey, congratulations on making it in!

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Droemar [2011-01-16 18:04:34 +0000 UTC]

!! Oh man, did I? o__o Thanks! And congrats to you too, man! \o/

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Ousuat-Csat [2011-01-11 05:26:23 +0000 UTC]

HEY! LET'S DO THE GEAR CHANGE MEME!!! O3O

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Ousuat-Csat [2011-01-13 00:52:28 +0000 UTC]

...we should get them to do a brofist across the meme. xD Which side do you want?

L-lol just posted this to myself, which isn't useful. Derp.

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Ousuat-Csat In reply to feelingwhimsy [2011-01-13 01:42:16 +0000 UTC]

YESH! You should get dibs on the side you want, then I'll draw my side and link you to a scrap that already has Danilo doing half of the brofist. That sound good?

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Ousuat-Csat [2011-01-13 01:52:59 +0000 UTC]

I guess I'll take the left, then. xD;

Alright! Should I put it together when I finish my half, or are you doing that?

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Ousuat-Csat In reply to feelingwhimsy [2011-01-13 03:08:19 +0000 UTC]

hrm... I think yours should be the one put into the BFOI, and I'll try and get my half done by tomorrow as quick as I can.

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Ousuat-Csat [2011-01-13 03:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Alright. \o No rush, man.

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Ousuat-Csat [2011-01-11 06:57:47 +0000 UTC]

O3O OKAY.

(Also: WHERE DOING IT MAN -shot-)

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feelingwhimsy In reply to feelingwhimsy [2011-01-13 00:51:43 +0000 UTC]

...we should get them to do a brofist across the meme. xD Which side do you want?

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feelingwhimsy In reply to feelingwhimsy [2011-01-13 00:51:53 +0000 UTC]

oh goddamnit

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Raifiel [2011-01-07 08:26:20 +0000 UTC]

lol, awesome. We are so brothas' from other mothas' now

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Raifiel [2011-01-07 18:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Sweet. xD -brofist?-

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Raifiel In reply to feelingwhimsy [2011-01-07 19:02:25 +0000 UTC]

*brofist'd*

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SpencerOfSpace [2010-12-31 18:55:57 +0000 UTC]

hes so cute! and I love the way you did the pokemon ^.^

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feelingwhimsy In reply to SpencerOfSpace [2010-12-31 23:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! \o/

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RadicalFred [2010-12-29 21:32:42 +0000 UTC]

He and Fred should cook together.

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feelingwhimsy In reply to RadicalFred [2010-12-29 22:14:57 +0000 UTC]

They should! Sounds like the end result would be tasty. :3

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RadicalFred In reply to feelingwhimsy [2010-12-30 01:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Agreed! And there would be no mess either! With their one-two-Punch they could rule the culinary world! Mwuahahaha!

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Eledora [2010-12-18 03:48:46 +0000 UTC]

No gym badges at that time... that is a very nice idea for explaining why a gift Pokemon would cause so much trouble! XD
It's also interesting that your character is so good at all the houseworks... he must have attracted a lot of girls on Ohana Island. I think my character's Rotoms would love him too so that they don't need to do housework anymore

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Eledora [2010-12-18 04:03:42 +0000 UTC]

I suppose he might. xD I'm kinda herpaderp about getting him out and socializing, whoops. ' ');;;

Lol, the Rotom brigade. Sir Housewife Max would be happy to lend a hand!

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Eledora In reply to feelingwhimsy [2010-12-19 15:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Maybe he can take advantage for being attractive in the battles! ^_^
Rotom brigade: Sir, please take us home to save us from our evil master! D:

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Eledora [2010-12-21 03:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Pffff. xD That would be interesting.

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Droemar [2010-12-16 22:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Very much liking this guy's personality. Nice balanced team, too!

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Droemar [2010-12-16 22:35:57 +0000 UTC]

! Thanks! \o

L-lol is it a balanced team really. I just kind of did whatever, haha. ;;;

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Arriscas [2010-12-12 02:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Man, how come your character is so lovable? XD (Motherly trait is love ~ <3) He sure is a pretty interesting one!
Hope our characters get to meet! And good luck in the BFOI!

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Arriscas [2010-12-12 03:37:40 +0000 UTC]

...perhaps it is the apron, idk. xD Thanks! And yeah that sounds like it would be cool. \o/

Good luck to you too! o/ Sybil sounds cute.

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DeepFade [2010-11-29 01:32:56 +0000 UTC]

I must say that Maxwell is my favorite so far! That bio an interesting read.

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feelingwhimsy In reply to DeepFade [2010-11-29 03:05:17 +0000 UTC]

/// Thanks! I'm glad you think it was interesting kinda worried about being too generic, but don't want to be over the top = mild dilemma, aha. ;;;

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Trainer48 [2010-11-29 00:56:19 +0000 UTC]

he looks awesome, he'd be a great friend to have on the islands, he could cook and mend everything. good luck in the competition, I hope we'll meet up at Ohana

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Trainer48 [2010-11-29 03:08:44 +0000 UTC]

\o Thanks! Ahhhh, and good luck to you too! While lurking the group I saw Aidan's profile and I gotta say, he sounds cute. xD

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Trainer48 In reply to feelingwhimsy [2010-11-29 05:11:00 +0000 UTC]

wow, thanks XD

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Ike-angel [2010-11-28 23:14:34 +0000 UTC]

Love the character! He's a lot like the character I'm working on. I hope I get to role play with ya sometime! Once I finish the darn application.

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Ike-angel [2010-11-28 23:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like they'd get along like a house on fire. xD And that sounds fun! You'll just need to remind me whenever you want RPs, because I forget easily. lllorz

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Ike-angel In reply to feelingwhimsy [2010-11-29 00:30:56 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm gonna have to watch you, so I remember. I forget easily too... Are you my good twin?

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Ike-angel [2010-11-29 00:42:59 +0000 UTC]

That could be possible. xD

/bookmarks page

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Sammygotswagger [2010-11-28 19:15:38 +0000 UTC]

he's really cool i hope him and my OC can be friends
[link]

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Sammygotswagger [2010-11-28 19:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! xD And yay, friends! That would be nice. xD

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Sammygotswagger In reply to feelingwhimsy [2010-11-28 19:46:35 +0000 UTC]

yes it would and your absolutely welcome

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Agrotera-Thanatos [2010-11-28 19:13:34 +0000 UTC]

Your character's pretty cool X3 And Bec's a cutie~

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Agrotera-Thanatos [2010-11-28 19:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! xD L-lol, he is a cute little grouchy thing, isn't he?

And thanks for the fav! \o

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Agrotera-Thanatos In reply to feelingwhimsy [2010-11-28 19:39:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome C: Hey, at least you don't have the mentally unstable Eevee <<>> Like I do |D

You're welcome again c: Max has a cool past X3

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Agrotera-Thanatos [2010-11-28 19:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Point. xD I kinda wonder how many crazycake pokemon there'll be in this tourney. xD

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Agrotera-Thanatos In reply to feelingwhimsy [2010-11-28 19:53:06 +0000 UTC]

X3 Well, I know of one person's Kabutops and I have a Pichu head-over-heels in love/jealous/possessive over my Garchomp.

You know Grell from Kuroshitsuji?
She's like that.

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feelingwhimsy In reply to Agrotera-Thanatos [2010-11-28 19:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Pffffhaha, oh god. xD That sounds like fun.

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Agrotera-Thanatos In reply to feelingwhimsy [2010-11-28 19:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah c:
Sad thing is, it hasn't occurred to her that
A) Her Thunderbolt doesn't work on female Dragon Pokemon
B) She'll never be able to breed with the Garchomp

|D

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